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mohabbat............. - 10th October 2004, 01:55 AM

aisa kehte hai sachhi mahobbat kerne wale apne marne ke bad bhi , kisi na kisi rang mai apni nishani chod jate hai jo unki mahobbat ko amer ker deti hai , kabhi vo koi kahani chod jate hai kabhi taj ke roop mai koi nishani chod jate hai .

per kuch mahobatein dilo mai mahakti hai , yeh kuch lines aisi hi mahobbat ke naam......



yeh na soch ke kuch asaan hota hai,
ishq mai bewafai dil pe daag hota hai,
janam ki bewafai pe parda ker , use alwida kehna,
jisne nakam ishq kiya wahi jane kaisa sadma hota hai,

dard na pucho ,zakhme nasur per ek aur zakhm hota hai,
chikh bhi nahi sakte ,us per yeh sitam hota hai.



teri bewfai dafan ker kabra bana li sine mai,
mere aansuon ne sicha mere dard ko ruswai mai,
aaj bhi dekh us tanha majar pe ,teri yado ke mele lagte hai,
jaruri nahi, shanshaho ke mahobbat ke hi taj hote hai,
kuch log , yun bhi "mayu"mahobbat ke taj dilo mai jinda rakhte hai





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10th October 2004, 01:59 AM

hi mayuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu.see finally i took out time n read ur post.really nice words n kaafi dard bhare bhi hain.
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hi - 10th October 2004, 02:07 AM

hi,

so nice of u ,

humne bulaya aur tum chale aaye.......................

to aakhir aapne time nikal hi liya is hasin dunia mai aane ka ,

thx , padhne ke liya ur reply kerne ke liye


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10th October 2004, 12:51 PM

Hi Mayuri Ji,

A truly very touching, heart wrenching n full of pain poem. Sach dil ko chhuu gayi aap ki yeh nazm.


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Re: mohabbat............. - 10th October 2004, 12:58 PM

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aisa kehte hai sachhi mahobbat kerne wale apne marne ke bad bhi , kisi na kisi rang mai apni nishani chod jate hai jo unki mahobbat ko amer ker deti hai , kabhi vo koi kahani chod jate hai kabhi taj ke roop mai koi nishani chod jate hai .

per kuch mahobatein dilo mai mahakti hai , yeh kuch lines aisi hi mahobbat ke naam......

yeh na soch ke kuch asaan hota hai,
ishq mai bewafai dil pe daag hota hai,
janam ki bewafai pe parda ker , use alwida kehna,
jisne nakam ishq kiya wahi jane kaisa sadma hota hai,

dard na pucho ,zakhme nasur per ek aur zakhm hota hai,
chikh bhi nahi sakte ,us per yeh sitam hota hai.


teri bewfai dafan ker kabra bana li sine mai,
mere aansuon ne sicha mere dard ko ruswai mai,
aaj bhi dekh us tanha majar pe ,teri yado ke mele lagte hai,
jaruri nahi, shanshaho ke mahobbat ke hi taj hote hai,
kuch log , yun bhi "mayu"mahobbat ke taj dilo mai jinda rakhte hai


mayuri
dard na pucho ,zakhme nasur per ek aur zakhm hota hai,
chikh bhi nahi sakte ,us per yeh sitam hota hai.

uff Mayu….kitna dard samete hai tumhara kalaam….bahut ache se byan kiya hai tumne…

nakaam mohabbat ne dil jala diya mera
dekhen toh roshni kahan takk jati hai

apna khayal rakhna


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hi - 10th October 2004, 01:12 PM

hello salim ji,

waise to mai kam hi likhti hu per jab bhi kuch post karu aapka jawab yaha jarur pati hu ,

ab to likhne ke pehli hi aapke jawab ke bareme sochne lagti hu.


isi tarah hosla afjai kerte rehiye , yehi aapke shabd , kalam ban jate hai .



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hi - 10th October 2004, 01:17 PM

hi roops ,


kaisi ho , kkya dard kya khushi . kya gam kya hansi .

yaar hum sab ek hi kasti mai sawar hai , manzil ho sakta hai alag ho per sabhi ne raah ek hi chuni hai , apne dil mai dabe ahsaso ko baher nikalne ki.


bahut dur chale aaye hai chalte chalte
zakhm nasur na ban jaye dil mai palte palte



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10th October 2004, 02:35 PM

yeh na soch ke kuch asaan hota hai,
ishq mai bewafai dil pe daag hota hai,
janam ki bewafai pe parda ker , use alwida kehna,
jisne nakam ishq kiya wahi jane kaisa sadma hota hai,

--- sahi kaha hai ki bewafai ishq pe daag hai..
tabhi dhadhakti har ashique ke dil main aag hai..
har sham ki tanhai main dum dorte hai...
rat bar aankho main aansoo ka aasman hota hai...

dard na pucho ,zakhme nasur per ek aur zakhm hota hai,
chikh bhi nahi sakte ,us per yeh sitam hota hai.

--- is dard ki kahani main lahun nahi behta kabhi...
aah bhi nikalti hai to jamane main shor hota hai..

teri bewfai dafan ker kabra bana li sine mai,
mere aansuon ne sicha mere dard ko ruswai mai,
aaj bhi dekh us tanha majar pe ,teri yado ke mele lagte hai,
jaruri nahi, shanshaho ke mahobbat ke hi taj hote hai,
kuch log , yun bhi "mayu"mahobbat ke taj dilo mai jinda rakhte hai

---yadon ki majar pe baithe hum bhi ashk bahate hai..
har lash ko khud ki samajh ke dhoka khate hai...
bhoolte nahi ki ye sab jo aaye hai dafan hone is bazm main..
main hi jinda hun to kya,, par ashiqon ke yahi halat hote hai..
jis dariya-e-khoon main nahaye log e "saccha_pyar
khara nahi uska jeharnuma ehsas hi hota hai



meri pyaari mayu...

tumne ye kya likh dala ki apne dil ke jazbat bhi maine tumhare khoon main mila diye ... tum itna dard mat rakho ki jeena mushkil ho jaye ... baki main to hun hi tumhare sath...bas jo kehna tha keh diya apna khayal rakhna meri dost ... aur apne ehsason ko bantte rehna ... ho sake to kuch taste badal ke likho dil ka dard kam hoga ....


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10th October 2004, 07:24 PM

Mayuri ji..

Kaisi haiN aap?

YuN tou puri qalam achchhi lagi.. par ye sher kuch jyada hi achchhe lage..

teri bewfai dafan ker kabra bana li sine mai,
mere aansuon ne sicha mere dard ko ruswai mai,


ek sher yaad aa raha hai jigar ji ka likha huaa.. Pesh hai..

Bechaniya samet ke saare jahaan ki..
Jab kuch na ban saka tou mera dil bana diya..

Bahoot dard bhara ehsaas hai..

Daad qabul kijiye.. YuN hi likhte rahiye..

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hello - 10th October 2004, 10:03 PM

hello mayank ji,

Bechaniya samet ke saare jahaan ki..
Jab kuch na ban saka tou mera dil bana diya..

dil wah wah ker utha itna khubsurat ehsans padh ker , kya khub likha hai baicheniyon se bana dil......

thx mayank ji mere is nazm tak aane ke liye aur ise pasand ker apna reply dene ke liye .....

hosla afjai ke liye tahe dil se shukriya

aapki dost

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11th October 2004, 01:04 PM

MAYU JI...Sorry late ho gayi aapki reply dene me..

teri bewfai dafan ker kabra bana li sine mai,
mere aansuon ne sicha mere dard ko ruswai mai,
aaj bhi dekh us tanha majar pe ,teri yado ke mele lagte hai,
jaruri nahi, shanshaho ke mahobbat ke hi taj hote hai,
kuch log , yun bhi "mayu"mahobbat ke taj dilo mai jinda rakhte hai

kya arz karu..aapke dard per wah kehne ka gunah to nahi kar sakti lekin ise par kar mere dil se aaaaaaaaah jaroor nikalti hai...main intzar karungi mayu ki kab tum mujhe is kabil samjhogi ki mujhe kuch apne baare me bata sako....aajkal busy jyada hu isliye pm per resp.na deker yaha likh rahi hu.....ki kab main tumari nazro me is kaabil ban paaungi..

aur is kalaam ke liye bas itna hi ki...

her pyar me aansu kyu hai..
her dil me gam kyu hai..
meri 'mayu' bewafa to nahi..
fir u use bewafai ka sila kyu hai..

us uper waale ki chowkhat pe kya nyaay nahi..
dair k saath andhair hai kahi.n
kyu andhere hai...ujaale kahi.n nahi..
umr daraaz ho tere pyar ki..meri aarzoo hai yahii..

urs di..


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hi - 11th October 2004, 05:21 PM

yeh na soch ke kuch asaan hota hai,
ishq mai bewafai dil pe daag hota hai,
janam ki bewafai pe parda ker , use alwida kehna,
jisne nakam ishq kiya wahi jane kaisa sadma hota hai,

--- sahi kaha hai ki bewafai ishq pe daag hai..
tabhi dhadhakti har ashique ke dil main aag hai..
har sham ki tanhai main dum dorte hai...
rat bar aankho main aansoo ka aasman hota hai...

dard na pucho ,zakhme nasur per ek aur zakhm hota hai,
chikh bhi nahi sakte ,us per yeh sitam hota hai.

--- is dard ki kahani main lahun nahi behta kabhi...
aah bhi nikalti hai to jamane main shor hota hai..

teri bewfai dafan ker kabra bana li sine mai,
mere aansuon ne sicha mere dard ko ruswai mai,
aaj bhi dekh us tanha majar pe ,teri yado ke mele lagte hai,
jaruri nahi, shanshaho ke mahobbat ke hi taj hote hai,
kuch log , yun bhi "mayu"mahobbat ke taj dilo mai jinda rakhte hai

---yadon ki majar pe baithe hum bhi ashk bahate hai..
har lash ko khud ki samajh ke dhoka khate hai...
bhoolte nahi ki ye sab jo aaye hai dafan hone is bazm main..
main hi jinda hun to kya,, par ashiqon ke yahi halat hote hai..
jis dariya-e-khoon main nahaye log e "saccha_pyar
khara nahi uska jeharnuma ehsas hi hota hai


meri pyaari mayu...

tumne ye kya likh dala ki apne dil ke jazbat bhi maine tumhare khoon main mila diye ... tum itna dard mat rakho ki jeena mushkil ho jaye ... baki main to hun hi tumhare sath...bas jo kehna tha keh diya apna khayal rakhna meri dost ... aur apne ehsason ko bantte rehna ... ho sake to kuch taste badal ke likho dil ka dard kam hoga ....

hi kanu , my dear friend ........
sunday special likh likh ke sabke hosh uda rahe ho hmmmmmm

apne jazbato ko aisa hi pyara aur narmi liye rakhna , is duniya ki bhid mai duniya jaisa mat rang jana kabhi.

tum bahut achhe ho kanu , mai jaanti hu tum mere sath ho aur plz hamesha rehna ek bahut achhe dost ki tarah

tumhare bolne ki jarurat nahi hai bina bole bhio mai janti hu ki tum samazte ho , mere bina bole bhi tum samazte ho .....

koshish karungi ki kuch tastew badal ke likhu , per kya karu yaar dil ka tadte badle to yaha likhne mai bhi taste badle

waise i m trying ki taste badle



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11th October 2004, 05:27 PM

MAYU JI...Sorry late ho gayi aapki reply dene me..

teri bewfai dafan ker kabra bana li sine mai,
mere aansuon ne sicha mere dard ko ruswai mai,
aaj bhi dekh us tanha majar pe ,teri yado ke mele lagte hai,
jaruri nahi, shanshaho ke mahobbat ke hi taj hote hai,
kuch log , yun bhi "mayu"mahobbat ke taj dilo mai jinda rakhte hai

kya arz karu..aapke dard per wah kehne ka gunah to nahi kar sakti lekin ise par kar mere dil se aaaaaaaaah jaroor nikalti hai...main intzar karungi mayu ki kab tum mujhe is kabil samjhogi ki mujhe kuch apne baare me bata sako....aajkal busy jyada hu isliye pm per resp.na deker yaha likh rahi hu.....ki kab main tumari nazro me is kaabil ban paaungi..

aur is kalaam ke liye bas itna hi ki...

her pyar me aansu kyu hai..
her dil me gam kyu hai..
meri 'mayu' bewafa to nahi..
fir u use bewafai ka sila kyu hai..

us uper waale ki chowkhat pe kya nyaay nahi..
dair k saath andhair hai kahi.n
kyu andhere hai...ujaale kahi.n nahi..
umr daraaz ho tere pyar ki..meri aarzoo hai yahii..

urs di..


hello di ,

dekhiye mai to aap se naraz hu , ek taraf to aap likhti hai urs di aur dusri taraf aap likhti hai mayu ji.

ye combination jamte nahi hai aap mughe bus mayu bulaya karo its sounds good , aur thxs thxs a lot aapne mere liye itni soni si dua ki................... ameen

kaash ye dua puri ho jaye ,

dekha kitni beshram hu , khud hi bol diya .badi behen ke samne bhi laaj nahi aati ...

aur apne le kya likha ki mai aapko kisi din is kabil samzungi to bataungi


mai is layak nahi ki aap se kuch chupau ,

jarur kabhi fir kabhi


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