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Bayan - 28th June 2014, 10:12 PM

Roz dil-e-nakam ko dekhun sine mein toota toota
Surkh deewarein tooti tooti, darwaza toota toota....................

Ruswaai our tanhaai kyun bheer bahri is duniya mein ,
Dekh gagan mein tanha tanha ek tara Toota toota...................

Ek kahani bhooli bisri roz zahan mein aati hai
Ek koi thi bikhri bikhri, ek koi toota toota..................................

Jab tak aankhein band rahin to haathon mein ye duniya thi
Aankh khuli to aankhon mein tha ek sapna toota toota..............

Barson baad aaj bhi is dil se waham nai jata
Jura jura sa lagta hai woh rishta toota toota...........................

Jaane kiss ummeed mein ab bhi seene mein bechaini hai
Darwaze per aahat thi, dil dharka toota toota...........................

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रोज़ दिल-ए-नाकाम को देखूं सीने में टूटा टूटा
सुर्ख दीवारें टूटी टूटी, दरवाज़ा टूटा टूटा....................

रुसवाई और तन्हाई क्यूँ भीड़ भरी इस दुनिया में ,
देख गगन में तन्हा तन्हा एक तारा टूटा टूटा............

एक कहानी भूली बिसरी रोज़ ज़हन में आती है
एक कोई थी बिखरी बिखरी, एक कोई टूटा टूटा........

जब तक आँखें बंद रहीं तो हाथों में ये दुनिया थी
आँख खुली तो आँखों में था एक सपना टूटा टूटा.......

बरसों बाद आज भी इस दिल से वहम नहीं जाता.
जुड़ा जुड़ा सा लगता है वो रिश्ता टूटा टूटा.............

जाने किस उम्मीद में अब भी सीने में बेचैनी है
दरवाज़े पर आहाट थी, दिल धड़का टूटा टूटा...........

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28th June 2014, 11:30 PM

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Roz dil-e-nakam ko dekhun sine mein toota toota
Surkh deewarein tooti tooti, darwaza toota toota....................

Ruswaai our tanhaai kyun bheer bahri is duniya mein ,
Dekh gagan mein tanha tanha ek tara Toota toota...................

Ek kahani bhooli bisri roz zahan mein aati hai
Ek koi thi bikhri bikhri, ek koi toota toota..................................

Jab tak aankhein band rahin to haathon mein ye duniya thi
Aankh khuli to aankhon mein tha ek sapna toota toota..............

Barson baad aaj bhi is dil se waham nai jata
Jura jura sa lagta hai woh rishta toota toota...........................

Jaane kiss ummeed mein ab bhi seene mein bechaini hai
Darwaze per aahat thi, dil dharka toota toota...........................

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

रोज़ दिल-ए-नाकाम को देखूं सीने में टूटा टूटा
सुर्ख दीवारें टूटी टूटी, दरवाज़ा टूटा टूटा....................

रुसवाई और तन्हाई क्यूँ भीड़ भरी इस दुनिया में ,
देख गगन में तन्हा तन्हा एक तारा टूटा टूटा............

एक कहानी भूली बिसरी रोज़ ज़हन में आती है
एक कोई थी बिखरी बिखरी, एक कोई टूटा टूटा........

जब तक आँखें बंद रहीं तो हाथों में ये दुनिया थी
आँख खुली तो आँखों में था एक सपना टूटा टूटा.......

बरसों बाद आज भी इस दिल से वहम नहीं जाता.
जुड़ा जुड़ा सा लगता है वो रिश्ता टूटा टूटा.............

जाने किस उम्मीद में अब भी सीने में बेचैनी है
दरवाज़े पर आहाट थी, दिल धड़का टूटा टूटा...........

...............Gyan Saxena

Masha Allah bohat hi khoob surat ghazal hai saxena ji..


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Ek kahani bhooli bisri roz zahan mein aati hai
Ek koi thi bikhri bikhri, ek koi toota toota..................................

Jab tak aankhein band rahin to haathon mein ye duniya thi
Aankh khuli to aankhon mein tha ek sapna toota toota..............

Yeh do ashaar bohat pasand aaye mujhe

Yuhi lihte rahiye




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29th June 2014, 07:18 AM

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Roz dil-e-nakam ko dekhun sine mein toota toota
Surkh deewarein tooti tooti, darwaza toota toota....................

Ruswaai our tanhaai kyun bheer bahri is duniya mein ,
Dekh gagan mein tanha tanha ek tara Toota toota...................

Ek kahani bhooli bisri roz zahan mein aati hai
Ek koi thi bikhri bikhri, ek koi toota toota..................................

Jab tak aankhein band rahin to haathon mein ye duniya thi
Aankh khuli to aankhon mein tha ek sapna toota toota..............

Barson baad aaj bhi is dil se waham nai jata
Jura jura sa lagta hai woh rishta toota toota...........................

Jaane kiss ummeed mein ab bhi seene mein bechaini hai
Darwaze per aahat thi, dil dharka toota toota...........................

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रोज़ दिल-ए-नाकाम को देखूं सीने में टूटा टूटा
सुर्ख दीवारें टूटी टूटी, दरवाज़ा टूटा टूटा....................

रुसवाई और तन्हाई क्यूँ भीड़ भरी इस दुनिया में ,
देख गगन में तन्हा तन्हा एक तारा टूटा टूटा............

एक कहानी भूली बिसरी रोज़ ज़हन में आती है
एक कोई थी बिखरी बिखरी, एक कोई टूटा टूटा........

जब तक आँखें बंद रहीं तो हाथों में ये दुनिया थी
आँख खुली तो आँखों में था एक सपना टूटा टूटा.......

बरसों बाद आज भी इस दिल से वहम नहीं जाता.
जुड़ा जुड़ा सा लगता है वो रिश्ता टूटा टूटा.............

जाने किस उम्मीद में अब भी सीने में बेचैनी है
दरवाज़े पर आहाट थी, दिल धड़का टूटा टूटा...........

...............Gyan Saxena
Waah Gyan sahab... Bahut hi khoobsoorat likhte haiN aap. KhayaaloN ki parwaz bahut oonchi hai... Isi tarah likhte rahiye aur mahfil ko rangeen banaaye rakhiye.

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Roz dil-e-nakam ko dekhun sine mein toota toota
Surkh deewarein tooti tooti, darwaza toota toota....................

Ruswaai our tanhaai kyun bheer bahri is duniya mein ,
Dekh gagan mein tanha tanha ek tara Toota toota...................

Ek kahani bhooli bisri roz zahan mein aati hai
Ek koi thi bikhri bikhri, ek koi toota toota..................................

Jab tak aankhein band rahin to haathon mein ye duniya thi
Aankh khuli to aankhon mein tha ek sapna toota toota..............

Barson baad aaj bhi is dil se waham nai jata
Jura jura sa lagta hai woh rishta toota toota...........................

Jaane kiss ummeed mein ab bhi seene mein bechaini hai
Darwaze per aahat thi, dil dharka toota toota...........................

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रोज़ दिल-ए-नाकाम को देखूं सीने में टूटा टूटा
सुर्ख दीवारें टूटी टूटी, दरवाज़ा टूटा टूटा....................

रुसवाई और तन्हाई क्यूँ भीड़ भरी इस दुनिया में ,
देख गगन में तन्हा तन्हा एक तारा टूटा टूटा............

एक कहानी भूली बिसरी रोज़ ज़हन में आती है
एक कोई थी बिखरी बिखरी, एक कोई टूटा टूटा........

जब तक आँखें बंद रहीं तो हाथों में ये दुनिया थी
आँख खुली तो आँखों में था एक सपना टूटा टूटा.......

बरसों बाद आज भी इस दिल से वहम नहीं जाता.
जुड़ा जुड़ा सा लगता है वो रिश्ता टूटा टूटा.............

जाने किस उम्मीद में अब भी सीने में बेचैनी है
दरवाज़े पर आहाट थी, दिल धड़का टूटा टूटा...........

...............Gyan Saxena


bahot khoob.............. dil se daad

likhte rahen

Shaad...


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