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Naa Ayaa Karo Be'pardaa MeHfil MeiN ''Jaan''.......POOJA & DHAVAL -
28th February 2007, 12:06 AM
Pranaam sabhi ko. aaj kai arse baad mein aai...........nanananana......mein aur dhaval ek saath......well humne ek shayri likhi dhaval ne aur meine milke. yaha pesh karti hu........aapke javaabo ka itazaar regaa...
------------Gour kijiye ji
**************Naa Ayaa Karo Be'pardaa MeHfil MeiN ''Jaan''*************
KahaaN mil'tin hai khushiyaaN maluum nahiN,
chalo dhundhenGe dukan rah meiN chalte-chalte...
raNgiiniyaN bahot huii sehar meiN saath tere,
u'jliii raat de gayaa yeH suuraj dhalte-dhalte...
naa ayaa karo be'pardaa meHfil meiN ''Jaan'',
haye! mar gaya ye parvana shama ke jalte-jalte...
shokhiyaH bahot hai adaoN me unki kya kehna,
nigaheN gustaakh ho jati hai nazre badlte-badlte...
tere laboN pe rakhuN lab apne tamanna ho chali,
kahiN nikal na jaye jaan yuuNhi machlte-machlte....
barsa baadal is kadar bahoN meiN agai vo mere,
kya karam hua Dhaval gir pada saMbhlte-saMbhlte,
Mile jo haath chhudaana mumkin nahiN Pooja se,
tabhi shayad darte hai woh humse milte-milte...
POOJA & DHAVAL
===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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28th February 2007, 12:10 AM
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Originally Posted by pooja4588
Pranaam sabhi ko. aaj kai arse baad mein aai...........nanananana......mein aur dhaval ek saath......well humne ek shayri likhi dhaval ne aur meine milke. yaha pesh karti hu........aapke javaabo ka itazaar regaa...
------------Gour kijiye ji
**************Naa Ayaa Karo Be'pardaa MeHfil MeiN ''Jaan''*************
KahaaN mil'tin hai khushiyaaN maluum nahiN,
chalo dhundhenGe dukan rah meiN chalte-chalte...
raNgiiniyaN bahot huii sehar meiN saath tere,
u'jliii raat de gayaa yeH suuraj dhalte-dhalte...
naa ayaa karo be'pardaa meHfil meiN ''Jaan'',
haye! mar gaya ye parvana shama ke jalte-jalte...
shokhiyaH bahot hai adaoN me unki kya kehna,
nigaheN gustaakh ho jati hai nazre badlte-badlte...
tere laboN pe rakhuN lab apne tamanna ho chali,
kahiN nikal na jaye jaan yuuNhi machlte-machlte....
barsa baadal is kadar bahoN meiN agai vo mere,
kya karam hua Dhaval gir pada saMbhlte-saMbhlte,
Mile jo haath chhudaana mumkin nahiN Pooja se,
tabhi shayad darte hai woh humse milte-milte...
POOJA & DHAVAL
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hello pooja and dhaval bhaiya
app dono ne bhot khub likha hai
harek line side dil me utarti ahi
yuhi likhte rehna
hamri daad kabul kijiye
khush rehna dipika ji and dhaval bhaiya
kamal
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Khamooshi Say Ek Dard Ko Sehna Acha Lagta Hay
Us Ka Milna Na Milna Qismat Ki Baat Hay
Pal Pal Us Ki Yaad May Roona Acha Lagta Hay
Us Key Bina Sari Khushyaan Aajab lagti Hain
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28th February 2007, 05:55 AM
Hm....
Bahut badiya!!!
Bahut hi khoobsoorat rachna likhi hai tum dono ne!!!! Daad kubool karlo pehle to
To ab Pooja darling... samjh gayi na tum.... ab bada sa ghoonghat nikaalke hi aaya jaaya karo kahin....
aur haan... shayri.com pe bhi..... lol... Kyun theek kaha na Shaitaan???
Take Care... Humesha khush raho!!!
~Priya
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Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
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28th February 2007, 10:34 PM
dear pooja,
tumne is meiN bahot mehnat ki hai aise hi kosisH karti raho ..aur mujhe priya didi ke jawab pe bahot hasi aa rahi hai
khusH raho aur apna khaYaal rakho
tumhara dost
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*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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1st March 2007, 01:20 AM
hi
bahut khub alfaj nikle hai dono ke jahan se.
meri daad kubul karna
sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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1st March 2007, 05:30 AM
aap dono ki likhi yeh rachna paRhti rahi mai to bas paRhte paRhte.bahut achcha likha hai. Thanks for sharing it.
Regards
aarya
khwaabo.n ke par kabhii kaTne na denaa
inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii
lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste
un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii
ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa
inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii
regards aarya
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1st March 2007, 01:53 PM
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Originally Posted by pooja4588
Pranaam sabhi ko. aaj kai arse baad mein aai...........nanananana......mein aur dhaval ek saath......well humne ek shayri likhi dhaval ne aur meine milke. yaha pesh karti hu........aapke javaabo ka itazaar regaa...
------------Gour kijiye ji
**************Naa Ayaa Karo Be'pardaa MeHfil MeiN ''Jaan''*************
KahaaN mil'tin hai khushiyaaN maluum nahiN,
chalo dhundhenGe dukan rah meiN chalte-chalte...
raNgiiniyaN bahot huii sehar meiN saath tere,
u'jliii raat de gayaa yeH suuraj dhalte-dhalte...
naa ayaa karo be'pardaa meHfil meiN ''Jaan'',
haye! mar gaya ye parvana shama ke jalte-jalte...
shokhiyaH bahot hai adaoN me unki kya kehna,
nigaheN gustaakh ho jati hai nazre badlte-badlte...
tere laboN pe rakhuN lab apne tamanna ho chali,
kahiN nikal na jaye jaan yuuNhi machlte-machlte....
barsa baadal is kadar bahoN meiN agai vo mere,
kya karam hua Dhaval gir pada saMbhlte-saMbhlte,
Mile jo haath chhudaana mumkin nahiN Pooja se,
tabhi shayad darte hai woh humse milte-milte...
POOJA & DHAVAL
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dhaval or pooja ka kalam hamesha lajawab hota hai ...........
behad sadhe huye sher kahe hain aapne
dil se daad kabool farmaiye dono
apna khyal rakhna
bye
dilip
" Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab
Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai
mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya
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3rd March 2007, 06:10 PM
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hello pooja and dhaval bhaiya
app dono ne bhot khub likha hai
harek line side dil me utarti ahi
yuhi likhte rehna
hamri daad kabul kijiye
khush rehna dipika ji and dhaval bhaiya
kamal
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ciao kamal, come stai?
allora, achha laga janke hume ki apko ye shayri pasand aai. saath deti rahiyega. devo uscire .....
arrivederci
grazie
tua amica
pooja
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6th March 2007, 12:44 PM
HI Pooja,,
Ye to main samajh gaya ki "aap dono ne ye alfaaz klikhe hain", aisa aapne kyon kaha.
par ye nahin samajh paya ki ..... aapke saath kyon nahin tha.
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6th March 2007, 06:29 PM
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HI Pooja,,
Ye to main samajh gaya ki "aap dono ne ye alfaaz klikhe hain", aisa aapne kyon kaha.
par ye nahin samajh paya ki ..... aapke saath kyon nahin tha.
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x'Qus-me..........aap kya kahana chaah rahe hai.......really...samajh nahi aya....
maafi chahungi last reply ka javab pahale de rahi hu...sorry to all
lekin mr. will u tell me.....aapne ye aisa reply kyu kiya. by theway mein kisike bhi saath aau, its my matter ok? jiske saath poem likhi hai mein he is my best friend. o mr. widhani plz aap mujhe ye batayenge ki aapke ye do line kya bol rahi hai.
well take care...
grazie
aapke dost
Pooja & Dhaval
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7th March 2007, 11:18 AM
bahut khub pooja ji and also dhaval ji
pooja ji ek baat kehna chahta hu aapse jab bhi aapko aur dhaval ji ko sath mein dekhta hu dil khush ho jata hai ki aaj fir se ye dil aur aankho ko ek nayi rachna dekhne ko milengi jo aankho se hokar dil tak jati hai, pooja ji aapki har rachna ka javab nahi aur usmein aapka aur dhaval ji ka sath mein hona... mein to kehta hu koi bewafaa bhi aapki pyaar bhari rachna ko padhke kabhi na kabhi wafa nibhane ki soch paida karta hoga
pooja ji and dhaval ji aap dono ka bahut bahut sukhriya ki aapne itni achchhi rachna ko hamare samne pesh kiya, aaj aapki ye rachna jab aankho se guzri hai to sirf aankho hi nahi dil ko bhi chain mila hai ,,
pooja ji har baar ki tarah aapki rachna ka mein shayri se javab dena chahta hu
gaur farmaiyega
KahaaN mil'tin hai khushiyaaN maluum nahiN,
chalo dhundhenGe dukan rah meiN chalte-chalte...
Kash in khushiyo ki koi dukaan hoti,
Humse bhi uski pehchaan hoti,
Bhar dete aapke aanchal ko khusiyo se,
Keemat uski chahe meri jaan hoti.
raNgiiniyaN bahot huii sehar meiN saath tere,
u'jliii raat de gayaa yeH suuraj dhalte-dhalte...
Har khushi khushi maange aapse,
Har dost dosti maange aapse,
Aapke jivan mein itna ujala ho,
Ki kal ka suraj bhi roshni maange aapse.
naa ayaa karo be'pardaa meHfil meiN ''Jaan'',
haye! mar gaya ye parvana shama ke jalte-jalte...
Kabhi dil to kabhi shama jalakar roya,
Unki yaadon ko dil se laga ke roye,
Raat ke aagosh mein so gayi jab duniya saari,
Hum chand ko unki tasveer banakar roye.
shokhiyaH bahot hai adaoN me unki kya kehna,
nigaheN gustaakh ho jati hai nazre badlte-badlte...
Nigahein unke chehre se hatti nahi,
Aur wo hamari nazaron se sikayat karte hai,
Log humse puchhte hai, hum unpe itna kyu marte hai,
Hum kehte hai kyunki hum unse mohabbat karte hai.
tere laboN pe rakhuN lab apne tamanna ho chali,
kahiN nikal na jaye jaan yuuNhi machlte-machlte....
Aap rutha na karo humse,
Hamare dil ki dhadkan bandh ho jati hai,
Dil to aapke naam kar hi chuke hai,
Jaan baki hai wo bhi nikal jati hai.
barsa baadal is kadar bahoN meiN agai vo mere,
kya karam hua Dhaval gir pada saMbhlte-saMbhlte,
Sitare aasmaan mein chamakte hai,
Badal door se hi baraste hai,
Aap dil mein rehte hai,
Aur hum mulakat ko rataste hai.
Mile jo haath chhudaana mumkin nahiN Pooja se,
tabhi shayad darte hai woh humse milte-milte...
Pyaar se nahi rushwai se darte hai,
Jamane se nahi tanhai se darte hai,
Milne ki ummid to bahut hai dil mein,
Lekin milne ke baad judai se darte hai.
pooja ji aur dhaval jji aapki khidmat mein hamari ye chhoti si koshish ummid karte hai ki aapko pasand aayengi
ese hi mehfil mein ujala karte rahiyega
aapka dost
Merul
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Originally Posted by pooja4588
Pranaam sabhi ko. aaj kai arse baad mein aai...........nanananana......mein aur dhaval ek saath......well humne ek shayri likhi dhaval ne aur meine milke. yaha pesh karti hu........aapke javaabo ka itazaar regaa...
------------Gour kijiye ji
**************Naa Ayaa Karo Be'pardaa MeHfil MeiN ''Jaan''*************
KahaaN mil'tin hai khushiyaaN maluum nahiN,
chalo dhundhenGe dukan rah meiN chalte-chalte...
raNgiiniyaN bahot huii sehar meiN saath tere,
u'jliii raat de gayaa yeH suuraj dhalte-dhalte...
naa ayaa karo be'pardaa meHfil meiN ''Jaan'',
haye! mar gaya ye parvana shama ke jalte-jalte...
shokhiyaH bahot hai adaoN me unki kya kehna,
nigaheN gustaakh ho jati hai nazre badlte-badlte...
tere laboN pe rakhuN lab apne tamanna ho chali,
kahiN nikal na jaye jaan yuuNhi machlte-machlte....
barsa baadal is kadar bahoN meiN agai vo mere,
kya karam hua Dhaval gir pada saMbhlte-saMbhlte,
Mile jo haath chhudaana mumkin nahiN Pooja se,
tabhi shayad darte hai woh humse milte-milte...
POOJA & DHAVAL
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe,
Tab dil se me naraz tha,
Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du,
Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha.
Merul~~~~~~~~~~>
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7th March 2007, 12:20 PM
Well I am sorry Pooja.My intentions were not to hurt u.
It was just that I was trying to interpret ur feeling.
Agar anjaane mein koi gunaah ho gaya ho to musafir samajhkar bhool jana.
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7th March 2007, 09:54 PM
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Originally Posted by pooja4588
Pranaam sabhi ko. aaj kai arse baad mein aai...........nanananana......mein aur dhaval ek saath......well humne ek shayri likhi dhaval ne aur meine milke. yaha pesh karti hu........aapke javaabo ka itazaar regaa...
------------Gour kijiye ji
**************Naa Ayaa Karo Be'pardaa MeHfil MeiN ''Jaan''*************
KahaaN mil'tin hai khushiyaaN maluum nahiN,
chalo dhundhenGe dukan rah meiN chalte-chalte...
raNgiiniyaN bahot huii sehar meiN saath tere,
u'jliii raat de gayaa yeH suuraj dhalte-dhalte...
naa ayaa karo be'pardaa meHfil meiN ''Jaan'',
haye! mar gaya ye parvana shama ke jalte-jalte...
shokhiyaH bahot hai adaoN me unki kya kehna,
nigaheN gustaakh ho jati hai nazre badlte-badlte...
tere laboN pe rakhuN lab apne tamanna ho chali,
kahiN nikal na jaye jaan yuuNhi machlte-machlte....
barsa baadal is kadar bahoN meiN agai vo mere,
kya karam hua Dhaval gir pada saMbhlte-saMbhlte,
Mile jo haath chhudaana mumkin nahiN Pooja se,
tabhi shayad darte hai woh humse milte-milte...
POOJA & DHAVAL
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POOJA OR DHAVAL JI KO SHAAN KA SALAM,
Bahut achaa likha hai aapne
Kahaan mil'tin hai khushiyaan maluum nahin,
chalo dhundhenge dukan rah mein chalte chalte.
Mujhe shuro hi ye do line ne hi mujhe baar baar perne ko majboor kiya.
Bas hum to yahi kahege ki aap log baar-baar aise hi ashar likhete rahe taaki hume baar-baar perne ka moka mile..
Aap khush rahe or muskurate rahe
take care
SHAAN
Gamo ki kader karo or unke sath jiyu,
Gam kabi fareb na denge khushi ki tarah.
........Shaan......
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11th March 2007, 06:29 PM
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Hm....
Bahut badiya!!!
Bahut hi khoobsoorat rachna likhi hai tum dono ne!!!! Daad kubool karlo pehle to
To ab Pooja darling... samjh gayi na tum.... ab bada sa ghoonghat nikaalke hi aaya jaaya karo kahin....
aur haan... shayri.com pe bhi..... lol... Kyun theek kaha na Shaitaan???
Take Care... Humesha khush raho!!!
~Priya
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hello ji,
aapki daad sarankho pe ji,
rahi ghunghat ki baat uski aadat dalni padegi ab to shayad hahahahah
aap bhi di sach me.......well mehafil me pakki baat hai ghunghat rahega jaruuur..........site pe to mumkin nahi hai na......ghunghat raha aur mujhe apko reply dena hua aur socha dhaval ki post pe replly de diya to....dikhai kaha dega ghunghat me........hahahaha
thanku di ise pasand karne ke liye.
grazie
Pooja & Dhaval
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17th March 2007, 07:25 PM
===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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30th March 2007, 05:41 PM
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hi
bahut khub alfaj nikle hai dono ke jahan se.
meri daad kubul karna
sakhi
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hi di,
thanku di for coming and liking
grazie
Pooja & Dhaval
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aap dono ki likhi yeh rachna paRhti rahi mai to bas paRhte paRhte.bahut achcha likha hai. Thanks for sharing it.
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aarya di
thanku vary much for coming and liking......thanku
grazie
apke dost
pooja & dhaval
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6th April 2007, 10:28 AM
bahut khoob hai bas itna hi kehna chahuga main
Thanx & Regards
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20th April 2007, 12:52 AM
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dhaval or pooja ka kalam hamesha lajawab hota hai ...........
behad sadhe huye sher kahe hain aapne
dil se daad kabool farmaiye dono
apna khyal rakhna
bye
dilip
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janaab aadab arse.....
o miyan kya haal hai.......?
dilip ji apka har baar saath mila. khushi hoti hai saath dekh ke apko.....
ji jaanab apki daad sar'ankho pe
grazie
apki dost
pooja
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20th April 2007, 12:56 AM
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bahut khub pooja ji and also dhaval ji
pooja ji ek baat kehna chahta hu aapse jab bhi aapko aur dhaval ji ko sath mein dekhta hu dil khush ho jata hai ki aaj fir se ye dil aur aankho ko ek nayi rachna dekhne ko milengi jo aankho se hokar dil tak jati hai, pooja ji aapki har rachna ka javab nahi aur usmein aapka aur dhaval ji ka sath mein hona... mein to kehta hu koi bewafaa bhi aapki pyaar bhari rachna ko padhke kabhi na kabhi wafa nibhane ki soch paida karta hoga
pooja ji and dhaval ji aap dono ka bahut bahut sukhriya ki aapne itni achchhi rachna ko hamare samne pesh kiya, aaj aapki ye rachna jab aankho se guzri hai to sirf aankho hi nahi dil ko bhi chain mila hai ,,
pooja ji har baar ki tarah aapki rachna ka mein shayri se javab dena chahta hu
gaur farmaiyega
KahaaN mil'tin hai khushiyaaN maluum nahiN,
chalo dhundhenGe dukan rah meiN chalte-chalte...
Kash in khushiyo ki koi dukaan hoti,
Humse bhi uski pehchaan hoti,
Bhar dete aapke aanchal ko khusiyo se,
Keemat uski chahe meri jaan hoti.
raNgiiniyaN bahot huii sehar meiN saath tere,
u'jliii raat de gayaa yeH suuraj dhalte-dhalte...
Har khushi khushi maange aapse,
Har dost dosti maange aapse,
Aapke jivan mein itna ujala ho,
Ki kal ka suraj bhi roshni maange aapse.
naa ayaa karo be'pardaa meHfil meiN ''Jaan'',
haye! mar gaya ye parvana shama ke jalte-jalte...
Kabhi dil to kabhi shama jalakar roya,
Unki yaadon ko dil se laga ke roye,
Raat ke aagosh mein so gayi jab duniya saari,
Hum chand ko unki tasveer banakar roye.
shokhiyaH bahot hai adaoN me unki kya kehna,
nigaheN gustaakh ho jati hai nazre badlte-badlte...
Nigahein unke chehre se hatti nahi,
Aur wo hamari nazaron se sikayat karte hai,
Log humse puchhte hai, hum unpe itna kyu marte hai,
Hum kehte hai kyunki hum unse mohabbat karte hai.
tere laboN pe rakhuN lab apne tamanna ho chali,
kahiN nikal na jaye jaan yuuNhi machlte-machlte....
Aap rutha na karo humse,
Hamare dil ki dhadkan bandh ho jati hai,
Dil to aapke naam kar hi chuke hai,
Jaan baki hai wo bhi nikal jati hai.
barsa baadal is kadar bahoN meiN agai vo mere,
kya karam hua Dhaval gir pada saMbhlte-saMbhlte,
Sitare aasmaan mein chamakte hai,
Badal door se hi baraste hai,
Aap dil mein rehte hai,
Aur hum mulakat ko rataste hai.
Mile jo haath chhudaana mumkin nahiN Pooja se,
tabhi shayad darte hai woh humse milte-milte...
Pyaar se nahi rushwai se darte hai,
Jamane se nahi tanhai se darte hai,
Milne ki ummid to bahut hai dil mein,
Lekin milne ke baad judai se darte hai.
pooja ji aur dhaval jji aapki khidmat mein hamari ye chhoti si koshish ummid karte hai ki aapko pasand aayengi
ese hi mehfil mein ujala karte rahiyega
aapka dost
Merul
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merul ji namskaar,
apka har baar saath milta hai. aur apka andaaz bahot pyara lagta hai....aapni to bahot tariif kar di janaab. ji hum to bas ehsaaso ko shabdo me dhal ke shayri banane ki koshish karte hain aur apko vo koshish pasand aati hai hamari khushkismati hai ye..........
apke sabhi sher bahot pyaare hai......aap jaise dost ka saath mile to aage badhne ki tamanna thhamti nahi kabhi..........dhaval ki aur se bhi shukriya......
saath dete rahiyega ji
grazie
aapke dost
Pooja & Dhaval
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20th April 2007, 12:58 AM
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Well I am sorry Pooja.My intentions were not to hurt u.
It was just that I was trying to interpret ur feeling.
Agar anjaane mein koi gunaah ho gaya ho to musafir samajhkar bhool jana.
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its ok........
well thanks for coming.........
grazie
aapki dost
pooja
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POOJA OR DHAVAL JI KO SHAAN KA SALAM,
Bahut achaa likha hai aapne
Kahaan mil'tin hai khushiyaan maluum nahin,
chalo dhundhenge dukan rah mein chalte chalte.
Mujhe shuro hi ye do line ne hi mujhe baar baar perne ko majboor kiya.
Bas hum to yahi kahege ki aap log baar-baar aise hi ashar likhete rahe taaki hume baar-baar perne ka moka mile..
Aap khush rahe or muskurate rahe
take care
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shan ji walekum aslaam
ji janaab apki meharbaani jo aap tashriff laye
ji behad khushi hui jaan ke ki apko humari koshish pasand aai. koshish karenge agar aage bhi koi saath me shayri aaye to aur bhi behtarinn baanaye hum use.......shukriya ek baar fir se........
grazie
aapke dost
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20th April 2007, 01:03 AM
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bahut khoob hai bas itna hi kehna chahuga main
Thanx & Regards
Jasdeep Singh
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thanku jasdeep ji aapka itna bhi kahana kaafi hai honsla-afzaai ke liye.....
grazie
aapke dost
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20th April 2007, 10:17 AM
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Pranaam sabhi ko. aaj kai arse baad mein aai...........nanananana......mein aur dhaval ek saath......well humne ek shayri likhi dhaval ne aur meine milke. yaha pesh karti hu........aapke javaabo ka itazaar regaa...
------------Gour kijiye ji
**************Naa Ayaa Karo Be'pardaa MeHfil MeiN ''Jaan''*************
KahaaN mil'tin hai khushiyaaN maluum nahiN,
chalo dhundhenGe dukan rah meiN chalte-chalte...
raNgiiniyaN bahot huii sehar meiN saath tere,
u'jliii raat de gayaa yeH suuraj dhalte-dhalte...
naa ayaa karo be'pardaa meHfil meiN ''Jaan'',
haye! mar gaya ye parvana shama ke jalte-jalte...
shokhiyaH bahot hai adaoN me unki kya kehna,
nigaheN gustaakh ho jati hai nazre badlte-badlte...
tere laboN pe rakhuN lab apne tamanna ho chali,
kahiN nikal na jaye jaan yuuNhi machlte-machlte....
barsa baadal is kadar bahoN meiN agai vo mere,
kya karam hua Dhaval gir pada saMbhlte-saMbhlte,
Mile jo haath chhudaana mumkin nahiN Pooja se,
tabhi shayad darte hai woh humse milte-milte...
POOJA & DHAVAL
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wah wah wah wah kia khub likha hai per mujhe ise parrhte hi bohat hasi bhi aye bura nahi maanna woh hansi mazak urrane wali nahi kionki wording bohat zaberdast hai aur woh dhaval ki nahi pooja ki ho sakti hai (kion dhaval) acha now be serious bohat bohat acha likha hai tum donon ne mil ker mujhay parrhte hi itna acha laga ke reply diye baghair nahi reh saki aesay hi humesha hanste muskurate raho donon ameeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeen meri duyain tum donon ke sath hain takecare sweety n dhaval
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
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25th April 2007, 10:21 PM
meri pyari di,
shukriya aap yaha tashriff laain. aapko p asand aaya ye khush'kismati hmari. well aapko hasi aai..........hhahahaha mujhe bhi aai......
di saath deti rahiyega.
grazie
aapki
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PooJa Jee! AuR DhavaL SahiB!!!
KaaFii DarD Milaa MujhE Is MeiN ????? Pad Kar Aanke Ruk Gayi
ChalTa Hoon.....
AaP Ka DosT
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PooJa Jee! AuR DhavaL SahiB!!!
KaaFii DarD Milaa MujhE Is MeiN ????? Pad Kar Aanke Ruk Gayi
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Amrit Sharad saaHeb:
namaste!!
aapne ees koShiSh ko pasaNd kiyaa .. baRii hi KhuShii hu'ii.. hum donoN aapke ShuKraGuzaar hai. YuuNhi paRhte rahiYeNgaa aage bhee ..!
KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
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4th September 2008, 09:02 AM
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Pranaam sabhi ko. aaj kai arse baad mein aai...........nanananana......mein aur dhaval ek saath......well humne ek shayri likhi dhaval ne aur meine milke. yaha pesh karti hu........aapke javaabo ka itazaar regaa...
------------Gour kijiye ji
**************Naa Ayaa Karo Be'pardaa MeHfil MeiN ''Jaan''*************
KahaaN mil'tin hai khushiyaaN maluum nahiN,
chalo dhundhenGe dukan rah meiN chalte-chalte...
raNgiiniyaN bahot huii sehar meiN saath tere,
u'jliii raat de gayaa yeH suuraj dhalte-dhalte...
naa ayaa karo be'pardaa meHfil meiN ''Jaan'',
haye! mar gaya ye parvana shama ke jalte-jalte...
shokhiyaH bahot hai adaoN me unki kya kehna,
nigaheN gustaakh ho jati hai nazre badlte-badlte...
tere laboN pe rakhuN lab apne tamanna ho chali,
kahiN nikal na jaye jaan yuuNhi machlte-machlte....
barsa baadal is kadar bahoN meiN agai vo mere,
kya karam hua Dhaval gir pada saMbhlte-saMbhlte,
Mile jo haath chhudaana mumkin nahiN Pooja se,
tabhi shayad darte hai woh humse milte-milte...
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bahut accha likha hai mere dono shaitaano ne.....
ahsaas bhi badal jate haiN, samey ke badlate badlate.....
kush raho....yoon hi mahfil mein char chaand lagate raho
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4th September 2008, 07:15 PM
barsa baadal is kadar bahoN meiN agai vo mere,
kya karam hua Dhaval gir pada saMbhlte-saMbhlte,
Mile jo haath chhudaana mumkin nahiN Pooja se,
tabhi shayad darte hai woh humse milte-milte...
waah ! bahut khoob ..
hume aap dono ki jugalbandii behad pasand aayi !
oopar likhe 2 ashaar to jaise dil meiN ghar kar gaye !
daad humari taraf se bhi ..
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