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Baghawat Kr Bhi Sakta Hun -
22nd January 2011, 04:28 PM
Tamam Ahl-e-Mehfil Ko Aadaab....!
Aaj Phir Apni Aik Adna Si Koshish Ke Sath Bazm Me Hazir Hun........ Umeed Hai Ke Ahl-e-Zoq Apni Raaye Se Nawazen Gy BAGHAWAT KR BHI SAKTA HUN Zamanay K Usoolon Se Baghawat Kr Bhi Kr Sakta Hun Main Lab-Basta Kharra Hun Pr Shikayat Kr Bhi Sakta Hun Mujhy Hai Paas Chahat Ka Wgrna ay Sitam Parwar Tujhy Main Tujh Se ziada Gham Inayat Kr Bhi Sakta hun Mujhy Bas Apni Baton Se Mukarna He Naheen Aata Boht Hoshiyar Hun Warna Siyasat Kr Bhi Sakta Hun Aseer-e-Ishq Ko Aadat Si Hai Dukh Dard Sehanay ki Wagrna Main Rihaayi Ki Jasarat Kr Bhi Kr Sakta Hun Hazaron Pal Muhabbat Me Hazaron Dard Jhailay Hain Magr Hun Qol Pr Qayem Ye Saabat Kr Bhi Sakta Hun Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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22nd January 2011, 05:24 PM
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aadaab khoob shakil bhai aap ki ghazliyaat kaa taantaa lagaa huwaa hai wo bhi aisee meyaari ki ab dil chaahitaa hai ki aap ke paas zaanuy e talammuz tai kar hi len gar qabool uftad zahe izzo sharf jaisaa ki main ne pahle isharah kiyaa thaa ki aap aowalan aisee ghazlon ko saamne laaye the jo nisbatan kamzor theen ... jabki meraa khiyaal ye thaa ki aap aisaa hikmatan kar rahe hain ..... to aaj mujhe yaqeen ho chalaa hai ki aage aap se aor bhi bahot achhee ghazlen sunne ko milen geee ghazal bahot achhee hai meyaari hai kheyaalaat umdah hain bas lafz SAABAT nahi hai balki SAABIT hai is liye is pe ghaor kar len ..... ek baar fir aap ko tahe dil se daad masood hassaas |
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22nd January 2011, 05:26 PM
Shakil Bhai ... bahut khoobsurat ehsaasasaat se ghazal ke sabhi ashaar ko ba-khuubi ... aapne adaa kiya hai ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ...
aise hi likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... ! duaaon ke saath ... !  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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22nd January 2011, 07:07 PM
Mujhy Hai Paas Chahat Ka Wgrna ay Sitam Parwar
Tujhy Main Tujh Se ziada Gham Inayat Kr Bhi Sakta hun Mujhy Bas Apni Baton Se Mukarna He Naheen Aata Boht Hoshiyar Hun Warna Siyasat Kr Bhi Sakta Hun Hazaron Pal Muhabbat Me Hazaron Dard Jhailay Hain Magr Hun Qol Pr Qayem Ye Saabat Kr Bhi Sakta Hun bahot khoob Shakil Miyaan aapki ye ghazal bhi behad khubsurat pahle ki tarah.. har sher laajawab, khoobsurat. Meri daad kuboool karen, likhte rahen. shaad... |
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24th January 2011, 11:58 AM
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Janab Masood Hassaas Saheb...1 Aap NE Waqt Nikaal Kr Is Kalaam Pr Nazar Farmayi Or Apni Qeemti Raaye Se Nawaza Is Ke Liye Main Tah-e-Dil Se Mamnoon Hun.... Sir Aap Ke Fun Ke Samnay To Meri Auqaat Aik Zarray Ki Si Hai.... Or Mujhy To Aap Ki Zaat Se Seekhnay Ko Boht Kuch Mila Hai.... Ye Aap Ka Husn-e-Zan Hai Jo Aap Mere Naqas Kalam Ko Sarahtay HAin..... Or Jo Baat Aap Ne Waazeh Ki Hai "Saabat" Wo Bilkul Theak Hai... Shayad Aap Yaqeen Na Manen Magr Haqeeqat Hai Ke Isi Aik Lafz Ki Waja Se Me Aik Muddat Se Ye Ghazal Yahan Post Nahi Kr Paya.... Mujhy Bakhubi Khabar HAi Ke Asal Lafz Saabat" Hai Or Me Ghaur Bhi Kr Chuka Hun Magr Meri Naqas Samjh Me Or Koi Mutbadil Lafz Nahi aaya......... Ab Aap He Se Darkhwast HAi Ke Baraye Mehrbani Aap Is Ka Koi Mutbadal Lafz Ya Misra Bana Den....... ALLAH Aap Ko Khooob Rehmaton Se Nawazay Duaon Me Yaad Rakhiye Ga Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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24th January 2011, 12:01 PM
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Janab Naresh Mehra Ji...! Aap To Hamesha Hee Jis Faraakh Dili Se Hosla-Afzayi Farmatay HAin Us Ke Liye Alfaaz Me Shukriya Adaa Krna Mushkil Hai....... Bas Itna Kahun Ga Ke Aap Ki daad Mejhy Aik Naye Azm Or Taqat Se Sar-shaar Krti Hai..... Or Mujhy Umeed Hai Ke Aayinda Bhi Aap Yunhi Aatay Rahen Gy....... Khush Rahen Muskuratay Rahen Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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24th January 2011, 12:04 PM
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Janab Mohtram Sameer Shaad Saheb...! ALLAH PAAK Se Dua Hai Ke Aap Ko Sada Khush Rakhay........ Aap Ki Muhabbat Or Hosla-Afzayi Ka Boht Boht Shukriya.... Boht Khushi Milti Hai Aap Ki Daaad Pa Kr..... Yunhi Aatay Rahen Or Muskuratay Rahen Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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24th January 2011, 02:01 PM
Wah Ahmad bhai bohat khoob.......yeh sher behad pasand aaya.
Mujhy Hai Paas Chahat Ka Wgrna ay Sitam Parwar Tujhy Main Tujh Se ziada Gham Inayat Kr Bhi Sakta hun Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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*Assalamu Alaikum.. :)** |
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*Ishq~Ibadat.......**
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*Assalamu Alaikum.. :)** -
24th January 2011, 03:25 PM
Assalamu Alaikum..Dear Shakil Jee..Allah Pak K Rahem-o-Karam Se Umeed Hain Aap Khayriyat Se Honge..
 **Matla Se Lekar Maqta Tak..Dilki Baato.n Ko Dilse Mehsuus Kee Hain..Aur Ek Gazal Kee Yaad Aayi Bhi..Aapne Bhi Sune Honge Zoruur..Hain Na.. ? Dilki Gehraaion Kee Gehraaion Se Duwaaye~~Dher-o-Dher Saare Phuul.. **Khush Rahiye Ye Duwaaon Ke Saath Ijaazat Chahungi Aapse.. **Ishq Kee Daastaan Hain Pyaare Apni Aapnii Zubaan Hain Pyaare 'Hum Zamaane Se Inteqaam To Le Ik Haseen Darmiyaan Hain Pyaare *Writer: Jigar Muradabadi Jee ( I Think So).. ***Singer: Jagjit Singh Jee **Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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25th January 2011, 10:43 AM
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Janab Sajid Ghayel Saheb...! Aap Ki Muhabbat Or Inayat Ka Boht Boht Shukriya.... ALLAH PAAK AAP KO KHUSH RAKHAY Yunhi Aatay Rahen Or Mehfil Sajatay Rahen Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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25th January 2011, 11:43 AM
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shakeel saheb ko prem anjana ka .....salaam aapke sher bohot pasand aaye..daad kubool kijiye yun hi likhte rahen... kush rahen....swasth rahen aapka prem anjana....... anjana prem sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai, mai sabko hasata chala gaya. pasand thi jamane ko meri barbadi, mai unpe dil-o-jaan lutata chala gaya.
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25th January 2011, 01:00 PM
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Dear Shimul Ji....! Aap Ne Hamrai Bazm Me Haziri Di Or Kalaam Ko Pasand Kia Us Ke Liye Aap Ka Boht Boht Shukriya........ Yunhi Aati Rahen Or Mehfil Sajati Rahen... ALLAH PAAK AAP KO BOHT KHUSHIAN De Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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25th January 2011, 03:03 PM
Ahmad jii................aapki gazal hume behad pasand aaye, sabhi ashiyaar dil ke khaas kareeb rahe.....keep writing.
god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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25th January 2011, 04:51 PM
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Dear Prem Anjana Ji....! Hamari Bazm Me Aap Ko Khush Aamdeed........ Kalaam Parhnay Or Pasand Krnay Ke Liye Aap Ka Boht Shukriya..... Umeed Hai Ke aap Aayinda Bhi Aatay Rahen Gy KHUSH RAHEN MUSKURATAY RAHEN Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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26th January 2011, 12:19 PM
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Dear Sunita Virender Ji....! Aap Ne Is Kalaam Ko Waqt Dia Or Apni Raaye Se Nawaza..... Is Pr Main Tah-e-Dil Se Aap Ka Mashkoor Hun....... Khush Rahen Or Yunhi Aati Tahen Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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26th January 2011, 01:55 PM
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Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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8th October 2011, 01:10 PM
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Sir Aap Ki Aamad Ka Or Ghazal Ko Pasand Krnay Ka Boht Boht Shukriya........ Sada Khush Rahen Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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