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payaambar sabhi benishaa.n reh gaye hai.n - 25th August 2015, 12:25 PM

aaj kii dunya ke haalaat par fikr bayaan karte hue chand sukhan, Gazal ke tarz me pesh kar rahaa huu... irshad farmaaiye....

payaambar sabhii be-nishaa.n reh gaye hai.n
jihaadii1 hue chand yahaa.n reh gaye hai.n

jahaa.n aadmii jaanvar se bhii vahshii
to insaan ab vo kahaa.n reh gaye hai.n

kahi.n goliyaa.n to kahi.n bam ke maare
sabhii mulq ke darmiyaa.n reh gaye hai.n

hai viiraaniyaa.n har jagah har nagar me.n
yahaa.n naam ke gulsitaa.n reh gaye hai.n

the ahl-e-vatan vo fidaa-e-vatan vo
kaii Khaaksii2 nau-javaa.n reh gaye hai.n

jo besharm hai.n naamvar ban gaye hai.n
vahi.n nek-dil ab nihaa.n3 reh gaye hai.n

kahe daastaan-e-azal4 kya Safiir ab
ki zer-o-zabar5 har bayaa.n reh gaye hai.n


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पयाम्बर सभी बेनिशाँ रह गये हैं
जिहादी1 हुए चंद यहां रह गये हैं

जहां आदमी जानवर से भी वहशी
तो इंसान अब वो कहां रह गये हैं

कहीं गोलियां तो कहीं बम के मारे
सभी मुल्क़ के दरमियाँ रह गये हैं

है वीरानियाँ हर जगह हर नगर में
यहां नाम के गुलसिताँ रह गये हैं

थे अहल-ए-वतन वो फ़िदा-ए-वतन वो
कई ख़ाकसी2 नौजवाँ रह गये हैं

जो बेशर्म हैं नामवर बन गये हैं
वहीँ नेकदिल अब निहाँ3 रह गये हैं

कहे दास्तान-ए-अज़ल4 क्या सफ़ीर अब
कि ज़ेर-ओ-ज़बर5 हर बयाँ रह गये हैं

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1 समाजसुधारक / धर्मयोद्धा, crusader
2 ख़ाक में दफ़न; buried in dust or ash
3 अदृष्ट / गुम; hidden
4 अनादिकाल के किस्से; tales of eternity (beginning of life)
5 गड़बड़ / उलटा-पुल्टा; topsy-turvy



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25th August 2015, 01:11 PM

haqeeeqat ko rubaroo karata hua akalaam pesh kiyaa hai aapne aadil saahab...
sach kaha aapne aaj har jagah bas ladaai jhagddaa aur yahi sab hai har desh me.. har dil ki duaa hai ke ab har dil me muhabbat ke phool khilen aur sab mil jul ke rahen....

khush rahiye.... likhte rahiye...

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waah...adeil ji...aapne dunya ke mauzuda halaat par jo fikra jatayi vo aaj shayad har zimmedaar insan ke dil ki fikra hai....bahut khoob ghazal huyi hai is umda khayaal par.....

Daad qubool kijiyega..
Likhte rahein...
Khush rahein....



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25th August 2015, 04:40 PM

Aadeil bhai.....maujooda halaat par aapke vichaar bahut sahi lge, apni baat ko lafzoN meiN bahut khoobsurti se bayaan kiya hai aapne, aapko padna hamesha se achha lagta hai hame, yu hi likhtey rhiye aur bazm meiN aate rhiye.

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haqeeeqat ko rubaroo karata hua akalaam pesh kiyaa hai aapne aadil saahab...
sach kaha aapne aaj har jagah bas ladaai jhagddaa aur yahi sab hai har desh me.. har dil ki duaa hai ke ab har dil me muhabbat ke phool khilen aur sab mil jul ke rahen....

khush rahiye.... likhte rahiye...

shaad.....
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waah...adeil ji...aapne dunya ke mauzuda halaat par jo fikra jatayi vo aaj shayad har zimmedaar insan ke dil ki fikra hai....bahut khoob ghazal huyi hai is umda khayaal par.....

Daad qubool kijiyega..
Likhte rahein...
Khush rahein....
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Aadeil bhai.....maujooda halaat par aapke vichaar bahut sahi lge, apni baat ko lafzoN meiN bahut khoobsurti se bayaan kiya hai aapne, aapko padna hamesha se achha lagta hai hame, yu hi likhtey rhiye aur bazm meiN aate rhiye.

duaoN ke saath
aap sabhi ka shukr guzaar huu, iis adnaa si koshish ko iis qadr navaazish karne ke liye...

sahi kahaa aap sabhi ne ki pyar muhabbat ab rahi hi nahi hai dunya me, in dango aur fasaado se aam insaan ab pareshaan ho gayaa hai....



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