Bahut socha thaa apni chahat usey bata doon
Aaj diya maine phool toh usney liyaa hi nahi...
Bahut Khoob ... YE mujhe kaafi pasand aayi..
Bas itna kahunga..
Aisa nahi ki ki wo mujhse pyaar karta nahi
Magar fir bhi wo ikraar karta nahi
Majburiyon Ne use bhi rulaya hoga..
Warna Yu to wo barisho mai chalta hi nahi.....
Bahut socha thaa apni chahat usey bata doon Aaj diya maine phool toh usney liyaa hi nahi...
Bahut Khoob ... YE mujhe kaafi pasand aayi..
Bas itna kahunga..
Aisa nahi ki ki wo mujhse pyaar karta nahi
Magar fir bhi wo ikraar karta nahi
Majburiyon Ne use bhi rulaya hoga..
Warna Yu to wo barisho mai chalta hi nahi.....
Aapke aane aur sher ki sarahana karne ka bahut bahut shukriya...aainda bhi aise hi hausla badhate rahiyega....khush rahiye...
duaaon ke saath...
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
Auro ki subha suraj ke ughne se shuru hoti hai
Mera toh din uska chehra dekhne se nikalta hai..
Raat ki bekarari ka koi matlab nahi tab tak
Mere saath rehne ka faasla jab tak rehta hai...
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
Naresh mehra ji....
ghazalon ke peeche khayal achcha hai..har ehsaas ki akkasi hoti hai..
post karne ke liye shukriya...
kuchh sher aapki ghazal ke format pe arz hain
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Jis lamhe ki talaash mein tujh tak pahoncha
Tu ne wo lamha bataya hi nahin...
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aakhirash rakkha jab mein ne us lamhe ka sawaal
usne kaha main ne kuchh chhupaya hi nahin...
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roz'e abad ko jaaun, ke maikade ko main..
taa-umr kisi ne saath nibhaya hi nahin...
na jiski shakl hai koi, na jiska naam hai koi - ek aisi shae ka kyun hamein azal se intezaar hai...
Naresh mehra ji....
ghazalon ke peeche khayal achcha hai..har ehsaas ki akkasi hoti hai..
post karne ke liye shukriya...
kuchh sher aapki ghazal ke format pe arz hain
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Jis lamhe ki talaash mein tujh tak pahoncha
Tu ne wo lamha bataya hi nahin...
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aakhirash rakkha jab mein ne us lamhe ka sawaal
usne kaha main ne kuchh chhupaya hi nahin...
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roz'e abad ko jaaun, ke maikade ko main..
taa-umr kisi ne saath nibhaya hi nahin...
Aapne kimti waqt nikal ke mere ehsaason ko padha aur pasand kiya...iske liye bahut bahut shukriya.....aapke likhe sabhi sher mujhe bahut achhe lage.....aainda bhi aise hi hausla badhate rahiyega....khush rahiye....
yuhi milte rahiye....
duaaon ke saath...
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
Naresh ji,
bahut achchi koshish hai.... ehsaas bahut khoob rahe.... aapko padhna achcha lagta hai... keep up the good work.... khush rahiye aur likhte rahiye....
Lamha Ji........Namaste ! aapka meri adnaa si koshish ko saraahne aur pasand karne ke liye......bahut bahut shukriya....aainda bhi aise hi hausla badhate rahiyega...khush rahiye...
apna khayal rakhiyega...
duaaon ke saath....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
Naresh saheb ek baat kehni thi pata nahi kamyaab ho paooga ya nahi apni baat kehne me. Waise to main khud bohat bada lailm insaan hu lekin maine jo ab tak mehsus kiya hain aapke kalamo ko padhkar use kehna zaruri samajhta hu.
Aapke khayaal hamesha bohat achche hote hain lekin aap hamesha apne kalamo me ulajh se jate hain. kitni hi dafa aapka dusra misra aapke pehle misre se bilkul mukhtalif hota hain ya kabhi kabhi aap koi aisa sher Ghazal me keh jate hain jo pure mauzu ko ko ek badal deta hain.
Aap apne dil se kafiye ko barkaraar rakhne ka dar nikaal de, aisa nahi hain ke koi kalam aapne shuru kiya hain to use khatam karna zaruri hain jald se jald kabhi kabhi shayro ko ek Ghazal likhne me kaiee kaiee saal guzar jate hain. Allama Iqbal Saheb Allah unhe Jannat naseeb kare ek ek sher me 60 martaba correction karte the.
Sabr se kalam likhe sher me wazan paida kare..........Allah aapke kalam ko izzat aur takat bakshe.
Naresh saheb ek baat kehni thi pata nahi kamyaab ho paooga ya nahi apni baat kehne me. Waise to main khud bohat bada lailm insaan hu lekin maine jo ab tak mehsus kiya hain aapke kalamo ko padhkar use kehna zaruri samajhta hu.
Aapke khayaal hamesha bohat achche hote hain lekin aap hamesha apne kalamo me ulajh se jate hain. kitni hi dafa aapka dusra misra aapke pehle misre se bilkul mukhtalif hota hain ya kabhi kabhi aap koi aisa sher Ghazal me keh jate hain jo pure mauzu ko ko ek badal deta hain.
Aap apne dil se kafiye ko barkaraar rakhne ka dar nikaal de, aisa nahi hain ke koi kalam aapne shuru kiya hain to use khatam karna zaruri hain jald se jald kabhi kabhi shayro ko ek Ghazal likhne me kaiee kaiee saal guzar jate hain. Allama Iqbal Saheb Allah unhe Jannat naseeb kare ek ek sher me 60 martaba correction karte the.
Sabr se kalam likhe sher me wazan paida kare..........Allah aapke kalam ko izzat aur takat bakshe.
Ghayel
Sajid Ji....Aadaab ! aapki raaye bahut kimti hai......koshish karunga aapke dikhaaye margdarshan par likh saku....aapke saath ka bahut bahut shukriya.....aise hi saath nibhaate rahiyega.....mujhe aapke samjhaane ka tarika bahut pasand aaya....
khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
Naresh mehra ji....
ghazalon ke peeche khayal achcha hai..har ehsaas ki akkasi hoti hai..
post karne ke liye shukriya...
kuchh sher aapki ghazal ke format pe arz hain
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Jis lamhe ki talaash mein tujh tak pahoncha
Tu ne wo lamha bataya hi nahin...
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aakhirash rakkha jab mein ne us lamhe ka sawaal
usne kaha main ne kuchh chhupaya hi nahin...
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roz'e abad ko jaaun, ke maikade ko main..
taa-umr kisi ne saath nibhaya hi nahin...
Aapke margdarshan ka bahut bahut shukriya....! aage bhi aise hi saath nibhaate rahen....aur hausla bhi....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...