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Love Sath Paana Hain Unka - 10th January 2014, 10:56 AM

_Ae Khuda__ Mere Gunnah Ki Saza Dilana Unse
Jo Kiya Maine Unke Sath Har Us Sitam Ki Saza Dilana Unse,

Yun Hi Dard-e-Taklif Mein Judi rahi Zindagi Meri Unse
Har Zakham Hum Bharte Gaye Zindagi Mein Unke,

Wo Mangate Rahe Pyar Ki Kuch Bundein Hum Se
Hum Hain Ki AAnsoon Ki Barish Giraate Gaye Unpe,

Pal Pal Ki Khushiyan Roothi Huyi Thi Unse
Zindagi Mein Veeraniyan Bhi Mili Use, Viraasat Me Hum Se,

Na Jaane Kyun Roothe Huye The Hum Itne Unse
Wo Waqt-Dar-Waqt Tarapte Rahe Akele Me Hum Se,

Wo Ishq-e-Raah Mein Girti Rahi
Zakham-e-Marham Ki Umeed Me Humse,

Unko Samajh Nahi Paye Hum Bas Dete Rahe Zakham
Zakhami Hi Khudi Se,

Kabhi Bhi Na Socha Tha Itna Karti Hai Pyar Wo Humse
Sanam-e-Zindagi Mein Jakar Dekha To Sirf Hum Hi The Duaon Me Unke,

Ehasas Huaa Jab Humko Pyar Ka Unse
Phir Na Jaane Kyun Zindagi Mein Haar Gaye Wo Khud Se.


   
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10th January 2014, 02:00 PM

Masoomji.............
She'r ek se ek badkar hai...............
Magar ye gazal kee shailee me nahi aatee............
Agar radeef ko dhyan me naa rakhe, phir bhee iske kaafiye aur beher kharij hai..........
Zidd bhai ne achchhee samajh dee hai ghazal likhne pe use ek baar gaur farmaiye.......

Aadaab.......... Adil



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10th January 2014, 04:00 PM

Okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk Sukriyan...........Mai Gour Farmauga..........................................
   
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15th January 2014, 09:28 PM

very nice........keep it up....daad kubul karein..



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