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Duppattey Ki Gaanth - 1st July 2009, 09:02 PM




Duppattey Ki Gaanth

Tere Duppattey ki
us gaanth ko main
aaj bhi kahan
bhool paaya hoon,
jise aksar tu
mere na milney per
baandha karti thi,
aur wahi teri naaraazgi ki
nishaani si ban gayi thi.
Jane kyon nahin
himmat jutaa paata tha main
us gaanth ko kholney ki.
Jaanta tow tha
apni galtiyon ko per
kabhi jata nahin paata tha main.

Duppattey ki us gaanth ko
kholney ki aaj mujhmein
himmat tow hai
magar!!
gaanth laga hua
woh Duppatta
aaj jaaney kahan
gumm ho gaya hai


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2nd July 2009, 02:50 AM

Katl yaar

HAtsss offfff

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aur uska byaan

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2nd July 2009, 09:03 AM

Vipin jee:

pranaam!

chaNd lafzoN meiN bahot kuch keh diyaa aapki ees rachanaa ne.. daad!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

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2nd July 2009, 02:33 PM

vipin ji namskaar

aapki kavitaon main maine hamesha ek alag hi nazariya paya hai

aur kitna sahi kaha hai aapne apni galtiyon ko apni kamiyon ko hum jante huye bhii unhe accept karne ki himmat kahan juta pate hain

meriii daad kabool farmaiyega

shukriyaa

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2nd July 2009, 02:58 PM

Vipin Jii......

Itna katil na likho yaar dil ko lagta hai...... so nice
superb thought and wel expression n feeling.....

keep it up.... excelent..
Be happy God bless you..


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3rd July 2009, 11:53 AM

Vipin bhai,

Humesha ki tarah dil ko cheer ke nikal gaye aapke alfaaz... daad kubool kijiye... likhte rahiye...


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4th July 2009, 11:37 AM

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Duppattey Ki Gaanth

Tere Duppattey ki
us gaanth ko main
aaj bhi kahan
bhool paaya hoon,
jise aksar tu
mere na milney per
baandha karti thi,
aur wahi teri naaraazgi ki
nishaani si ban gayi thi.
Jane kyon nahin
himmat jutaa paata tha main
us gaanth ko kholney ki.
Jaanta tow tha
apni galtiyon ko per
kabhi jata nahin paata tha main.

Duppattey ki us gaanth ko
kholney ki aaj mujhmein
himmat tow hai
magar!!
gaanth laga hua
woh Duppatta
aaj jaaney kahan
gumm ho gaya hai
Vipin bhai,

bahot khoob...dil se daad kubool kijiye..nayaapan hota hai aapki nazmoeN maiN

khush rahiye..god bless

aapka dost,
Pradhyuman


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4th July 2009, 06:59 PM

aapka dhanyavaad Janumanu Ji
aapne samay nikal aur mere prayaas ko parha

aabhaar
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Pranaam Dhaval Ji
aapko fir apney prayaas mein paakar bahaut khushi hui.....


aabhaar
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Namaskaar Dilip Ji
aapne mere prayaas per apney vichaar rakhey tow accha laga. bahaut himmat milti hai aap jaise doston ko apney prayaas mein paakar.

aabhaar
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Dhanyavaad Khwahish ji
aap aaye aur mujhe parha....yeh dekh khushi hui

aabhaar
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Pulkit Ji
Hamesha hee ki tarah aapkey vichaar parhkar bahaut accha laga.....yunhi aatey rahiyega.


aabhaar
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Namaskaar Pradhyuman Ji
accha laga aapko bhi apney is chotey se prayaas mein paakar. Himmat detey rahiyega.


aabhaar
vipin


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4th July 2009, 08:28 PM

Vipin saheb aapne to bas rula hi diya tha.....bohat bohat umda peshkash.


Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil

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5th July 2009, 11:12 AM



Vipin ji.....aapki rachna ka ehsaas mere dil ko chhu gaya....very nice... ek khubsurat pal ko rachnabadh karne ki aapki prastuti ne mujhe bahut parbhavit kiyaa..........




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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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5th July 2009, 12:32 PM

vipin jee bahut khoob likha hai aapne........ kya baat hai dil ko choo lene waali rachna daad kubool kijiyega



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Sajid Ji
Meri koshish ko aapne parha, yeh dekh accha laga........aapka dhanyavaad.

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Naresh Ji
Aap phir mujhe parhney aaye aur apney vichaar rakhey. Aapka bahaut bahaut dhanyavaad.

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Mere prayaas ko parhney ke liye aapka dhanyavaad.

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