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Dilo uthde swaala de jawaab bhejde ,,,!! - 30th October 2010, 03:43 AM
Dilo uthde swaala de jawaab bhejde ....

Eh khushi hai k gam,,,ehda ehsaas v hunda na,,,par fer meriyan palkan kyo bhijan lagg payiyan ,,,,
tainu payeya v nayi aje,,,kyo tainu khohna nayi chaunda,,, ehna dilo uthde swaala de jawaab bhejde !!!!

Kyo ni hunda sabar,,main kahto reha udeek,,,kyo dil nu tere naal gal karn di taang ji laggi a,,,
Mainu kahto kidre v tere bin kuj changa nayi lagda,,,main fer dukhi ja kyo rehan lagg peya,,,bass dilo uthde swaala de jawaab bhejde ,,,!!

kyo mehfila vich dil lagno hat gya,,,kahto gumsum rehna main kyo bheed vich v kalla mehsoosda,,,
Kyo chete kar k tainu dil ja bhar aaunda,,,tu kahto ni mil rahi,,teri yaad kyo khehra nayi chad di,,,dilo uthde swaala de jawaab bhejde,,,!!

Meriyan marr chukkian sadra nu tu kabro kyo jgayeya c,,,hun doori kahto a,,,tu kad meri hona a,,,*
Kyo main tainu choohna chahuna haan,,,tainu apnauna chahuna haan,,,tere to fanah hona loch reha,,ehna dilo uthde swaala de jawaab bhejde,,,!!

Kyo main teriyan akhan vich dubna chahuna ,,,kyo teri akhon hanju ban vehna chahuna,,,kyo teri rag rag vich vasna chahuna ,,,
Kyo tere naal ik rishta mehsoos reha,,,tainu apni vekh reha,,,kyo "raj" shabad rabb to pehla uchaar reha,,,bass ehna dilo uthde swaala de jawaab bhejde ,,,!!

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30th October 2010, 11:41 AM
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Dilo uthde swaala de jawaab bhejde ....

Eh khushi hai k gam,,,
ehda ehsaas v hunda na,,,
par fer meriyan palkan kyo bhijan lagg payiyan ,,,,
tainu payeya v nayi aje,,,
kyo tainu khohna nayi chaunda,,,

ehna dilo uthde swaala de jawaab bhejde !!!!

Kyo ni hunda sabar,,
main kahto reha udeek,,,
kyo dil nu tere naal gal karn di taang ji laggi a,,,
Mainu kahto kidre v tere bin kuj changa nayi lagda,,,
main fer dukhi ja kyo rehan lagg peya,,,

bass dilo uthde swaala de jawaab bhejde ,,,!!

kyo mehfila vich dil lagno hat gya,,,
kahto gumsum rehna main kyo bheed vich v kalla mehsoosda,,,
Kyo chete kar k tainu dil ja bhar aaunda,,,
tu kahto ni mil rahi,,
teri yaad kyo khehra nayi chad di,,,

dilo uthde swaala de jawaab bhejde,,,!!

Meriyan marr chukkian sadra nu tu kabro kyo jgayeya c,,,
hun doori kahto a,,,tu kad meri hona a,,,*
Kyo main tainu choohna chahuna haan,,,
tainu apnauna chahuna haan,,,
tere to fanah hona loch reha,,

ehna dilo uthde swaala de jawaab bhejde,,,!!

Kyo main teriyan akhan vich dubna chahuna ,,,
kyo teri akhon hanju ban vehna chahuna,,,
kyo teri rag rag vich vasna chahuna ,,,
Kyo tere naal ik rishta mehsoos reha,,,
tainu apni vekh reha,,,
kyo "raj" shabad rabb to pehla uchaar reha,,,

bass ehna dilo uthde swaala de jawaab bhejde ,,,!!

Balraj !
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30th October 2010, 06:11 PM
tainu payeya v nayi aje,,,
 kyo tainu khohna nayi chaunda,,,


Balraj Jii,

Boht boht boht khoob.
Teh-e-dil se daad haazir hai,
qabool kijiye....

DuaooN k saath ijaazat,

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[QUOTE=Kavita Negi;414261]Balraj Ji,

bdi sohni kavita likhi hai tusi.......!!! Mainu bhot pasand aaii.......!!! ek nikki jehi guzarish haii.....!!! apni kise v kavita ja shayri nu thoda is trah likho ki padhan vale nu mushkil na hove....!!! Tuhadi is kavita vich kai shabd dil nu chuu gye....!!! dil to daad hazir hai....!!! aida hi likhde rahoo...!!!

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Thanks Kavita negi ji..main ta ajj kaafi samay baad login kita te tuhada reply v hun e dekheya...thnx for liking nd replyin..te main agge to tuhadi gal te v gour karanga...

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