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Maykhana - 23rd September 2015, 09:31 AM

Dil bhar duniyadaari karke aa phunche hein maykhane mein....
Kasam hai saqi der na karna tu mujhko ab bahkaane mein...

Jaam pe jaam pilaate rahna rukna mat tu ae saqi
Mujhe zara hila dena gar mein so jaaun anjaane mein....


Raah na meri takna tum ae deewaron so jaana
Phir se uski yaad aayi hai der lagegi ghar aane mein...


Mar jaayenge pite pite saari duniya kahti hai
Kaise isko samjhayein aaram bahut hai mar jaane mein...


Gar wo tha khiladi shatranjon ka mein bhi to ek pyada tha
Mera bhi ek kissa hoga usko poore afsaane mein...


Bujh na jaana shama tu jalti rahna dheere dheere
Thoda zyada waqt lagega jaan bahut hai parwaane mein...


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23rd September 2015, 10:02 AM

kya baat! kya baat!.....bahut hee asardaar kalaam hua hai gyaan ji..sabhi ashaar bahut achche lage....aate rahiye..
Aur likhte rahiye..



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23rd September 2015, 10:34 AM

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Dil bhar duniyadaari karke aa phunche hein maykhane mein....
Kasam hai saqi der na karna tu mujhko ab bahkaane mein...

Jaam pe jaam pilaate rahna rukna mat tu ae saqi
Mujhe zara hila dena gar mein so jaaun anjaane mein....


Raah na meri takna tum ae deewaron so jaana
Phir se uski yaad aayi hai der lagegi ghar aane mein...


Mar jaayenge pite pite saari duniya kahti hai
Kaise isko samjhayein aaram bahut hai mar jaane mein...


Gar wo tha khiladi shatranjon ka mein bhi to ek pyada tha
Mera bhi ek kissa hoga usko poore afsaane mein...


Bujh na jaana shama tu jalti rahna dheere dheere
Thoda zyada waqt lagega jaan bahut hai parwaane mein...


Wahhhh bahut khoob likha hai aapne Gyan ji....accha lga aapko padna.

aate rhiye aur likhtey rhiye.


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23rd September 2015, 10:35 AM

Wah bhai..

DeewaroN so jaana.. dair lagegi aane main.. .. apne aap main poori shayri hai ye jumle..bohat aala khyaal ..

Aur main ek pyaada hun .. mera koi to jikra hoga afsaane main.. waah waah saahab.. kya kehne .. ek dum taaza ..

Thoda shayri ki takneek ki taraf jaaiye .. saahab qehar dha denge aap .. meri taraf se mubarak baad aise khyaalon ke liye ..

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23rd September 2015, 03:41 PM

Shukriya.

There is typing error in this poetry, I am reposting it as below :

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Dil bhar duniyadaari karke aa phunche hein maykhane mein....
Kasam hai saqi der na karna tu mujhko ab bahkaane mein...

Jaam pe jaam pilaate rahna rukna mat tu ae saqi
Mujhe zara hila dena gar mein so jaaun anjaane mein....


Raah na meri takna tum ae deewaron so jaana
Phir se uski yaad aayi hai der lagegi ghar aane mein...


Mar jaayenge pite pite saari duniya kahti hai
Kaise isko samjhayein aaram bahut hai mar jaane mein...


Gar wo tha khiladi shatranjon ka mein bhi to ek pyada tha
Mera bhi ek kissa hoga uske poore afsaane mein...


Bujh na jaana shama tu jalti rahna dheere dheere
Thoda zyada waqt lagega jaan bahut hai parwaane mein...

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Wahhhh bahut khoob likha hai aapne Gyan ji....accha lga aapko padna.

aate rhiye aur likhtey rhiye.


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23rd September 2015, 03:51 PM

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Dil bhar duniyadaari karke aa phunche hein maykhane mein....
Kasam hai saqi der na karna tu mujhko ab bahkaane mein...

Jaam pe jaam pilaate rahna rukna mat tu ae saqi
Mujhe zara hila dena gar mein so jaaun anjaane mein....


Raah na meri takna tum ae deewaron so jaana
Phir se uski yaad aayi hai der lagegi ghar aane mein...


Mar jaayenge pite pite saari duniya kahti hai
Kaise isko samjhayein aaram bahut hai mar jaane mein...


Gar wo tha khiladi shatranjon ka mein bhi to ek pyada tha
Mera bhi ek kissa hoga usko poore afsaane mein...


Bujh na jaana shama tu jalti rahna dheere dheere
Thoda zyada waqt lagega jaan bahut hai parwaane mein...
Bahut khoob khayaal huye hai Gyan Ji meri jaanib se daad qubool farmayein aur yunhi likhte rahiye aate rahiye



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23rd September 2015, 07:33 PM

bahut khoob............................................. ........................


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28th September 2015, 10:51 AM

kya andaaz hai kyaa jalwaa hai aapke ghazal me gayan saahab....
bahut hi aala tareen peshkash..... likkhte rahiye.... aate rahiye

shaad....


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10th October 2015, 07:42 PM

shukriya Shaad ji.

There is some typing error in it--

I post correct one as below:

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Din bhar duniyadaari karke aa phunche hein maykhane mein....
Kasam hai saqi der na karna tu mujhko ab bahkaane mein...

Jaam pe jaam pilaate rahna rukna mat tu ae saqi
Mujhe zara hila dena gar mein so jaaun anjaane mein....


Raah na meri takna tum ae deewaron so jaana
Phir se uski yaad aayi hai der lagegi ghar aane mein...


Mar jaayenge pite pite saari duniya kahti hai
Kaise isko samjhayein aaram bahut hai mar jaane mein...


Gar wo tha khiladi shatranjon ka mein bhi to ek pyada tha
Mera bhi ek kissa hoga uske poore afsaane mein...


Bujh na jaana shama tu jalti rahna dheere dheere
Thoda zyada waqt lagega jaan bahut hai parwaane mein...


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kya andaaz hai kyaa jalwaa hai aapke ghazal me gayan saahab....
bahut hi aala tareen peshkash..... likkhte rahiye.... aate rahiye

shaad....


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