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Judaai ki lakeer ban jaati hai.... -
13th June 2009, 10:57 PM
 YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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14th June 2009, 05:01 PM
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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14th June 2009, 07:48 PM
Andhere me rehta hu woh khud hi mit jati hain..........Wah janab wah kya andaz hain dard bayaan karne ka bohat khoob.
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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15th June 2009, 02:51 PM
Narsh Jii..........
Achcha likha hai aab aap bhi kafi kuch samajh gaye hai likhane ke bare mein. Yunhi likhate rahiye aur apna saath banaye rakhiye... yeh bahut kamal likha hai kismat har baar hamare saath ho ye zaruri nahi jo ho jaye waqt par wahi takdeer ban jaati hai.... 
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15th June 2009, 07:34 PM
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wahh dost..acha likha hai...har sher kaabil-e-taarif laga mujhe..yeh sher kuch khas pasand aaya: roshni itni rakhta hu neend na kisi ki kharab ho zamin par araam se chalta hu awaaz ho jaati ha god bless u..dil se daad kubool kijiye Pradhyuman - Bismil gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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18th June 2009, 08:49 PM
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Pradhyuman Bhai....aapko yaha dekh kar acha laga....meri koshish aapko pasand aai...iske liye shukriya..... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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18th June 2009, 08:57 PM
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Sameer Bhai....ye sab aapki duaao ka asar hai....jo bhi main likh paa raha hu...woh sab aap dosto se mila hausla aur piyar hi hoaga shayad......aise hi aap sab saath dete rahiyega....main koshish karta rahaunga..... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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19th June 2009, 05:59 AM
naresh ji
wow... nice aapki ghazal aur ehssaas dil ko chu se gaye ..kisi ek ko choose karna assaan nahi hoga... likhte rahye take care mandeep ~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
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20th June 2009, 10:49 AM
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mandeep ji....aapko meri nazm pasand aai...iske liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya..... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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21st June 2009, 07:43 AM
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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nice...... |
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Namaste ...Naresh ji ....Kaise hai aap?? Aapke kahe mutaabik ..aur apne waade ke anusaar hum aapki post par haazir hai ... Aapke kahene ke itani dair baad aayi hoon iske liye maafi chaahati hoon
 Aapke ehsaas bahot hi pyaare hai is rachana mai ....waise hume likhana nahi aata ... aur naahi jyaada kuchh pata hai ...shayri ya ghazal ke baarein mai ...hum to bas ehsaas hi samajhte hai ..par fir bhi.. ek baat kahe hum aapse ?? Is rachanaa ke ehsaas hume bahot hi maasoom aur naazuk se lage... Hum maanate hai ki har kisi ka likha yaa unake ehsaas unake dil ka unake jasbaaton ka Aaina hote hai, Is rachana ko padhake hume aesa laga ki ....iske kuchh alfaazon ko kisi chhote se maasoom se bachche ke dil ne bayaan kiya hai ..aur kuchh alfaason ko padhake laga ...kisi bahot hi sulajhe huye ...zindagi ko jis ne kaafi kareeb se dekha ho aese saksh ne bayaan kiya hai... yeh chand sher hume khaas pasand aaye "roshni itni rakhta hu neend na kisi ki kharab ho zamin par araam se chalta hu awaaz ho jaati hai..... apni parchhayi se baat kiya karu ab main andhere mai rehta hu woh kudh hi meet jaati hai.... kismat har baar hamare saath ho ye zaruri nahi jo ho jaye waqt par wahi takdeer ban jaati hai...." Hume bahot pyaari lagi aapki yeh rachanaa ...yunhi likhate rahiye ..aur apanaa khayaal rakhiyega. Bhagwaan ji aapko hammesha khush rakhe, Aapki Dost: Gudia Jay Ambe Puri Hoke Bhi Jo Puri Na Ho Hoon Zindagi Ki Wo Ankahi Kahaani...... ------------------------------------------------------------ Ek Aaina Jiski Tasveer Dhundhla Gai, Ek Dil Jiski Dhadkan Ruksi Gai, Ek Zindagi Jiski Manzil Ka Koi Pata Hi Nahi, Ek Daaman Jahaan Se Khushiyaan Galti Se Bhi Guzarti Nahi. |
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ji its too real & nice creation...........................  Radhika  Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com |
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3rd January 2011, 02:31 PM
kismat har baar hamare saath ho ye zaruri nahi
jo ho jaye waqt par wahi takdeer ban jaati hai.... woh itne saal hamare dil mai aise hi nahi raha uski aankh mai bhi judaai ki lakeer ban jaati hai.... beautiful lines Naresh ji aap ke dil se jo nikalte hai alfaaz vo khubsurat tahreer ban jati hai Regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
 Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota Ananthpak |
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4th January 2011, 12:25 PM
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wah naresh bhai wah bahut khoob daad kubul karen duaon ke saath radhe radhe Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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13th October 2014, 01:20 AM
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Naresh Bhaiyaa.......aapki rachnaye behadd khoobsurat hoti hai...aapko padna hame shuru se accha lagta hai, bazm meiN aate rha kijiye...! regards .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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