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Joru Aur Daru - 31st August 2014, 09:19 PM
Joru aur Daru pe lo ji tazi nazm pesh hai......(sharabi ki nazr mein)
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Ek jab rulati hai dooji chain ki neend sulati hai ,
Ek jab deti zakhm dooji marham lagaati hai.

Ek ki daant sun sun ke tot.ta dil bar bar,
Dooji ke sang milta toote dilon ko karar.

Ek ki kaid mein tarapta hun umr bhar ,
Dooji us kaid se baar 2 nizaat dilaati hai.

Ek jo badal jaati chalte hue waqt ke saath ,
Dooji her waqt evergreen nazar aati hai.

Ek hai jisko dekh ker her waqt char jata bukhar ,
Dooji ke pass aane se chegre pe aa jata khumar.


khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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31st August 2014, 11:20 PM
Hahahahahaha !!!!! bahaut khoob Hamdam ji !!!! Very entertaining ... and very insightful too

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31st August 2014, 11:52 PM
khoob kahaa miyaaN, jeete rahiye

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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

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31st August 2014, 11:57 PM
hahahaha....

Sanjay jii,,

Bohat khoob....
issey aap humorous shayri meiN bhi post kar sakte the!

Likhte rahiye,,

DuaooN ke saath,

*hSn* : parStaar

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kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
   
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1st September 2014, 01:22 AM
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Joru aur Daru pe lo ji tazi nazm pesh hai......(sharabi ki nazr mein)
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Ek jab rulati hai dooji chain ki neend sulati hai ,
Ek jab deti zakhm dooji marham lagaati hai.

Ek ki daant sun sun ke tot.ta dil bar bar,
Dooji ke sang milta toote dilon ko karar.

Ek ki kaid mein tarapta hun umr bhar ,
Dooji us kaid se baar 2 nizaat dilaati hai.

Ek jo badal jaati chalte hue waqt ke saath ,
Dooji her waqt evergreen nazar aati hai.

Ek hai jisko dekh ker her waqt char jata bukhar ,
Dooji ke pass aane se chegre pe aa jata khumar.

Hahaha.........hilarious...lolz...



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Hahahahahaha !!!!! bahaut khoob Hamdam ji !!!! Very entertaining ... and very insightful too
Zarra sahib ..aap ko insightful laga humara andaaz ..bhai
delightful hi rehne dein kyon ki sharab kabhi mere inside
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Sanjayji i hope aapki joru ki nazar is nazm par na pade

Bahot maze ki nazm hui hai dheron daad qubool kijiye
Shukriya Naaz...meri begum per bhi le tau usko ghum
nahi hoga ....kyonkee main tau abhi tak maikhane ka pata
dhoond raha hun...I dont drink


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khoob kahaa miyaaN, jeete rahiye
Shukriya Maikash sahib aapko humara khayal pasand aya


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hahahaha....

Sanjay jii,,

Bohat khoob....
issey aap humorous shayri meiN bhi post kar sakte the!

Likhte rahiye,,

DuaooN ke saath,
Shukriya Hasan bhai ...Yaar Sharab pe kum posts aati hain ,
isliye yahan daal di.ye post.
Humorous shayri mein Ek shayar ko shrandhli.arpit ki.hai , zara
gaur farmayein.. Aur apni raye batayein


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Zainy ji bahut bahut shukriya..Acha laga jaan kar ki aapko pasand aya Joru
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Joru aur Daru pe lo ji tazi nazm pesh hai......(sharabi ki nazr mein)
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Ek jab rulati hai dooji chain ki neend sulati hai ,
Ek jab deti zakhm dooji marham lagaati hai.

Ek ki daant sun sun ke tot.ta dil bar bar,
Dooji ke sang milta toote dilon ko karar.

Ek ki kaid mein tarapta hun umr bhar ,
Dooji us kaid se baar 2 nizaat dilaati hai.

Ek jo badal jaati chalte hue waqt ke saath ,
Dooji her waqt evergreen nazar aati hai.

Ek hai jisko dekh ker her waqt char jata bukhar ,
Dooji ke pass aane se chegre pe aa jata khumar.
Mazaa aa gaya..................

Bohut khoob. Anu ko mat sunaiyega, bigad jayenge.

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6th September 2014, 10:00 PM
Bahut khoob sanjay ji........


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Mazaa aa gaya..................

Bohut khoob. Anu ko mat sunaiyega, bigad jayenge.
Sarika ji
...shukriya jo aapko.humara khayal.pasand aya..

Rahi.Anubhav ke bigarne ki baat ...dont worry he is in your safe hands


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Bahut khoob sanjay ji........
Many Many thanx Madhu ji....o


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Ek Purani peshkash jo ki technicalities se kafi door hai , phir se sanjha karne ka man kiya .
Zara gaur farmayein Joru aur daru ka fatal combination

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hhahahahahaha kyaa kahne waahhh bhai waaaahhhhh

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hhahahahahaha kyaa kahne waahhh bhai waaaahhhhh

kaafi experience waale aap nazar aate hain sanjay ji............
Shoaib bhai humein apna koi experience nahiN , kyonki hum tau jaam se kosoN door haiN .. Yeh tau aap jaise bhai logon ki mohabbat hai , ki unke tajurbe apni kalam meiN band kar diye janab ..ha ha

Hum tau ankoN se peene pilane wale haiN ,
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Sehgal saahab, Namaskar.

Wohi sada bahaar andaaz, wohi natkhat aur chutkeela, khatta meetha lehza, wohi asar aapki mazahiya shayari ka.. Be had chulbula.

Chalte jaayein isi tarha, khush karte jaayein isi tarha.

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Sehgal saahab, Namaskar.

Wohi sada bahaar andaaz, wohi natkhat aur chutkeela, khatta meetha lehza, wohi asar aapki mazahiya shayari ka.. Be had chulbula.

Chalte jaayein isi tarha, khush karte jaayein isi tarha.

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Jagdish bhai ....aap ka shukriya jo aap ne meri koshish ko pasand kiya.

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Waah sanjay jee....kya likha hai...joru aur daru ka comparison accha laga...


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