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Thumbs up Ghazal: MuHabbat mujhe tum hasaa’O rulaa'O...! - 9th October 2013, 09:17 PM
Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab!

aik Ghazal peSh kar rahaa huuN ..ummid kartaa huuN aapka Pyaar aur saath mujhe Zaruur milengaa... mulaa'iizaa farmaayeN

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Kabhee paas aao kabhee door jaa'O
MuHabbat mujhe tum hasaa’O rulaa'O

Ke dunyaa hai kehtee mujhe deKh kar ye
Chalo ChhoD bhee do use naa sataa'O

kahaaN se kahaaN tak mi’raa daayaraa haii
mujhe ziNdagee tum bataa’O bataa’O

diKhaaO naa JhooThaa diKhaawaa kabhee bhee
jo Sach haii usii ko sadaa tum diKhaa'O

Zamaanaa baDaa hi sayaanaa hai yaaroN
isey raaz dil ke kabhee naa sunaa’O

diloN ki ameeree Khatam ho chukee haii
kahe log fir bhee Ghareebee miTaa’O

suno JOSH sab ko zaraa Gaur se tum
sahee kyaa Ghalat kyaa use DhooNDh laa'O

miyaaN JOSH kehte wafaa ab kahaaN haii?
jahaaN marzi chaahe wahaaN dil lagaa'O


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*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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10th October 2013, 01:25 PM
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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab!

aik Ghazal peSh kar rahaa huuN ..ummid kartaa huuN aapka Pyaar aur saath mujhe Zaruur milengaa... mulaa'iizaa farmaayeN

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Kabhee paas aao kabhee door jaa'O
MuHabbat mujhe tum hasaa’O rulaa'O

Ke dunyaa hai kehtee mujhe deKh kar ye
Chalo ChhoD bhee do use naa sataa'O

kahaaN se kahaaN tak mi’raa daayaraa haii
mujhe ziNdagee tum bataa’O bataa’O

diKhaaO naa JhooThaa diKhaawaa kabhee bhee
jo Sach haii usii ko sadaa tum diKhaa'O

Zamaanaa baDaa hi sayaanaa hai yaaroN
isey raaz dil ke kabhee naa sunaa’O

diloN ki ameeree Khatam ho chukee haii
kahe log fir bhee Ghareebee miTaa’O

suno JOSH sab ko zaraa Gaur se tum
sahee kyaa Ghalat kyaa use DhooNDh laa'O

miyaaN JOSH kehte wafaa ab kahaaN haii?
jahaaN marzi chaahe wahaaN dil lagaa'O


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bahot khoob ghazal kahi hai aapne Dhaval bhai..... Beshaq ab aapki kalam me thahraaw aur gahraai aatii jaa rahi hai.... behad ummdah ehsaas, bahot aalaa bayaani rahi aapki ... likhte raheN.

Do do maqte ka istemaal bahot khoob lagaa.......

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12th October 2013, 01:45 PM
Dhaval ji .... Aap ki ghazal bahaut pasand aayee .... Fiqr ki gehraayee aur bayaan ki rawaangee ..... in donon ka ek khoobsurat mel raha .... meri jaanib se dheron daad aur mubaarakbaad !
   
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14th October 2013, 10:56 AM
Chottu..........ahsaas pasand aaye hame.....bahut khoobsurat likha hai....yu hi likhte rho.........!

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18th October 2013, 11:07 AM
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bahot khoob ghazal kahi hai aapne Dhaval bhai..... Beshaq ab aapki kalam me thahraaw aur gahraai aatii jaa rahi hai.... behad ummdah ehsaas, bahot aalaa bayaani rahi aapki ... likhte raheN.

Do do maqte ka istemaal bahot khoob lagaa.......

Khush rahye


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ShuKriyaah Shaad bhaii

saath dete rahiye aage bhee,,, aage aur bhee mehnat zaaree rahengii

KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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19th October 2013, 12:59 AM
Dear Dhaval..

kaise ho? hope ki thik hi honge.. aapki ghazal padh raha hoon.. aur yah line badi ghahraayi tak chhap chhod rahi hai..

diloN ki ameeree Khatam ho chukee haii
kahe log fir bhee Ghareebee miTaa’O

shubhkamnao sahit,

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Kya baat hai Dhaval................parhkar gunguna bhi raha hoon.........
aaj bahaut samay baad yaha aaya aur aakpi is khoobsurat ghazal se parichay hua.......yunhi likhtey raho aur sabhi ko parahtey raho

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