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kaun kehta hai mohabbat ka janaazaa nikla - 19th February 2012, 02:34 PM

kaun kehta hai mohabbat ka janaazaa nikla
baat itni si hai, apna bhi paraaya nikla

umr-e-rafta ko bhulaaoon to bhulaaoon kaise
bazm-e-tanhai mein har dam wo zamaana nikla

khat likhe lakh magar laut ke aaye saare
jo kisi ne na padha aisa risaala nikla

aadmi kaun yahaan, dev kise kehte hain
jis ko dekha vahi patthar se taraasha nikla

chaal hum aisi chale, maat hamari tay thi
jis pe hamla kiya vo sirf piyaada nikla

thi khumaari-e-mohabbat to laga dil gulshan
hosh aaya to vahi baag kharaaba nikla

aaj kal log, 'bhanwar', bhakt hue jaate hain
ke sar-e-koo-e-kharaabat shivaala nikla
   
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20th February 2012, 07:25 PM

WELCOME TO SDC.....

chaal hum aisi chale, maat hamari tay thi
jis pe hamla kiya vo sirf piyaada nikla

thi khumaari-e-mohabbat to laga dil gulshan
hosh aaya to vahi baag kharaaba nikla

WAH!!...BOHAT KHOOB!!...........




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21st February 2012, 02:42 PM

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kaun kehta hai mohabbat ka janaazaa nikla
baat itni si hai, apna bhi paraaya nikla

umr-e-rafta ko bhulaaoon to bhulaaoon kaise
bazm-e-tanhai mein har dam wo zamaana nikla

khat likhe lakh magar laut ke aaye saare
jo kisi ne na padha aisa risaala nikla

aadmi kaun yahaan, dev kise kehte hain
jis ko dekha vahi patthar se taraasha nikla

chaal hum aisi chale, maat hamari tay thi
jis pe hamla kiya vo sirf piyaada nikla

thi khumaari-e-mohabbat to laga dil gulshan
hosh aaya to vahi baag kharaaba nikla

aaj kal log, 'bhanwar', bhakt hue jaate hain
ke sar-e-koo-e-kharaabat shivaala nikla

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Dil kush hogaya miyaan aapki yeh shayri padhke

aadmi kaun yahaan, dev kise kehte hain
jis ko dekha vahi patthar se taraasha nikla


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kaun kehta hai mohabbat ka janaazaa nikla
baat itni si hai, apna bhi paraaya nikla

umr-e-rafta ko bhulaaoon to bhulaaoon kaise
bazm-e-tanhai mein har dam wo zamaana nikla

khat likhe lakh magar laut ke aaye saare
jo kisi ne na padha aisa risaala nikla

aadmi kaun yahaan, dev kise kehte hain
jis ko dekha vahi patthar se taraasha nikla

chaal hum aisi chale, maat hamari tay thi
jis pe hamla kiya vo sirf piyaada nikla

thi khumaari-e-mohabbat to laga dil gulshan
hosh aaya to vahi baag kharaaba nikla

aaj kal log, 'bhanwar', bhakt hue jaate hain
ke sar-e-koo-e-kharaabat shivaala nikla
bahot khoob
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