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chala geya door -
10th January 2008, 10:05 PM
jad chala geya c door maitho,
tere miln di aas v chad baithi c tainu kadna chaheya dil cho bas ik lash ban baithi c, tere bina mainu jeen di aas nahi c aoun de vaade karke,tere aoun di pyaas la baithi c apni sud budh da khayal na reha tere naam di rat din raat la baithi c, tu majboor hai "deep" ya main majboor haan teri udeek piche har saal gujar baithi c... |
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11th January 2008, 08:51 AM
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Gud aa Mandeep Ji... Rishi Aasha ka Deep Jalaye Baitha HooN Mann mein tujhe Basae Baitha HooN Aana hai to jaldi aa E DosT, Zindgi apni to kiyA, Udhaar ki bhi Khaye Baitha HooN. |
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11th January 2008, 02:07 PM
Mandeep ji aakhri do lines ne bahut impress keetaa.
tu majboor hai "deep" ya main majboor haan teri udeek piche har saal gujar baithi c... wasdey raho tilak... |
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