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...kya mujhe ijaazat hai? - 26th August 2011, 01:29 PM
yaar ke liye sajde mein, haan sar jhukaane ki aadat hai
jahaan uska ghar hai, us hi disha mein meri ibaadat hai

meri rooh mar gayi toh ise apna gunah mat samajh lena
yeh maut bhi shayad, mere paak ishq ki ek shahadat hai

zubaan gaddaar ban baiThe, jab shikayat karni ho dil ko
yaar ke deedaar-e-rukh mein kuchchh itni lataafat hai

mahboos rahe teri soch mein, aur matrook tere ishq se
phir bhi teri yaadon ke gulshan ki sada hi ki hifaazat hai

yoon to nazar-e-karam kab ki uTh chuki 'Anmol' se aapki
magar kya phir bhi mujhe aapko chahne ki ijaazat hai?
   
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yaar ke liye sajde mein, haan sar jhukaane ki aadat hai
jahaan uska ghar hai, us hi disha mein meri ibaadat hai

meri rooh mar gayi toh ise apna gunah mat samajh lena
yeh maut bhi shayad, mere paak ishq ki ek shahadat hai

zubaan gaddaar ban baiThe, jab shikayat karni ho dil ko
yaar ke deedaar-e-rukh mein kuchchh itni lataafat hai

mahboos rahe teri soch mein, aur matrook tere ishq se
phir bhi teri yaadon ke gulshan ki sada hi ki hifaazat hai

yoon to nazar-e-karam kab ki uTh chuki 'Anmol' se aapki
magar kya phir bhi mujhe aapko chahne ki ijaazat hai?
bahut khoob anmol bhai
radhe radhe

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Love 27th August 2011, 05:59 PM
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yaar ke liye sajde mein, haan sar jhukaane ki aadat hai
jahaan uska ghar hai, us hi disha mein meri ibaadat hai

meri rooh mar gayi toh ise apna gunah mat samajh lena
yeh maut bhi shayad, mere paak ishq ki ek shahadat hai

zubaan gaddaar ban baiThe, jab shikayat karni ho dil ko
yaar ke deedaar-e-rukh mein kuchchh itni lataafat hai

mahboos rahe teri soch mein, aur matrook tere ishq se
phir bhi teri yaadon ke gulshan ki sada hi ki hifaazat hai

yoon to nazar-e-karam kab ki uTh chuki 'Anmol' se aapki
magar kya phir bhi mujhe aapko chahne ki ijaazat hai?
waise toh puri ghazal hi behadh khubsurat hai par aakhri line bas dil chiir kar gayi
bahot khub sahab...please keep sharing

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28th August 2011, 01:41 PM
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28th August 2011, 06:57 PM
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yaar ke liye sajde mein, haan sar jhukaane ki aadat hai
jahaan uska ghar hai, us hi disha mein meri ibaadat hai

meri rooh mar gayi toh ise apna gunah mat samajh lena
yeh maut bhi shayad, mere paak ishq ki ek shahadat hai

zubaan gaddaar ban baiThe, jab shikayat karni ho dil ko
yaar ke deedaar-e-rukh mein kuchchh itni lataafat hai

mahboos rahe teri soch mein, aur matrook tere ishq se
phir bhi teri yaadon ke gulshan ki sada hi ki hifaazat hai

yoon to nazar-e-karam kab ki uTh chuki 'Anmol' se aapki
magar kya phir bhi mujhe aapko chahne ki ijaazat hai?
zakhmi ji aapki ye peshkash behad pasaNd aayee mujhe....dil se daad haazir hai qubuul kijiyega...

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waise toh puri ghazal hi behadh khubsurat hai par aakhri line bas dil chiir kar gayi
bahot khub sahab...please keep sharing

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meri rooh mar gayi toh ise apna gunah mat samajh lena
yeh maut bhi shayad, mere paak ishq ki ek shahadat hai

yoon to nazar-e-karam kab ki uTh chuki 'Anmol' se aapki
magar kya phir bhi mujhe aapko chahne ki ijaazat hai?
zakhmee sahab, Namashkar......!

ye 2 sher mujhe bahut pasand aaye inke liye daad hazir hai sahab...
issi tarah likhte rahiye .......

aapka.

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aapka likha bahaut pasand aaya........
"yaar ke liye sajde mein, haan sar jhukaane ki aadat hai | jahaan uska ghar hai, us hi disha mein meri ibaadat hai"

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yaar ke liye sajde mein, haan sar jhukaane ki aadat hai
jahaan uska ghar hai, us hi disha mein meri ibaadat hai

meri rooh mar gayi toh ise apna gunah mat samajh lena
yeh maut bhi shayad, mere paak ishq ki ek shahadat hai

zubaan gaddaar ban baiThe, jab shikayat karni ho dil ko
yaar ke deedaar-e-rukh mein kuchchh itni lataafat hai

mahboos rahe teri soch mein, aur matrook tere ishq se
phir bhi teri yaadon ke gulshan ki sada hi ki hifaazat hai

yoon to nazar-e-karam kab ki uTh chuki 'Anmol' se aapki
magar kya phir bhi mujhe aapko chahne ki ijaazat hai?

Anmol jii....behad asardaar likha hai aapne, hame sabhi ahsaas acche lage...par last line meiN aapne jo sawaal kiya hai mahboob se....wo dil ko chuu gya....del ke bahuttttttt kareeb rha aapka sawaal aur aapki poetry bhi.

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zakhmee sahab, Namashkar......!

ye 2 sher mujhe bahut pasand aaye inke liye daad hazir hai sahab...
issi tarah likhte rahiye .......

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yaar ke liye sajde mein, haan sar jhukaane ki aadat hai
jahaan uska ghar hai, us hi disha mein meri ibaadat hai

meri rooh mar gayi toh ise apna gunah mat samajh lena
yeh maut bhi shayad, mere paak ishq ki ek shahadat hai

zubaan gaddaar ban baiThe, jab shikayat karni ho dil ko
yaar ke deedaar-e-rukh mein kuchchh itni lataafat hai

mahboos rahe teri soch mein, aur matrook tere ishq se
phir bhi teri yaadon ke gulshan ki sada hi ki hifaazat hai

yoon to nazar-e-karam kab ki uTh chuki 'Anmol' se aapki
magar kya phir bhi mujhe aapko chahne ki ijaazat hai?
YuN to puri shaayri laajawaab hai, magar matlaa & maqtaa hameiN khaas pasand aaye, Anmol Ji...!

Keep it up and take care, ok...?

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aapka likha bahaut pasand aaya........
"yaar ke liye sajde mein, haan sar jhukaane ki aadat hai | jahaan uska ghar hai, us hi disha mein meri ibaadat hai"
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Anmol jii....behad asardaar likha hai aapne, hame sabhi ahsaas acche lage...par last line meiN aapne jo sawaal kiya hai mahboob se....wo dil ko chuu gya....del ke bahuttttttt kareeb rha aapka sawaal aur aapki poetry bhi.

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YuN to puri shaayri laajawaab hai, magar matlaa & maqtaa hameiN khaas pasand aaye, Anmol Ji...!

Keep it up and take care, ok...?

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