Bohat arse baad kuch likha hai jyun ka tyuN likh raha huN .. apni aara se zaroor nawaziyega ,.. aur behr kahin baahar hua ho to muafi ka talabgaar rahuNga
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Karke Mohabbat jo pighal jayega...
Waqt ki is aag mai Jal jayega..
Toote hai palko pe jo sapne yahaN..
Unka bhi dum, aaj nikal jayega ..
KyuN ye safaai ro ro ke dete ho...
Pyar humeN jhootha bhi chal jayega..
Humne bachi saaNsoN se keh bhi diya..
Shaam ko sooraj, ye bhi dhal jayega...
Khoya hai jo kaali si is raat mai..
Gir ke 'sifar' aaj sambhal jayega..
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Kunaal(Sifar):- 11-03-2012
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
aur pahli baar shayad sdc par kisine ye beher istemaal kiya hoga...
itna rare meter aapne is qadar nibaya hai jaise makhan me garam butter knife chal gaya ho.ekdum makhan
KyuN ye safaai ro ro ke dete ho...
Pyar humeN jhootha bhi chal jayega........simply speechless.
itna bolta hua sher hai ye ke aawaaz hi na nikle jo sune.
Bohat arse baad kuch likha hai jyun ka tyuN likh raha huN .. apni aara se zaroor nawaziyega ,.. aur behr kahin baahar hua ho to muafi ka talabgaar rahuNga
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Karke Mohabbat jo pighal jayega...
Waqt ki is aag mai Jal jayega..
Toote hai palko pe jo sapne yahaN..
Unka bhi dum, aaj nikal jayega ..
KyuN ye safaai ro ro ke dete ho...
Pyar humeN jhootha bhi chal jayega..
Humne bachi saaNsoN se keh bhi diya..
Shaam ko sooraj, ye bhi dhal jayega...
Khoya hai jo kaali si is raat mai..
Gir ke 'sifar' aaj sambhal jayega..
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Kunaal(Sifar):- 11-03-2012
Aadaab Kunaal Bhaee!
Buhat buhat zabardast kalaam! Seedha dil ko chchootaa kalaam!
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Karke Mohabbat jo pighal jayega...
Waqt ki is aag mai Jal jayega..
bhayee matla ........ saaf nahi laga mujhe .. pighlne ke baad jal jayega ,,, thoda confuse sa kar gaya...
Toote hai palko pe jo sapne yahaN..
Unka bhi dum, aaj nikal jayega ..
mere hisaab se yahaN lafz .. last mai bharti sa lag raha hai....
Toote hai palko pe jo sapne mere
saani bahut acha hai.............
KyuN ye safaai ro ro ke dete ho...
Pyar humeN jhootha bhi chal jayega..
again saani........... bahut kamaal hai... saaf suthraa ............. painaa sa teer seedha nishane par
magar oolaa main....
kyun "ye" safayee...
ye safayee kahne se thoda atpata sa laga .....
Humne bachi saaNsoN se keh bhi diya..
Shaam ko sooraj, ye bhi dhal jayega...
hmm... acha hai
Khoya hai jo kaali si is raat mai..
Gir ke 'sifar' aaj sambhal jayega..
bhayee tum aaye ho yahi bahut hai........... apne liye to................ aate rahjo yaar.... aur ye bhi kya ki tum lihte nahi ho to aao hi na... are padhnaa bhi to likhne ka hi naam hai
Bohat arse baad kuch likha hai jyun ka tyuN likh raha huN .. apni aara se zaroor nawaziyega ,.. aur behr kahin baahar hua ho to muafi ka talabgaar rahuNga
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Karke Mohabbat jo pighal jayega...
Waqt ki is aag mai Jal jayega..
Toote hai palko pe jo sapne yahaN..
Unka bhi dum, aaj nikal jayega ..
KyuN ye safaai ro ro ke dete ho...
Pyar humeN jhootha bhi chal jayega..
Humne bachi saaNsoN se keh bhi diya..
Shaam ko sooraj, ye bhi dhal jayega...
Khoya hai jo kaali si is raat mai..
Gir ke 'sifar' aaj sambhal jayega..
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Kunaal(Sifar):- 11-03-2012
behad umda har line gahraai tak chchoo kar gai kush raho .
Rashmi Sharma
path par kaante bahut hain tere
par manjil par jaana too.ne
dar na jatilata se jeewan ki
isko saral banana too.ne
pasat na hone paye honsle
khud ka sahas khud hi juta le
Bohat arse baad kuch likha hai jyun ka tyuN likh raha huN .. apni aara se zaroor nawaziyega ,.. aur behr kahin baahar hua ho to muafi ka talabgaar rahuNga
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Karke Mohabbat jo pighal jayega...
Waqt ki is aag mai Jal jayega..
Toote hai palko pe jo sapne yahaN..
Unka bhi dum, aaj nikal jayega ..
KyuN ye safaai ro ro ke dete ho...
Pyar humeN jhootha bhi chal jayega..
Humne bachi saaNsoN se keh bhi diya..
Shaam ko sooraj, ye bhi dhal jayega...
Khoya hai jo kaali si is raat mai..
Gir ke 'sifar' aaj sambhal jayega..
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Kunaal(Sifar):- 11-03-2012
"Toote hai palko pe jo sapne yahaN..
Unka bhi dum, aaj nikal jayega .."
Bahot jyada Chubh Gaya..!!!
Excellent, Such a Sweet pain..!!!
Kaun Kambakhat Kehta hai, Ke Sirf Ghaalib ko hai pata, Radeef, Kafiya, Matla, Maktaa....!! Yeh Teer-E-Ishq kyaa 'Zindagi' se Ziyada, Kya Ghaalib ko hai Chubhata....!!!!!
Bohat khoob kunaal
Saadi se behar mein bohat khoob likha hai.
Hamesha se aap ki tehreer mein jo masoomiyet hai us ka mein maddah raha hoon.
Lehje ka khaloos aap ki tehreer ki khaas baat hai.
dua go hoon aap ki taraqqi aur shadmani ke liye.
khush rahein aabaad rahein.