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umminde laga baithe .. - 29th May 2003, 05:26 PM

Hum dil se kaisi kaisi umminde laga baithe
Jo mil nahi sakta khuda se mang vo baithe

Hoti nahi kabool kisi waqt meri dua
Ye jante hue bhi kyon hum sar jhuka baithe

Mere khuda se to hume kuch hasil na hona tha
Kyon aapko dekha to hum apna samjh baithe

Meri khata ko aap nadani samjhiyega
Anjane me jo aapka hum dil dukha baithe

Meri palak ke aansuoo par na gaur kariyega
Aisa na ho ki aap khud ko bhi rula baithe

na hoiyega khud ghadi bhar ko kabhi gumgeen
bhole se hi jo aapko hum yaad aa baithe ..


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gr8 - 29th May 2003, 05:32 PM

hello kshitiz ji,
mere pass lafj nahi hai ye bayan karne ke liye ki aapne kitni umda nazm likhi hai............dil ko choo gayi hai....
aur khas kar ye do lines to mujhe bahut pasan aayi....

Meri palak ke aansuoo par na gaur kariyega
Aisa na ho ki aap khud ko bhi rula baithe

daad ke saath...........
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29th May 2003, 05:42 PM

waah kshitij saahab
kya khoob kaha hai aap ne aap ke saamne to hum pheeke pad gaye
walla aap ki shayari main damm hai
keep it up n kabhi time mile to hamari shayari padd liye ga
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29th May 2003, 06:16 PM

........Hoti nahi kabool kisi waqt meri dua
Ye jante hue bhi kyon hum sar jhuka baithe
really! aap bahut hi aachha likhtey hai.
lafz nahin mil rahey hai...
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29th May 2003, 06:21 PM

wah dost ab hum aap ki kya tareef kare aap ko to pehle se hi bahut khobsurat se treef mil chuki hai ..... bus hum itna hi kahege ki aap ne sach main accha likh diya hai ..aur bus koi aur baat nahin kah sakta hoon main


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29th May 2003, 06:28 PM

pari ji
tah E dil se shukriaya ada aapka , aapne apni najar E inyata is nacheej se Qalam par faramayi
aap bhi vakey bahut khoobsorat likhti hain main aapki bahut si composition padhi aur yakin maniye vo bahut hi jabardast thi ..magar is dil ke sath ek bahut kharab baat hai ise jo cheej bahut achhi lagti hai uski tareef nahi kar pata coz aapne faramaya na ki lafj hi nahi milte ..
likhti rahiye ..
thx again to write me ..


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29th May 2003, 06:34 PM

jaf bhai
hume iljam dene se pahle ek najar apni Qalam pe dali hoti bhai apne aaj Qalam likha hai aur humne use padha bhi hai Qalam kaisa hai ye to aap apni post par hi dekh lijiye ..
bhai is taraf najre adaa karne ka bahut bahut shukriya
likhte rahiye bhai jan
aapka dost ..


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29th May 2003, 06:36 PM

Kshitiz bhai,

Bahut hi achha likha hai aapne ek baar fir..ye kalaam bhi asar chod gaya dil par hanesha ki tareh..

Hoti nahi kabool kisi waqt meri dua
Ye jante hue bhi kyon hum sar jhuka baithe

Meri palak ke aansuoo par na gaur kariyega
Aisa na ho ki aap khud ko bhi rula baithe

Wah wah kshitiz ji,kammaal ka likha hai aapne..

Likhte rahiye
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29th May 2003, 06:39 PM

meetu ji
aapki tareef ke aage mera shukriya bahut adnaa ho jayega magar majboori hai , humare paas iske alava kuch hai hi nahi .. agar iske alava kuch aur hota to vo bhi adaa kar dete ..
filhal is shuklriya ke sath apna haq adaa karne ki koshish kata hu ..
care to write me ..


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29th May 2003, 06:41 PM

amrit ji
aap idhar meharban hain ye kya meri kam tareef hai ..
bahi bahut bahut shukriya najr E karam farmane ke liye ..
likhte rahiye ..


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29th May 2003, 06:44 PM

varinder bhai
likhte to aap bhi bahut gajab ka hain ..
filhal meri hausla afjai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya bhai
sah me rahiye isi tarah
pyar ke sath ..


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29th May 2003, 09:17 PM

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jaf bhai
hume iljam dene se pahle ek najar apni Qalam pe dali hoti bhai apne aaj Qalam likha hai aur humne use padha bhi hai Qalam kaisa hai ye to aap apni post par hi dekh lijiye ..
bhai is taraf najre adaa karne ka bahut bahut shukriya
likhte rahiye bhai jan
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30th May 2003, 02:27 PM

namate...kshitiz ji..

dost pehle too mein apse.. mafi mangna chahta hun ke.. itna late.. iss pyari si nizam ko padi...waise wah kya khoob likha hai sirkar appne..i m out of words..

aise hi likhte rahiye ga..

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30th May 2003, 08:34 PM

Kshitiz bhai,
aadaab arz hai!

behtaareeN lafzoN ke zariye aapne dil ke kone meiN chuphe hue jazbaatoN ko ik ghazal meiN badlaa hai, paD kar bahot achchaa laggaa!

"Meri palak ke aansuoo par na gaur kariyega
Aisa na ho ki aap khud ko bhi rula baithe
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kyaa kehnaa apkii ghazal ke baare meiN, jitnii bhii taareef karuuN gaa, woh bhii kam paD jaaye gii.

isii taraH sajaate rahiye mehfil ko..

taareef ke saath,
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30th May 2003, 09:01 PM

tanhai ji
app to sharminda kar dete hain bhai aap agar humse mufai mangenge to vakey khud ko muaf karne ke Qabil bhi nahi rah jayege ama miya der se sahi magar aapne najar idhar kari to yahi bahut hai ..
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30th May 2003, 09:13 PM

aman bhai
najar E karam farmane ka bahut bahut shukriya
ab jab aap tareef kar rahe hain to Qalam me kuch to khas hoga hi hum to bas itna kahenge ki apni najar E inayat aise hi farmate rahiye ..
khuda hafiz ..


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[QUOTE=kshitiz;29179]Hum dil se kaisi kaisi umminde laga baithe
Jo mil nahi sakta khuda se mang vo baithe

Hoti nahi kabool kisi waqt meri dua
Ye jante hue bhi kyon hum sar jhuka baithe

Mere khuda se to hume kuch hasil na hona tha
Kyon aapko dekha to hum apna samjh baithe

Meri khata ko aap nadani samjhiyega
Anjane me jo aapka hum dil dukha baithe

Meri palak ke aansuoo par na gaur kariyega
Aisa na ho ki aap khud ko bhi rula baithe

na hoiyega khud ghadi bhar ko kabhi gumgeen
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Hum dil se kaisi kaisi umminde laga baithe
Jo mil nahi sakta khuda se mang vo baithe

Hoti nahi kabool kisi waqt meri dua
Ye jante hue bhi kyon hum sar jhuka baithe

Mere khuda se to hume kuch hasil na hona tha
Kyon aapko dekha to hum apna samjh baithe

Meri khata ko aap nadani samjhiyega
Anjane me jo aapka hum dil dukha baithe

Meri palak ke aansuoo par na gaur kariyega
Aisa na ho ki aap khud ko bhi rula baithe

na hoiyega khud ghadi bhar ko kabhi gumgeen
bhole se hi jo aapko hum yaad aa baithe ..

sarkar ko is adne se bhai ka salaam,

bhai hum aapse bahut naraaz hain na aap aa rahe hain site pe jabki aapne waada kiya tha aur na koi contact na koi khabar.ye koi baat hui........


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