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Shabd Be-Zubaan ho jaayen - 10th November 2005, 02:53 PM
Itna dard mujhe dedo tum
aankhen bhi darpan ban jayen
Itney taaney maaro mujhko
ki shabd be-zubaan ho jayen

Poora nirdhan kardo mujhko
ki dekh bhikari sharmaye
Itney sikkon ka udhaar dedo
ki jaali note bhi aaj ittraaye

Jinki raah dag-mag karti hai
unke rastey bhi banwaye
Main tow tthera nirdhan pagal
bhaley meri duniya chup jaye

Desh utthaalo kanddhon per
iss-se pehle koi ghabraye
Mere gaon ko jala dow chahe
yadi kisi ka ghar banjaaye

Uss mein wahi rang karwana
jis ghar ki Mitti mekaahey
Itna khayaal bas rakh lena
wahan jaat-paat na bas jaaye

Jo shilaayein itihaas bangayi
unko na koi haath lagaaye
Desh ka koi Dharm churakar
Mandir-Maszid na banwaaye

Dua meri har insaa Dil ki
ummeedon ka pull ban jaye
Chahe asamay Mrityu mujhko
yatha-katha ka geet sunaaye

Itna dard mujhe tum dedo
...ki mere shabd be-zubaan ho jayen

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10th November 2005, 05:36 PM
Vipin Ji,
Bahut mushkilon se bante hain rishte is jahan mein, aapki rachna ne ek baar phir sochne pe majboor kar diya
Khaaskar yeh panktiyaan

Jo shilaayein itihaas bangayi
unko na koi haath lagaaye
Desh ka koi Dharm churakar
Mandir-Maszid na banwaaye

kaash yeh soch har insaan ki ho toh jina kitna aasaan ban jayega.
Is umeed ke saath ki samaaj mein yeh soch bhi ik din panpegi, aapka teh dil se shukriya ise humare saath share karne ke liye.

Yun hi likhte rahiye

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10th November 2005, 05:42 PM
sach me alfaaz nahi hai.. kuchh kehane ke liye..

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10th November 2005, 06:03 PM
bhaiya aapke har kalaam ko padhne ke baad mujhe apne aastitva par shak hone lagta hai..................


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10th November 2005, 06:45 PM
vipin ji,
woh alfaas kahan se lau aapki is anmol rachna ke liye. shayad aaj jitna bhi kahunghi woh kam hoga. there r very few like ur thoughts vipin ji. doosron ki khusiyon ke liye unke gamon ko aapnane ki soch, sach mein dil ko chu gaya aapka likha hua har alfaas.duniya mein chalo pyaar le kar tum chale,deepak ke saath tum tam mitaane chale,jeevan ka mulya mit raha hai is jag mein,ek koshish hai unhe fir se tum basaane chale,vishwaas ho raha hai ye banega haqiqat,roshani tum sabko dikhaane chale. vipin ji ur thoughts made me speechless.this was wat i cud make out after reading u. learnt sumthing again todayy from ur wonderful creation. very few like u think for others. gr8. keep penning down ur thoughts ahead too n keep sharing among us. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.
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Post 10th November 2005, 07:21 PM
Awaz Ji,
Aapne sahi kaha ki muskil se ban-te hain yahan rishtey....
magar toot-ney ke liye bas ek hee lamha.............Jane kaisa insaaf hai yeh

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Lucky Ji,
Main hamesha se hee chahata ttha ki koi apna astitva na khoye...magar meri lakeeron se yadi aapko aisa laga tow yeh mere liye theek nahin hai. Jabki mere shabd ki suruvaat Astitva ko dhoondney se hee suru hoti hai....

Muaafi Chahunga Lucky Sir

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Aapka dhanyavaad karta hoon Roshni ji, aapke shabd ne himmat dee hai mujhe.

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10th November 2005, 09:20 PM
bhaiya mere kehne ka tatparya tha ki mujhe apne wartmaan ke aastitva pe shak hone lagta hai.mujhe lagta hai ki main jis duniya me jee raha hoon wo poori hi jhoothi hai.mera aastitva bhi jhootha hai.bas aapke shabdon me apni(ek insaan ki)ek sachhi pehchan dhoodhta hoon.bas aap yunhi likhte rahiye.

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10th November 2005, 10:40 PM
aapki rachna jaabhi padhti hoon moonh se shabd nahi nikalte hain vipinji...aapka ek ek lafz wajood ko jado se hila deta hai...
bahaut accha likkha hai aapne hamesha ki tarah....mein toh aapko veerachon ki deewani si hogayi hoon....yuhin likhte rahiyega.
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Lucky Ji,
Muaafi chahunga lucky bhai...mujhse samajhney mein galti hui hai...umeed hai aap mujhe muaaf kar dengey

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Farhana Ji,
Itney bade shabd keh diye hain aapne. Meri maamooli si lakeeron ko aapne jitna ooncha sthaan diya hai...woh itney oonchayeen ke qabil nahin hain. Agar aapko mere shabd thodey se bhi acche lage tow yeh meri khusnaseebi hai ki aap log mere shabdon ko parh rahe hain.

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Re: Shabd Be-Zubaan ho jaayen - 25th March 2006, 10:55 PM
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Itna dard mujhe dedo tum
aankhen bhi darpan ban jayen
Itney taaney maaro mujhko
ki shabd be-zubaan ho jayen

Poora nirdhan kardo mujhko
ki dekh bhikari sharmaye
Itney sikkon ka udhaar dedo
ki jaali note bhi aaj ittraaye

Jinki raah dag-mag karti hai
unke rastey bhi banwaye
Main tow tthera nirdhan pagal
bhaley meri duniya chup jaye

Desh utthaalo kanddhon per
iss-se pehle koi ghabraye
Mere gaon ko jala dow chahe
yadi kisi ka ghar banjaaye

Uss mein wahi rang karwana
jis ghar ki Mitti mekaahey
Itna khayaal bas rakh lena
wahan jaat-paat na bas jaaye

Jo shilaayein itihaas bangayi
unko na koi haath lagaaye
Desh ka koi Dharm churakar
Mandir-Maszid na banwaaye

Dua meri har insaa Dil ki
ummeedon ka pull ban jaye
Chahe asamay Mrityu mujhko
yatha-katha ka geet sunaaye

Itna dard mujhe tum dedo
...ki mere shabd be-zubaan ho jayen

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Re: Shabd Be-Zubaan ho jaayen - 26th March 2006, 08:00 PM
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Re: Re: Shabd Be-Zubaan ho jaayen - 1st April 2006, 01:18 PM
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tumari is rachna ko padkar muje sach mei esa khayal aya ki bas, ab sab kuch padliya hei. tumare shabado se ladne ka sahas milta hei bohat. meri vinti hei tumse ki sada yuhi hi likte rena.

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dhayavaad kaanch

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1st April 2006, 01:34 PM
wow vipin ji ..........bahut hi sundar likha hai aapne......

really very nice..........


Itna dard mujhe dedo tum
aankhen bhi darpan ban jayen
Itney taaney maaro mujhko
ki shabd be-zubaan ho jayen

with best wishes

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25th April 2006, 04:15 PM
Namaskaar Ranju Ji aur Saathi ji

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27th April 2006, 07:34 PM
Desh utthaalo kanddhon per
iss-se pehle koi ghabraye
Mere gaon ko jala dow chahe
yadi kisi ka ghar banjaaye

Uss mein wahi rang karwana
jis ghar ki Mitti mekaahey
Itna khayaal bas rakh lena
wahan jaat-paat na bas jaaye

Namaskar Vipin Ji

One of ur best inspirational poetry...Sach mein Shabd be Zubaan ho gaye issey padhkar......if everybody has such inspirational thoughts world can become a better place to live......

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27th April 2006, 10:16 PM
Namaskar Vipin Ji

One of ur best inspirational poetry...Sach mein Shabd be Zubaan ho gaye issey padhkar......if everybody has such inspirational thoughts world can become a better place to live......

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aapka dhanyavaad karna chahunga isper apne vichaar rakhney ke liye.

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29th April 2006, 01:01 PM
dear vipin ji,

Isse pehle bhi parha tha, aaj phir se parha aur kuch hadd tak mehsoos bhi kiya, bahut achha likha hain... keep writting.
   
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29th April 2006, 07:41 PM
Vipin jee..

Namskaar...

ek umda nazm.. Dard se bhara huya lekiN dil ko chhuta huya har aashaar... daad kubool kareN...

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