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Chand - 26th April 2014, 10:50 PM

Roshan karne kisi ki duniya pighla hoga chand kahin
Mere ghar se door shahar mein nikla hoga chand kahin…..

Soye nahin hein Barson se sine mein armaan liye
Raham o inaayat karke dar per aa na jaye chand kahin…..

Dar lagta hai usko apne dil ki baat sunane mein
Phir gusse mein tapta suraj na ban jaye chand kahin……

Jaane kya kya kahkar apne dil ko roz manaate hein
Roz bataate hein isko kya aise milta hai Chand kahin……..

Aasman ka ajab nazara bilkul uske shahar sa hai
Laakh sitare saath kahin per our tanha hai Chand kahin………..
   
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26th April 2014, 11:22 PM

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Roshan karne kisi ki duniya pighla hoga chand kahin
Mere ghar se door shahar mein nikla hoga chand kahin…..

Soye nahin hein Barson se sine mein armaan liye
Raham o inaayat karke dar per aa na jaye chand kahin…..

Dar lagta hai usko apne dil ki baat sunane mein
Phir gusse mein tapta suraj na ban jaye chand kahin……

Jaane kya kya kahkar apne dil ko roz manaate hein
Roz bataate hein isko kya aise milta hai Chand kahin……..

Aasman ka ajab nazara bilkul uske shahar sa hai
Laakh sitare saath kahin per our tanha hai Chand kahin………..
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khoob Ghazal likhi hai . . . bazm ki shaan yuunhi badhate rahiye

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28th April 2014, 12:27 PM

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Roshan karne kisi ki duniya pighla hoga chand kahin
Mere ghar se door shahar mein nikla hoga chand kahin…..

Soye nahin hein Barson se sine mein armaan liye
Raham o inaayat karke dar per aa na jaye chand kahin…..

Dar lagta hai usko apne dil ki baat sunane mein
Phir gusse mein tapta suraj na ban jaye chand kahin……

Jaane kya kya kahkar apne dil ko roz manaate hein
Roz bataate hein isko kya aise milta hai Chand kahin……..

Aasman ka ajab nazara bilkul uske shahar sa hai
Laakh sitare saath kahin per our tanha hai Chand kahin………..
Bahut hi khoob likha aapne saab. Dil ko choo gaye. Likthe rahiye . . .


Kehne ke liye har koi lagta hai apna,
jhaak ke dekhe toh toh har rishta hai ik Sapna . . .
   
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28th April 2014, 09:45 PM

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Roshan karne kisi ki duniya pighla hoga chand kahin
Mere ghar se door shahar mein nikla hoga chand kahin…..

Soye nahin hein Barson se sine mein armaan liye
Raham o inaayat karke dar per aa na jaye chand kahin…..

Dar lagta hai usko apne dil ki baat sunane mein
Phir gusse mein tapta suraj na ban jaye chand kahin……

Jaane kya kya kahkar apne dil ko roz manaate hein
Roz bataate hein isko kya aise milta hai Chand kahin……..

Aasman ka ajab nazara bilkul uske shahar sa hai
Laakh sitare saath kahin per our tanha hai Chand kahin………..


waahhh kyaa khoob andaze bayaan hai saahab... behad ummdaa peshkash.
har sher soz o gham se aarishtaa , ehsaso fikr se saraabor.. bahot mubaarakbaad janaab...

ye sher khaasa pasand aayaa, haasile ghazal hai meri taraf se..

Dar lagta hai usko apne dil ki baat sunane mein
Phir gusse mein tapta suraj na ban jaye chand kahin……


likhte rahen

Shaad...


Shaad...
   
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