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| NO 2.Woh pal bhi kaisa pal hoga jab haath |
  
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| NO 3.Keh to dia hai tumse |
  
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| NO 5.bataana hai yahii jaanaa |
  
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4 | 14.29% |
| NO 6.paas hokar bhii ajnabii sii ho |
  
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| NO 7.MuradoN bhari woH haseeN raat hogi, |
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10 | 35.71% |
| NO 8.Main Khush hun aaj woh din aaya |
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| NO 9.Yay lamha....yay samaaa ..yay ghadee |
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| NO 10.Tumhe chaand kahun ya chaandni |
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| NO 11.shaam ki bahoN me ik chand utar aaya hai |
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| NO 12.Le ke paighaam e firaaq aane lagee dekho sahar |
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Tasveer Per Tahreer "May 2014" -
2nd June 2014, 07:03 AM
Mehfil ko Zainy ka Salaam
kaise hain aap sab??.....lijiye ek baar phir hazir hooN maiN...is mahine ki kuch khoobsurat ghazaloN aur nazmoN ke saath... TASVEER PER TAHREER 'MAY 2014' ke liye hame kul 12 tahreer mili haiN, . maiN sab se pahle un dostoN ki shukr-guzaar huuN jinhone is meiN hissa liya aur apnii writings hame bheji... Aap sab kii yeh ghazaleiN/nazmeiN behad achhi lagii mujhe, iske liye mere taraf se daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool keejiye.Ooparwaale se duaa hai kii aap ko aur hunarmand kare, aur aap ke kalaamoN me aur nikhaar aaye: Aayiye dostoN in ghazaloN/nazmoN ko aap maze se padhiye aur voting karke inki hausla afzaai kijiye PS:..Only those members can participate and vote in TPT who have more than fifty posts... TPT ke rules ke mutabiq, jin members ki post count less than 50 hai, woh vote nahi de sakte haiN, agar unhone vote kiya bhi, tou unka vote neutralize ho jayega.. Duplicate ids ko bhi neutralize kiya jayega, aur result in sab votes ko delete karke hi sunaya jayega... Meri guzarish hai,plzz yeh saari bateiN dhyan me rakhiye.. Participants se request hai ke kisi se apni ghazal/Nazm ka zikr na kareiN,kis member ne kaunsi ghazal likhi hai yeh baat result tak raaz hi rehni chahiye. ALL THE BEST TO ALL THE PARTICIPANTS...............  Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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2nd June 2014, 07:11 AM
iin baadaloN kii aaR meN, zulf teri saNwaar looN
tumpe jo kisii kii ho nazar, maiN wo utaar looN nainoN se tere nain jo mere milne lage haiN iis nazr-e-karam pe, meri jaaN tumpe nisaar looN Lehraae hawaa jab bhii kabhi jhum ke khushii se maiN baaNdh looN aaNchal meN teri,uska khumaar looN Rukhsaar pe bosa na diya, tumne sharam meN gar sharmo hayaa hai to, azaab kyuN ye bekaar looN BaahoN meN meri aa jo gaye, tum mere humdum aaghosh meN bhar ke tujhe, bas yuN hi nihaar looN Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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2nd June 2014, 07:13 AM
*Woh pal bhi kaisa pal hoga jab haath tumhara thamenge
yeh aaj nahi to kal hoga hum haath tumhara thamenge Jab neela neela ambar bhi apna humsaaya ho jaayega dil dhadkhega madham madham honthon pe taraana aayega aur tez hawa ke yeh jhonke aanchal ko tere lehraayege thamenge phir hum yeh daaman aankhon mein teri bas jaayenge yaadon ki is baarat mein khamoshi ka bhi aana hoga haathon mein liye in haathon ko kasme waade dohraana hoga mehtaab tere chehre ki chamak suraj ko to ufff jaana hoga ab mere chaand ko sharmaakar baahon mein meri aana hoga dhalte dhalte is din ke sang jab haath tumhara thamenge yeh aaj nahi to kal hoga hum haath tumhara thamenge Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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2nd June 2014, 07:14 AM
Keh to dia hai tumse
Tareef mai tumhaari Lafzo ki anjuman mai Ek phool sajaaunga Ehsaas ke safe par Tasveer banaaunga Lakin kahN se laata Wo shokhiyaaN tumhaari Wo baaliyaaN tumhaari Jo kuch bhi tha wo mujhme Hairaan tha ye sunkar Lafzo ke deepako ko Kaise jalaaunga Ehsaas ke safe par Tasveer banaaunga Phr khoj mai, mein nikla Rango ki bastiyoN mai Kuch rang yahN se lai lun Jo tumse mail khaayeN Kuch rang yahN ke nikhrey Jo tujhme jhimilaaeiN Ek rang bada hi chanchal Us par nazr padi to chupke se meine usko Sabki nazr bcha kar Aankho mai bhr lia hai Ye kaam kar lia hai Phr khojta phira mein PhooloN ki anjuman mai Kya khoob they nazare Dilkash Bade hi piyaare Kya kya bataaun tumko Kya kya qayamatein thiN Nazuk thi har kali aur Kis darja nazakateiN thin Ek phool jo ki sabse Nayaab tha wahN par Meine utha lia hai Dil se lga lia hai Phr saari bastiyoN se Anjaani hastiyoN se Mein chaand laike aaya Taare bhi sath laaya Nayaab motiyoN ko Samndr ki talhatoN se Mein seepiyoN mai laaya Kuch jugnoo jo safar ke mehmaan ban gye they Mein roop ke nagr se unko bhi dhoond laaya YakjaaH kia jo sabko SochoN ke paiykaro mai To poochne lge sab Kuch khass kar rhe ho Ehsaas ke safe par jo rang bhr rhe ho Phr naam jab tumhara khaake mai dhl ke aaya Hairat jataaii sabne Kya kaam kar rhe ho Tum deepako se sooraj Tabeer kar rhe ho Khushbaash sa mein unko khamosh sun raha tha Ehsaas ke safe par Tasveer bun raha tha Tasveer bun rha tha. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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2nd June 2014, 07:15 AM
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
Dil ko koi khushi na thi Hothon par ye hasi na thi Jeene ki ummid jo deti Aisi koi dilkashi na thi Dil ke zakham sile na the Jab tak tum hum mile na the Chamka hai yu naseeb ka taraa Mil gaya humko pyar tumhara Har waqt rahun saath tumhare Ek pal tum bin nahi gawara Gulshan mein gul khile na the Jab tak tum hum mile na the Tumse mila ye taufa pyar ka Lamha khatam hua intezaar ka Khushiyon ne hain thame haath Mausam aaya hai ab karaar ka Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the Jab tak tum hum mile na the Mile hain ab hum juda na honge Ek duje se khafa na honge Rahe salamat pyar humara khabhi bhi hum bewafa na honge Hasraton ke ye kafile na the Jab tak tum hum mile na the Jab tak tum hum mile na the Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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bataana hai yahii jaanaa
koii tumsaa nahii jaanaa. muhabbat me fanaa ho kar, milii hai Zindagee jaanaa. mujhe gham de do sab apne, tumhaarii har khushii jaanaa. Samajh paao to paDh lenaa, kaheN kyaa bebasee jaanaa. bahot kaam aayegii mujhko, merii aawaargee jaanaa. sitaare hain ke motii haiN, ye AaNkhen aapkii jaanaa. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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2nd June 2014, 07:17 AM
paas hokar bhii ajnabii sii ho.
zindagii ho to zindagii sii ho. justujuu ho jo tum to ho pahalii, aarzuu ho to aakhirii sii ho. mai'n charaagho'n tale a'ndheraa saa, tum charaagho'n me'n roshanii sii ho. subah , patto'n pe os ke jaisii, raat, jhiilo'n me'n chaa'ndnii sii ho. mai'n faqat ek mubtadi* shaair, huu-ba-huu tum to shaairii sii ho. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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2nd June 2014, 07:18 AM
MuradoN bhari woH haseeN raat hogi,
Ke jab meri tujhse mulaqaat hogi Na Socha tha maine ke yeH baat hogi Mohabbat kisi ko mere saath hogi, FizaoN me ulfat, hawaoN me rangat mohabbat mein doobi har ik zaat hogi, Rahe dono khamosh ab tak magar ab BayaaN hoNge jazbaat jab baat hogi, Tarastii rahii tere deedaar ko maiN Teri ik jhalak meri saughat hogi, Chamakta hua chaNd ,roshan sitare DiloN mein umaNgoN ki baaraat hogi, Khilenge naye phool dil ke chaman mein teri chahatoN ki jo barsaat hogi, Mera hamsafar banke aayega jab tu meri zindigi meiN nayee baat hogi Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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2nd June 2014, 07:19 AM
Main Khush hun aaj woh din aaya
Jab hathon mein mere, tera haath aaya Khushbu teri ne mujhe mehkaya Aanchal se lipta tera saya Main khush hu aaj, woh din aaya Jab Haathon mein mere tera haath aaya Kya khub yeh shaam suhani hai Labon par phir wahi kahaani hai Yeh neeli-neeli tanhaayi, aisa sa asar kar jayegi Meri neeli in palakon par, teri hi chavvi nazar aayegi Jab jism ko mere chu-chu kar, teri saansein behkaayengi Tab prem milan ka geet wahi fizaaien bhi dohrayengi Main khush hun aaj meri duniya, iss pal mein he simat jayegi* Teri Khamoshi iss pal mein meri duniya ban jayegi Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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2nd June 2014, 07:20 AM
Yay lamha....yay samaaa ..yay ghadee..
Khoobsoorat moad, zindagee khadee! ******************************* Hum hee jaanayn kya beetee, Kaysay hamnay jung jeetee! Ek doojay kay hogaye hum, Milkar ab sahlayngay gham! Lamha haye yay shaadmaan, Khul chukaa haye aasmaan! Har soo chaayee roashnee, Jagmug laagay zindagee! Sangam haye arwaah ka, Nahi ghamaon ki parwah ka! Koshish jaari rakhayn hum Khushyaan hoan na paayein kam! Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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2nd June 2014, 07:21 AM
Tumhe chaand kahun ya chaandni,
Tum raag ho ya koi raagini, Kis naam se main tumhe pukaar loon, Jubaan pe apni use utaar doon, Main agar kahun tum aaftaab ho mera, Kaliyon mein khilta gulaab hai mera, Naam ye bhi to sach mein kuch bhi nahin, Mastiyon mein lipti teri ye adayein, Rukh se aanchal sarkaane lagi hain, Chehre pe bikhri ye julfein, Dil ko dhadkaane lagi hain, Chehre kee hasrat hai jaise jannat, Aankhon mein doobi hai shokhiyan, pyaar kee shokhiyan, Main agar kahun tum jaan ho meri, Zindagi ke safar mein humsafar ho meri, Naam ye bhi to sach mein kuch bhi nahin...... Tumhe chaand kahun ya chaandni.... Tum hue jawaan to hui ye daastaan, Silsilon ke fir ban gaye kaarwaan, Banayenge door kahin aashiyaan, Too jahan main wahan Main agar kahun tum pari ho meri, Khushbuon mein lipti raat ho meri, Naam ye bhi to sach mein kuch bhi nahin, Tumhe chaand kahun ya chaandni.... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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2nd June 2014, 07:23 AM
shaam ki bahoN me ik chand utar aaya hai
jaise mehboob hi mehboob ke ghar aaya hai* kaise kah du mujhe jannat ki nahi hai aadat aasma tujhse zami par hi nazar aaaya hai jaane diwaane guzar jaaye kaha kab hadd se kaun kahta hai ke qurbat ka asar aaya hai? manzile aayi.n- gayi.n raah me chalte chalte aakhri moD pe ab apna safar aaya hai hosh khokar bhi kadam apne salamat hi rahe baad muddat ke bahot ab ye hunar aaya hai Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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2nd June 2014, 07:23 AM
Le ke paighaam e firaaq aane lagee dekho sahar
ab shab e wasl bhi mehmaaN hai mahaz do pal ki dasht e tanahaayee mein kho jaane se achchha hai magar tere bosey ko liye dhoond leiN reh maqtal ki Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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Zainy saahiba aadaab..... sabse pahle to main aaapkaa shukriyaa adaa karnaa chahungaa jo aapne itnii khuubsurtii ke saath saaaare bikhre hue motee samet kar unhee maala ke roop me piroyaa hai.. aur hamaare saamne pesh kiyaa hai bahot shukriyaa aapke is kadam kaa... Doosrii baat main shukrguzaar hoon un members ka bhii jinhone badh chadh kar hamaara saath diyaa is pratiyogitaa me.. aap hamaare saath kadam se kadam milaa kar chale yahii hamaare liye bahot badee baat hai.... main aap sab ko shubh kaaamnaaen denaa chaahta hoon jo aap sab yahaan tashreef laaye.. apni kaviitaaaen hamaare saath share kiin aur bas ab yahi iltijaa hai ke badh chadh kar voting prakriyaa me hissa len aur apni pasandeeda ghazal ya nazm ya kalaam ko apna pyaar den, use vote den... shubhkaamnaaon ke saath... Shaad... |
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2nd June 2014, 09:32 AM
zainy sahiba mohtarma jee pehle to aapka bahut bahut shukriya....jo aap aate hee kaam pe lag gayin........aur badi hee khoobsurti se is kaam ko uske anjaam tak pahuncha rahi hain,
Main sabhi participants ko bhi best of luck kehta hun aur shukriya bhi kee unhone is comptn. kee raunak banay rakhi.......... Aur ab sabse umeed hai kee sb log saari rachnayein padein aur imaandaari se vote karein..... Thanx. एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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2nd June 2014, 11:35 AM
Bohut khubsoorat hain saari ghazlein! Seedhe dil se nikali aur dil par jaa lagi.
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Jee zarur aap ek se zyada ko vote de sakte hain
Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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2nd June 2014, 04:11 PM
AsSaalaamAlaikm All,
Good on ya Sis! Hats off, toupees off !!! For your sheer effort and dedication! You certainly give your all don you whenever take up something ?? Thank you to all the organizers and participants in no lesser terms ! I have cast my vote purely on relevance in my view... due to the difficulty of choice especially considering the beauty of each and every entry... the works are truly touching heart's strings! Congrats to All! Ahmad |
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Thanks bro..
I'm glad to see you back on SDC Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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helllo naaz , remember me?
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DostoN chaliye jaldi jaldi apne votes dijiye..der kis baat ki hai?
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Done from my side ...................................
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Dear Mods
Kripya meri iss baat ko anyatha na lein, magar agar humne yeh rule banaya hai ki hum mein se kisi ko bhi yeh maloom nahi ho ki kiss ki rachna koun si hai toh kyunki mods ko toh sabka pata hai, kya aapko nahi lagta ki unhe voting karna allowed nahi hona chahiye. plus there shud be a setting by which no one can see who voted whom? Agar maine kuch galat yaa apattijanak kaha ho toh main kshamaprarthi hun. Can there be a setting that it remains a secret that how many votes are given till date to whom so that in the end it will be a big surprise when mods will announce? (just a suggestion) Regards Masti |
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3rd June 2014, 08:30 PM
Masti ji aapko pura haq hai sawaal karne ka aur sujhaav bhi dene ka...
Aapke kahe saare muddoN per hum ghaur karenge...aur baqi mods se discuss bhi karenge... Pls give us some time Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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3rd June 2014, 10:55 PM
Hello to everyone
What a beautiful composition by everyone.It took me so long to vote But the choice narrowed down to 2 poetries No.1 and No.11.both were excellent but the no.1 touched the heart deeply.Congratulations to all the writers everyone has presented excellent work of art. Regards |
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3rd June 2014, 11:38 PM
Thanks for coming here sukanya ji..
Achcha lagaa aapko yahaan dekh ker Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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3rd June 2014, 11:42 PM
***Members ki itella ke liye bata duun members ek se zyada tahreer ko vote de sakte haiN
Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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4th June 2014, 09:36 AM
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एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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4th June 2014, 12:29 PM
Zainy sahibah
MAine vote kar diya hai! manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi |
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4th June 2014, 12:34 PM
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Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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4th June 2014, 08:12 PM
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aapki suggestions per ghuar kiya humne, aapka pehla suggestion ke mods ko vote nahi karna chahiye. ..mere khayaal se bilkul sahi baat hai...kyunki main Aru ji aur shaad sahab is thread per kaam kar rahe hain...isiliye agli baar se Hum teeno vote nahi karenge..baqi mods agar chahe to kar sakte hain.. aapki dusri aur teesri suggestions. .votes kisi ko dikhai na de..ya last me surprise ho...I think workout nahi karenge...possibility hai ke members mods per bharosa na karein..so better yahi hai ke sab kuch khule aam sabke saamne ho.. Hope you understand. . Any more suggestions and advices from any member...most welcome. .. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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5th June 2014, 12:05 PM
Completely agree with Zainy saahiba......
Asal mein pahle bhii isi tarah ke experiment ho chuke hain and as per our previous experience we this time concluded there should be 100 % transparency between users and mods... it would not feel like the dictatorship of mods... hope i am clear . Masti jii main aapka shukriyaa adaa karna chahunga jo aapne apne points saamne rakkhe... aap members ke suggestions and feedback ka hame hamesha hi intzaar rahataa hai... so do keep asking... and you people are always welcome... thanks, Shaad...... |
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5th June 2014, 01:31 PM
sabhi dostoN ko meraa namskaar........
sabse pahle zainy ji aapko SDC pr dobara dekh kr bahut khushi hui..... jaise aapke binaa SDC me jaan hi nhi thi ...shukriyaa ... sabhi rachnaakaroN ne ek se badhkr ek rachnaa yahan likhi hai... kisi ek ko best kahnaa badaa muskil lag rhaa hai, fir bhi niyam ke anusaar hmne apnaa vote kr diyaa hai. NO.10 & 11 ki rachnaaye mujhe bahut hi acchhi lagi. meraa vote bhi en dono rachnaao ko gyaa hai. aisaa lagtaa hai rachnaoN ka melaa lagaa ho TPT pr, bahut dino ke baad ek sath sabhi yahan aaye haiN, umeed aur aasha hai ki ye safar yuN hi chaltaa rahegaa. Aru bhaai aur Shaad ji ki mehnat ka asar hai ye sab , Aru bhaai aur Shaad ji aap dono ka bahut bahut shukriyaa Zainy ji ke aa jaane se to TPT me aur bhi chaar chaand lag gye . shukriyaa Zainy ji. baaki sabhi members se vinti hai ke apnaa vote zarur kareN......... zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !! ===========================  sharma.rajeev701@gmail.com https://www.facebook.com/rajeevsharmaraj111 http://www.rajeevsharmaraj.blogspot.com/ |
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5th June 2014, 01:44 PM
Shukriyah Rajeev ji....
**Sabhi members se meri Guzarish hai ke apni pasandida ghazals/nazms..ko vote dein aur saath me apne comments bhi zarur deiN... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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5th June 2014, 02:59 PM
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Dusri aur teesri suggestion mein main aapki pareshani samajh sakti hun, mujhe acha lagaa aap sabne mere sujhaav ko sakratmak tareeke se liya. Ek aur sujhaav hai ke agar contestant apne aap ko vote na dein( ya akhir mein ginti karte waqt unke apne aap ko diye gaye vote ko kaat diya jaaye) kyunki agar mods bhi pratiyogita mein bhaag le rahe hain aur khud ko vote nahi de paa rahe toh koi bhi khud ko vote nahi de Apki Dost Masti |
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5th June 2014, 03:40 PM
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ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता 
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6th June 2014, 09:49 AM
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phir bhi we will rethink about this issue. . Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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6th June 2014, 09:52 AM
****sabhi voters se meri request hai..plssss give your comment as well...
Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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