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mera dildaar lagta hai - 14th November 2006, 01:36 PM

Mere pyare dosto,

ek aur Ghazal aap tak pohncha raha hun.
Ummid hai ke eh Ghazal bhi aap sabhi hazraat ko pasand ayegi.
"Shayeri-e-Ishq" aur "Ghazal Section" forums men mere kalaam
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apne tasuraat(views) mujhe maloom karwate rahen taake man aap hazraat
ki khidmat men zyada se zyada kalaam pesh kar sakun.
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tazaa gulabon se bhara gulzaar lagta hai
ghusse men bhi dilkash mera dildaar lagta hai

dilkash- Attractive, dildaar-Freind, Gulzaar- Garden

hai kya bala ki tujh se chahat yeh khuda jane
gar tu na ho ghar men to ghar bekaar lagta hai

kuch is tarah se teri surat bha gayi mujh ko
har shey men tera hi tera didaar lagta hai

shey- Cheez, didaar - Darshan

tu paas baithe to mera har suu mehekta hai
ek gulsitan men phoolon ka tyohaar lagta hai

suu- Side

hai aaj nafrat mujh ko bhi inkaar se lekin
inkaar ulfat men tera eqraar lagta hai

ulfat- Muhabbat

Parwaaz ka kehta hai barson ka tajurba eh
har kaam men pyara tera kirdaar lagta hai

kirdaar- Action, Role
Tajurba- Experience

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aap ka dost
Mujeeb Parwaaz

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hi - 14th November 2006, 03:30 PM

tazaa gulabon se bhara gulzaar lagta hai
gusse mein bhi dilkash mera dildaar lagta hai....

wah janaab kya baat hai bhut khub......

kuch is tarah se teri surat bha gayi mujh ko
har shey mein tera hi tera didaar lagta hai......

ji haan hazoor mohabbat isee ko kehte hai......

tu paas baithe to mera har suu mehekta hai
ek gulsitan mein phoolon ka tyohaar lagta hai......

pyaar ki mehak hoti hee is qadar haseen hai ki bass puchiye mat.....ek share arz hai.....

tere aane ki jab khabar mehke
teri khushbu se sara ghar mehke....(not mine)

hai aaj nafrat mujh ko bhi inkaar se lekin
inkaar ulfat mein tera iqraar lagta hai......

wah kya baat hai bhut pyara ehsaas hai.....

Parwaaz ka kehta hai barson ka tajurba eh
har kaam mein pyara tera kirdaar lagta hai

janaab mujeeb sahib makta bhee bhut zoordaar bana hai poori gazal hee lajawaab hai...meri daad kabool kijiye.....is khubsurat kalaam pe.....aate rahiye ....khuda appki kalam ko buland kare........apna khyaal rakhiyega....raj.....


un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)

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Bhai Veerji....aap ke sher ka jawaab nahi.
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Hai aaj nafrat mujh ko bhi inkaar se lekin
Inkaar ulfat men tera eqraar lagta hai


Kia baat hay sir je Aap ki,,
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15th November 2006, 02:52 PM

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Mere pyare dosto,

ek aur Ghazal aap tak pohncha raha hun.
Ummid hai ke eh Ghazal bhi aap sabhi hazraat ko pasand ayegi.
"Shayeri-e-Ishq" aur "Ghazal Section" forums men mere kalaam
padhte rahiye.
apne tasuraat(views) mujhe maloom karwate rahen taake man aap hazraat
ki khidmat men zyada se zyada kalaam pesh kar sakun.
-------------------------------------------

tazaa gulabon se bhara gulzaar lagta hai
ghusse men bhi dilkash mera dildaar lagta hai

dilkash- Attractive, dildaar-Freind, Gulzaar- Garden

hai kya bala ki tujh se chahat yeh khuda jane
gar tu na ho ghar men to ghar bekaar lagta hai

kuch is tarah se teri surat bha gayi mujh ko
har shey men tera hi tera didaar lagta hai

shey- Cheez, didaar - Darshan

tu paas baithe to mera har suu mehekta hai
ek gulsitan men phoolon ka tyohaar lagta hai

suu- Side

hai aaj nafrat mujh ko bhi inkaar se lekin
inkaar ulfat men tera eqraar lagta hai

ulfat- Muhabbat

Parwaaz ka kehta hai barson ka tajurba eh
har kaam men pyara tera kirdaar lagta hai

kirdaar- Action, Role
Tajurba- Experience

--------------------------X---------------

aap ka dost
Mujeeb Parwaaz

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aji janab bahut khoob likha hai aapne, har lafaz mai.n mohabat hi nazar aa rahi hai, bahut accha lagga aapko pyar bhari rachna ke saath padna. yu hi likhtey rahiye.

aapki dost


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15th November 2006, 03:07 PM

mujeeb ji adaab aur namskaar mere dost

kya haal hai janab aapke?

aap to bahot hi kamaal ka lihte ho
achha laga aapko padhke is bar bhi


bas yuhi likhte rahiye mere dost

khus rahiye

aapka dost
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bohut bohut shkriya aapka.
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Shukriya Sunitaji.

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Dear Dhavalji,

aapka bohut bohut shukriya. in alfaaz se mujhe aur bhi likhne ka housla mila.
sada khush rahen
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