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ਆ ਜਾ ਮੌਤ ਰਕਾਨੇ - 17th August 2010, 04:20 PM

ਤੇਰੇ ਰਾਹਾਂ ਦੇ ਵਿੱਚ ਬੈਠਾ ਥੱਕਿਆ,
ਇਹਨਾਂ ਬੇਵਫ਼ਾਵਾ ਦੀ ਦੁਨੀਆਂ ਤੋਂ ਅੱਕਿਆ,
ਜ਼ਦੋ ਦਾ ਤੈਨੂੰ ਅੱਖੀਆਂ 'ਚੋ ਮੈਂ ਤੱਕਿਆ,
ਹੌਸਲਾ ਸਿਰਫ਼ ਤੈਨੂੰ ਮਿਲਣ ਦਾ ਰੱਖਿਆ
ਪਰ ਕਰ ਕੇ ਵੀ ਕੁੱਝ ਨਾ ਕਰ ਸਕਿਆ,
ਹੁਣ ਤੈਨੂੰ ਕਹਿਣੋ ਨਾ ਮੈਂ ਜਕਿਆ,
ਕਿ ਆ ਕੇ ਪਿਆਰ ਮੇਰੇ ਨਾਲ ਪਾ ਲਾ,
ਆ ਜਾ ਹੀਰ ਸਲੇਟੜੀਏ,
ਨੀ ਆ ਜਾ ਮੇਰੀਏ ਜਾਨੇ
ਆ ਜਾ ਮੌਤ ਰਕਾਨੇ ਹੁਣ,
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18th August 2010, 09:55 PM

bahut vadiya .........................................!


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19th August 2010, 11:08 AM

thx sunita ji.....................
   
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19th August 2010, 12:03 PM

bahut hi vadhia Dilpreet ji....
.ਆ ਜਾ ਹੀਰ ਸਲੇਟੜੀਏ,
ਨੀ ਆ ਜਾ ਮੇਰੀਏ ਜਾਨੇ

ਆ ਜਾ ਮੌਤ ਰਕਾਨੇ ਹੁਣ,
ਆ "ਅੰਮਿ੍ਤ" ਨੂੰ ਗਲ ਨਾਲ ਲਾ ਲਾ

eddaN hi likhde raho...nikhrde raho....duavaN de naal....preet




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ਸਭ ਰਿਸ਼ਤਿਆਂ ਦੀ ਸੀਮਾ ਹਰ ਸਾਕ ਦੇ ਤਕਾਜ਼ੇ
ਰੁਕਦਾ ਨ ਖੂਨ ਇਹ ਨੇ ਦਿਲ ਚਾਕ ਦੇ ਤਕਾਜ਼ੇ
ਕੀ ਰੱਤ ਦੇ ਪੁਤਲਿਆਂ ਨੇ ਚੱਟਾਨ ਹੋ ਕੇ ਜਿਉਣਾ

ਬੇਦਾਗ ਨੇ ਉਹ ਸਾਰੇ ਬੱਸ ਦਾਗਦਾਰ ਮੈਂ ਹੀ
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19th August 2010, 05:56 PM

eni niraasha kise vi hadd tak theek nahi.n . zindgi zindadili da naam hai nowzwaan....


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20th August 2010, 11:41 AM

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bahut hi vadhia Dilpreet ji....
.ਆ ਜਾ ਹੀਰ ਸਲੇਟੜੀਏ,
ਨੀ ਆ ਜਾ ਮੇਰੀਏ ਜਾਨੇ

ਆ ਜਾ ਮੌਤ ਰਕਾਨੇ ਹੁਣ,
ਆ "ਅੰਮਿ੍ਤ" ਨੂੰ ਗਲ ਨਾਲ ਲਾ ਲਾ

eddaN hi likhde raho...nikhrde raho....duavaN de naal....preet
thx dear frnd.................thodiyan sb dostan di duavan hi ne jo meri kalam chldi hai.......................
   
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20th August 2010, 11:47 AM

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eni niraasha kise vi hadd tak theek nahi.n . zindgi zindadili da naam hai nowzwaan....

thx dear k tusi meri poetry te inna vadiya comment kita...........

dear life vich tan bahut jinda dil hai k 2 bar assman nu chu k dostan di wjha nal zameen te gir chuka han but es jinda dili nal hi ajj fir apne nam da jhnda(flag) assman diyan bulandi tak uchha kita hoeya.................

eh jo alfaz main apni kalam nal thode ru-b-ru kite eh tan sb uss malik di rjja hai jo likhwa dinda mera malik thode sb de ru-b-ru kar dina han.........eh tan rhu to nikle alfaj ne dear......................

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