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kaise main tujhse DOOR chala jata... -
15th December 2004, 12:20 AM
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bade dino baad phir hathon ne sath diya ....dil ke kuch jazbat phir pesh hai ... kosish hai ki ... jisse pyar ka izhar na kiya ho ... aur feeling kuch janam le le .. to usse door jate waqt kaisa lagta hai .. aur door na jakar jab woh izhar ke sath wapas lauta hai apne mehboob ke pas to kya kehta hai... use kaisa lagta hai... bas yahi likhne ki koshish hai ... aapke nazar kar raha hun .... umeed hai aapko pasan aayga ... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Har lamha mujhe khamosh hai nazar aata… Door tujhse gar hota to main mar jata… Aaj ek judai ki lehar ne tode mere kinare To yun kaise main tujhse door chala jata… Aasaan hota wo safar jispe nikla tha kabhi… Kash tujh sang gujari raton ko main bhool pata… Rah ke kanton pe teri aah! Ne rasta roka To yun kaise main tujhse door chala jata… Pichli Raat kyun simti rahi ous ke pehlu main… Kash apna afsana tu yun is kadar na gungunata… Mehkti raat ki raani ne diya tera paigam mujhe To yun kaise main tujhse door chala jata… Waqt bhi aaj badh jaye aage himmat nahi usme… Kash wo har lamhe ko dil main na rakh ke jata… Teri umeed thi mujhse judi ye pata jab chala … To yun kaise main tujhse door chala jata … Aaj kadam lauta liye hai manjil pe aake maine… kash apne ashqon ko pehle main samajh jata.. karta hun tujhse”saccha_pyar” aaj maine jana.. to yun kaise main tujhse door chala jata …. kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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Will try to come back*Adhouri jo hain :) -
15th December 2004, 01:23 AM
Keise jiioun main youn Tere biin~Tu jo nahin tou Tere biin mera jii na lage~ye bhoul keise karoun main Main bhoul jaaoun Tujhko Main khho bhi jaaoun kahin tou Tu dhundhlena mujhko~Tera mera Mera Tera rishta bana Sab se juda**Hari Haran Jee ki aawaaz mein*Iss waqt main baas itna hi kehpaaoungi ki: Dil ki gehraaion se bohot bohot shukriya aur Daad quboul kijiyega**I hope everyone can learn~(feel) something & also use in their life too*Dil ko itna chholiya hain ki kehne ke liye lafz kaam hain...aur ye aansoun, kabhi kabhi younhi biin boulaaye aa jaati hain
 But I Loved Your writing**Younhi likhte rahiyega*Khush rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat chahoungi...Aapna khayaal rakhiyega...God bless You. Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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15th December 2004, 04:36 AM
Waqt bhi aaj badh jaye aage himmat nahi usme…
Kash wo har lamhe ko dil main na rakh ke jata… Teri umeed thi mujhse judi ye pata jab chala … To yun kaise main tujhse door chala jata … Aaj kadam lauta liye hai manjil pe aake maine… kash apne ashqon ko pehle main samajh jata.. karta hun tujhse”saccha_pyar” aaj maine jana.. to yun kaise main tujhse door chala jata …. Kunal ji... Kya khoub likha hai aapne...Har ek shabd teer bankar jigar ko ghaayal kar gaya...Daad kabul kijiye... Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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15th December 2004, 02:48 PM
kunal ji ,
kya khubh likha hum to deewane ho gaye hai apke aur apke shayri ke kasam se aacha laga aapki shayri padh ke aur yeh to bata dete ki kisko dhyan main rakhke likhki gayi hai shayri sach bolu aapki shayri ke samne hamari wahwah wahwah bhi kam hai bus yunhi likhte rahiye bye kunal aaapki sirf aapki pallo teri asar ki jhalak hun main... aaoun nazar chehre se "palu"... teri seerat ki khanak hun mai... |
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Bura na maniyega...* |
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Bura na maniyega...* -
15th December 2004, 07:05 PM
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthr...threadid=29118 Mujhe tou kuch yehi mehsous houi...Aap Sabhi, zarour wohin dard samajh paaenge
Iss waqt baas itna hi...Khush rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat chahoungi...Take Care...God bless You. Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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16th December 2004, 03:12 PM
Pichli Raat kyun simti rahi ous ke pehlu main…
Kash apna afsana tu yun is kadar na gungunata… Mehkti raat ki raani ne diya tera paigam mujhe To yun kaise main tujhse door chala jata… Waqt bhi aaj badh jaye aage himmat nahi usme… Kash wo har lamhe ko dil main na rakh ke jata… Teri umeed thi mujhse judi ye pata jab chala … To yun kaise main tujhse door chala jata … Kunal! Bohot khoob! Bahaut acchi lagi tumhari yeh rachna bhi... too good...Yun to poori rachna acchi hai.. par yeh shabd kuccha zyada acche lage... Do keep writing.. tc hope to see you sooon now Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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hi -
16th December 2004, 04:48 PM
hi kunal ji bade dino ke baad shayri com p[e aap nazar aaye or bhut hi achi poem pesh ki hai aapne aap itne din kha the
or is bar itne dino ke baad kuch likha hai or haa lagta hai aap khani ka aage ka part likhna hi bhul gye hai so use jald hi post kare or itni achi poem likhne ke liye humare daad kabul kare ok bye |
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How are You :) -
16th December 2004, 05:00 PM
Dear Sachha Pyaar Jee, Ek baat baataiye...Aapne Izhar kardiya hain keya
Just asking Jee, please don't mind*Aur haan, Ab ye bhi likhdijiyega ki keise Wo izhar karta hain(in real life) It should be easy for Him because He knows she Loves Him, right?Meri Duwaaen hamesha rahegi**Likhte rahiyega**Khush rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...Take Care...God bless You. Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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Re: Will try to come back*Adhouri jo hain :) |
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Re: Will try to come back*Adhouri jo hain :) -
17th December 2004, 12:14 AM
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maine ye gana nahi suna hai .... par wakai main kuch lines ne hi ehsaas kara diya hai ki ... wakai ye gana bohat accha bana hoga ... well aapki daad to humne le li ... par shukriya kyun ,,.... aap yun na kahe ki kehne ke liye lafz nahi  aap nahi kahengi to koun kahega ... well shimul ji ansoo kabhi kabhi bin bulaye nahi .. humesha hi bin bulaye aate hai .. koi nahi chahta ki ashqon ke samundar main gote lagata rahe .,... well ansoo khushi main bhi a jate hai ... accha laga ki aapko mera likha hua pasand aata hai ... well jaisa har bar likhta hun aaj bhi yahi kahunga ... ap sath deti rehna main likhta rahunga ... aapki duaon mainasar ho yahi kamna hai ....aap bhi apna khayal rakhiye ,.... shukriya ... yun tareef se nawazne ke liye apka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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17th December 2004, 12:16 AM
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shukriya kalam pe aane ke liye ... itni garam tareeke se tareef karne ke liye ... koshish karounga ki aise hi aapke dil ko chuta rahun ... kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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17th December 2004, 12:21 AM
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shukriya ... yun kalam pe aane ke liye ... aur is kadar mujhe apne pyar se nawazne ke liye ... sach tum jaisa sathi ho to jindgi ka safar katne main koi dikkat na ho ... well ye shayri maine kiske upar likhi hai ye ek raaz hai ,... jo aapko to pata chal hi jayega ... aur han aapki wah se hi meri shayri ka wazood hai ... tum sath dena main likhta rahunga ... tumhara apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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Re: Bura na maniyega...* -
17th December 2004, 12:23 AM
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aapka gana maine padh liya hai aur reply bhi kiya hai.... shukriya ... yun maan dene ke liye .... aapka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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17th December 2004, 12:25 AM
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shukriya ... aapko pasand aayi meri rachna ... mujhe bohat khushin hui ,... well jo lines sect ki aapne ... neeche wala mera bhi fav hai ... main likhta rahunga aapke sath ke sath ... han kal milenge ... aapka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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17th December 2004, 12:28 AM
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wakai main arse jaisa waqt gujar gaya hai ... yahan aaye ... well accha laga ki tumhe meri shayri pasand aayi ,... well pichle dino bhai sahab ki marrige thi to vyast tha thod a... ab free hun ... kahani aage likhne ki bhi khasi koshish ki .. par humesha koi na koi kaam nikal aaya .. waqt lagte hi post karounga aage ... aapki daad teh dil se kabool kar li humne ... aapka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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17th December 2004, 12:40 AM
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mera nam kunal hhai ... waise sccha pyar bhi kaho to chalega ... par ye kya itna private sawal yun open main :O ye acchi bat nahi ... khair doston ka to haq hai .. bata dounga apko bhi .. itni jaldi kya hai ... aur han aaage likhne ki koshish karounga ... waise main kayi bar likh chuka hun ... izhar ko lekar ... par shayad ye thoda diffrent hi hoga ... koshish jaroor karunga ... aap bhi apna khayal rakhe ... aapka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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17th December 2004, 12:09 PM
tum to sachmein badal gaye.....doosri post bhi pyar bhari....acchi baat hain.........bahut hi accha likha hain tumne hamesha ki tarah....firse hum bhi kuch add kar dete hain.........Apni chahto to kaash main rok paata Ankhon se behte dard ko chupa paata. tumhari ek chuan ne pighla diya muhjhe.. to yun main kaise tujhse door chala jaata... hamesha aise hi likhte rehna... mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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18th December 2004, 03:32 PM
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sab mausam ka badalta rang hai .. badal hi jata hai ... accha laga ki tum yun sath de rahi ho ... main janta hun accha likha hai maine ... aur yumne to wakai kamal kar diya .. mohtarma .. sach tum hi meri dost banne ke kabil ho tabhi to ..... hahaha main aise hi likhta rahun iske liye sath dete rehna ... apne dost ka yun hi .... tumhara dost ... kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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20th December 2004, 05:01 PM
bhai ...
kaise is post se mehroom main reh jata gar reh jata to wakai main jhakam reh jata bhai kya likhun iske bare main... bas yahi ki aapne bohat hi acchi gazal likhi hai .. man hai ki ise gungunauuN meri daad teh dil se kabool kijiye ... aapka bhai raj bas raj hi raj |
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21st December 2004, 05:20 PM
Pyare Kunal,
Bhai kaafi acchha laga tumhara kalaam yaha paake aur parh ke. Haiiiii, kis khoobi se apne khayalo ka izhaar kiya hai is kalaam mein. Hum to bas kho hi gaye. Chalo apne 51gram daad lelo  Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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22nd December 2004, 11:48 AM
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wah aap bhi rang main aate ja rahe hai ... chaliye accha laga ki aapko pasand aayi ... aapki daad teh dil se kabool ki maine ... aapka bhai kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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22nd December 2004, 11:50 AM
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ek bhai ko apne chote bhai ka liha pasand aa jaye isse behtar aur kya baat hogi ... shukriya aapko mera andaaz e bayan pasand aaya ... aur khushi is bat ki ki aapko ehsaas kara paye kuch ... aapki daad phir sambhal ke rakh li hai maine ... aapka bhai kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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9th February 2005, 02:14 PM
Kunal....u r grt...simply grt!...well m just thinking ki har kalaam bemisal hai....kaunse alfaz use karoon..kinn shabdo se tareef karoon....sab kamm lagenge...tumhare kalaam ke samne...sach..bahut hi pyara kalaam pesh kiya hai tumne..fantastic!...
Jamane se ladte Jamana ho gaya Har Sawal kisi Jawab ka Nishana ho gaya Rooh mein Jaan aayi hai thodi si "roop" Apka Pyar hamare liye Nazrana ho gaya. phir milenge.....byeee take care... tadap uthoon bhi toh zalim teri duhayi na doon (NM) |
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9th February 2005, 08:07 PM
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shukriya ... yahaN bhi mujhe apne pyar se nawazne ke liye ... pata nahi maiN iske kabil huN bhi ya nahi ... tere pyaar ke liye humne sadiyaN bitayi hai... tere deedar ke liye kayi ghadiyaN bitayi hai... teri nazroN maiN basera karta mera "saccha_pyar" tere izhaar ke liye ab tak jindgani bitayi hai,... jaroor milenge meri malika tumhara kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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