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yaaro, Ghazal sunaao, tabiyat udaas hai (Ghazal) - 7th January 2017, 08:32 AM

PindaaN waali mauj nai labhdi
Yaaran di oh fauj nai labhdi
Kalle manjaa dhaa baithe aaN
"Sandhua" kitthe aa baithe aaN!


.................................................. ...


bazm-e-sukhan sajaao tabiyat udaas hai
yaaro, Ghazal sunaao, tabiyat udaas hai

mai ho ke dawaa ho ye maraz la-ilaaj hai
saaqi zahar pilaao, tabiyat udaas hai

deen-o-haram ki baat kisi aur din sahi
vaiiz, galey lagaao, tabiyat udaas hai

voh aa rahe haiN phir se aaj yaad baar baar
kaaGhaz-qalam uThaao, tabiyat udaas hai

har ashq ne dam toDne se peshtar*, kahaa
“maikash” :unheN: bulaao, tabiyat udaas hai


*peshtar = before, pehle


rab raakha
maikash


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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

maikash
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PindaaN waali mauj nai labhdi
Yaaran di oh fauj nai labhdi
Kalle manjaa dhaa baithe aaN
"Sandhua" kitthe aa baithe aaN!


.................................................. ...


bazm-e-sukhan sajaao tabiyat udaas hai
yaaro, Ghazal sunaao, tabiyat udaas hai

mai ho ke dawaa ho ye maraz la-ilaaj hai
saaqi zahar pilaao, tabiyat udaas hai

deen-o-haram ki baat kisi aur din sahi
vaiiz, galey lagaao, tabiyat udaas hai

voh aa rahe haiN phir se aaj yaad baar baar
kaaGhaz-qalam uThaao, tabiyat udaas hai

har ashq ne dam toDne se peshtar*, kahaa
“maikash” :unheN: bulaao, tabiyat udaas hai


*peshtar = before, pehle


rab raakha
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wahhhhhh Maikash ji.....majja aa gya aapki gazal pad ke, hamesha ki tarah superb

khush rhiye
rabb raakha


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PindaaN waali mauj nai labhdi
Yaaran di oh fauj nai labhdi
Kalle manjaa dhaa baithe aaN
"Sandhua" kitthe aa baithe aaN!


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bazm-e-sukhan sajaao tabiyat udaas hai
yaaro, Ghazal sunaao, tabiyat udaas hai

mai ho ke dawaa ho ye maraz la-ilaaj hai
saaqi zahar pilaao, tabiyat udaas hai

deen-o-haram ki baat kisi aur din sahi
vaiiz, galey lagaao, tabiyat udaas hai

voh aa rahe haiN phir se aaj yaad baar baar
kaaGhaz-qalam uThaao, tabiyat udaas hai

har ashq ne dam toDne se peshtar*, kahaa
“maikash” :unheN: bulaao, tabiyat udaas hai


*peshtar = before, pehle


rab raakha
maikash
Bas ek hee lafz...lajwaab.!!!!!

Salamat rahein....



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PindaaN waali mauj nai labhdi
Yaaran di oh fauj nai labhdi
Kalle manjaa dhaa baithe aaN
"Sandhua" kitthe aa baithe aaN!


.................................................. ...


bazm-e-sukhan sajaao tabiyat udaas hai
yaaro, Ghazal sunaao, tabiyat udaas hai

mai ho ke dawaa ho ye maraz la-ilaaj hai
saaqi zahar pilaao, tabiyat udaas hai

deen-o-haram ki baat kisi aur din sahi
vaiiz, galey lagaao, tabiyat udaas hai

voh aa rahe haiN phir se aaj yaad baar baar
kaaGhaz-qalam uThaao, tabiyat udaas hai

har ashq ne dam toDne se peshtar*, kahaa
“maikash” :unheN: bulaao, tabiyat udaas hai


*peshtar = before, pehle


rab raakha
maikash
Umdaa ustaad...har sher mein vo kashish ki kya baat hai....bechain dil ko qaraar aa gaya....yunhi likhte rahiye janaab...



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13th January 2017, 03:27 AM

Shukriya, aap sab ka

baraa-e-meherbaani, rasmii "waah-waah" se parhez kiya kijiye


rab raakha jee
maikash


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goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

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baraa-e-meherbaani, rasmii "waah-waah" se parhez kiya kijiye


rab raakha jee
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aisa kyun laga aapko ki yeh rasmii waah-waah hai?



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baraa-e-meherbaani, rasmii "waah-waah" se parhez kiya kijiye


rab raakha jee
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rasmi waah waah.............??



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just an observation.


stay safe and sound.

rab raakha
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

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BAhut dino baad aapko pada kailash sahab..it's really wonderful creation of yours....



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PindaaN waali mauj nai labhdi
Yaaran di oh fauj nai labhdi
Kalle manjaa dhaa baithe aaN
"Sandhua" kitthe aa baithe aaN!


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bazm-e-sukhan sajaao tabiyat udaas hai
yaaro, Ghazal sunaao, tabiyat udaas hai

mai ho ke dawaa ho ye maraz la-ilaaj hai
saaqi zahar pilaao, tabiyat udaas hai

deen-o-haram ki baat kisi aur din sahi
vaiiz, galey lagaao, tabiyat udaas hai

voh aa rahe haiN phir se aaj yaad baar baar
kaaGhaz-qalam uThaao, tabiyat udaas hai

har ashq ne dam toDne se peshtar*, kahaa
“maikash” :unheN: bulaao, tabiyat udaas hai


*peshtar = before, pehle


rab raakha
maikash


maikash bhai tak shaad ka aadaab pahoNche.....
ummeed karta hoon khairiyat se honge, aaj aapki is taazaa tareen ghazal pe nazar gayee to main khud ko maikash mahsoos kar raha hoon...
dil ko itnaa sukoon mil raha hai aapke kalaam ke lafz lafz se ke bayaan nahi kiyaa ja sakta, bas use mahsoos karke sukoon paaya jaa sakta hai....

aapki kalam me waaqai jaadu sa hai koii..... ham khushnaseeb hain jo aap jaise aalaa shayaron ki sohbat me pal rahe hain seekh rahe hain....
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tashreef laate rahiye.... apna khayaal rakhiye.. likhte rahiye

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aaj aik baar phir se aapki gazal padne ka dil hua to yeh sher bas jubaaN par atak gya aaj apna bhi dil udhas hai

bazm-e-sukhan sajaao tabiyat udaas hai
yaaro, Ghazal sunaao, tabiyat udaas hai


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har ashq ne dam toDne se peshtar*, kahaa
“maikash” :unheN: bulaao, tabiyat udaas hai


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excellent - 17th July 2017, 01:45 PM

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PindaaN waali mauj nai labhdi
Yaaran di oh fauj nai labhdi
Kalle manjaa dhaa baithe aaN
"Sandhua" kitthe aa baithe aaN!


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bazm-e-sukhan sajaao tabiyat udaas hai
yaaro, Ghazal sunaao, tabiyat udaas hai

mai ho ke dawaa ho ye maraz la-ilaaj hai
saaqi zahar pilaao, tabiyat udaas hai

deen-o-haram ki baat kisi aur din sahi
vaiiz, galey lagaao, tabiyat udaas hai

voh aa rahe haiN phir se aaj yaad baar baar
kaaGhaz-qalam uThaao, tabiyat udaas hai

har ashq ne dam toDne se peshtar*, kahaa
“maikash” :unheN: bulaao, tabiyat udaas hai


*peshtar = before, pehle


rab raakha
maikash
bahut dino baad punah aapko padha... bahut sunder rachana likhi hai aapne..

shubhkamnao sahit
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voh aa rahe haiN phir se aaj yaad baar baar
kaaGhaz-qalam uThaao, tabiyat udaas hai

Waaah..lajawaab ghazal..
Har ek sher zabardast..

Likhte rahiye...khaas aapki ghazalein padhne ..kaafi log ab bhi Sdc per aate hain.

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