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Exclamation Jal Jayega...! - 12th March 2012, 03:59 AM

Adaab DostoN...

Bohat arse baad kuch likha hai jyun ka tyuN likh raha huN .. apni aara se zaroor nawaziyega ,.. aur behr kahin baahar hua ho to muafi ka talabgaar rahuNga


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Karke Mohabbat jo pighal jayega...
Waqt ki is aag mai Jal jayega..

Toote hai palko pe jo sapne yahaN..
Unka bhi dum, aaj nikal jayega ..

KyuN ye safaai ro ro ke dete ho...
Pyar humeN jhootha bhi chal jayega..

Humne bachi saaNsoN se keh bhi diya..
Shaam ko sooraj, ye bhi dhal jayega...

Khoya hai jo kaali si is raat mai..
Gir ke 'sifar' aaj sambhal jayega..

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Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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12th March 2012, 10:35 AM

kya baat hai miyaa ,aaj to kamaal hi kar diya....

aur pahli baar shayad sdc par kisine ye beher istemaal kiya hoga...
itna rare meter aapne is qadar nibaya hai jaise makhan me garam butter knife chal gaya ho.ekdum makhan

KyuN ye safaai ro ro ke dete ho...
Pyar humeN jhootha bhi chal jayega........simply speechless.

itna bolta hua sher hai ye ke aawaaz hi na nikle jo sune.


aapko meri taraf se 1 million daads

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12th March 2012, 11:41 AM


Karke Mohabbat jo pighal jayega...
Waqt ki is aag mai Jal jayega..


Kunaal Ji Acha Matla Hai……

Toote hai palko pe jo sapne yahaN..
Unka bhi dum, aaj nikal jayega ..


Khooob Kaha……..

KyuN ye safaai ro ro ke dete ho...
Pyar humeN jhootha bhi chal jayega..


Wah Wah Wah…Ye Sher Kamaaal Ka Kaha Hai Saheb…Dheron Daad

Humne bachi saaNsoN se keh bhi diya..
Shaam ko sooraj, ye bhi dhal jayega...


Acha Hai……..

Khoya hai jo kaali si is raat mai..
Gir ke 'sifar' aaj sambhal jayega..


Hmmmm…. Theak Kaha….


Kunaal Ji Aaj Shayad Pehli Baar Aap ko Parhnay Ka Ittefaaq Hua Hai…..
Itna Kahun Ga..Ke Aap Ke Takhayyul Ki Parwaaz Achi Lagi….
Likhtay Rahiye………
Khush Rahiye……..





Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi

AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
   
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12th March 2012, 07:53 PM

KyuN ye safaai ro ro ke dete ho...
Pyar humeN jhootha bhi chal jayega..

acchaa lagaa ye sher.bahut khoob.

Humne bachi saaNsoN se keh bhi diya..
Shaam ko sooraj, ye bhi dhal jayega...

aur is sher pe kya kahu? bhai,wah. bahut-2 acchaa lagaa aapko padna.daad
   
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13th March 2012, 10:26 AM

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Adaab DostoN...

Bohat arse baad kuch likha hai jyun ka tyuN likh raha huN .. apni aara se zaroor nawaziyega ,.. aur behr kahin baahar hua ho to muafi ka talabgaar rahuNga


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Karke Mohabbat jo pighal jayega...
Waqt ki is aag mai Jal jayega..

Toote hai palko pe jo sapne yahaN..
Unka bhi dum, aaj nikal jayega ..

KyuN ye safaai ro ro ke dete ho...
Pyar humeN jhootha bhi chal jayega..

Humne bachi saaNsoN se keh bhi diya..
Shaam ko sooraj, ye bhi dhal jayega...

Khoya hai jo kaali si is raat mai..
Gir ke 'sifar' aaj sambhal jayega..

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13th March 2012, 12:35 PM



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Karke Mohabbat jo pighal jayega...
Waqt ki is aag mai Jal jayega..

bhayee matla ........ saaf nahi laga mujhe .. pighlne ke baad jal jayega ,,, thoda confuse sa kar gaya...


Toote hai palko pe jo sapne yahaN..
Unka bhi dum, aaj nikal jayega ..

mere hisaab se yahaN lafz .. last mai bharti sa lag raha hai....
Toote hai palko pe jo sapne mere

saani bahut acha hai.............


KyuN ye safaai ro ro ke dete ho...
Pyar humeN jhootha bhi chal jayega..

again saani........... bahut kamaal hai... saaf suthraa ............. painaa sa teer seedha nishane par

magar oolaa main....
kyun "ye" safayee...
ye safayee kahne se thoda atpata sa laga .....


Humne bachi saaNsoN se keh bhi diya..
Shaam ko sooraj, ye bhi dhal jayega...

hmm... acha hai

Khoya hai jo kaali si is raat mai..
Gir ke 'sifar' aaj sambhal jayega..

bhayee tum aaye ho yahi bahut hai........... apne liye to................ aate rahjo yaar.... aur ye bhi kya ki tum lihte nahi ho to aao hi na... are padhnaa bhi to likhne ka hi naam hai

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bahut deir baad aapko pada KUNAL jii...accha lga aapko padna....likhtey rha kijiye, aap jaise shayar ki kalam khamosh nahi honi chahiye...!

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18th March 2012, 01:58 PM

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Adaab DostoN...

Bohat arse baad kuch likha hai jyun ka tyuN likh raha huN .. apni aara se zaroor nawaziyega ,.. aur behr kahin baahar hua ho to muafi ka talabgaar rahuNga


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Karke Mohabbat jo pighal jayega...
Waqt ki is aag mai Jal jayega..

Toote hai palko pe jo sapne yahaN..
Unka bhi dum, aaj nikal jayega ..

KyuN ye safaai ro ro ke dete ho...
Pyar humeN jhootha bhi chal jayega..

Humne bachi saaNsoN se keh bhi diya..
Shaam ko sooraj, ye bhi dhal jayega...

Khoya hai jo kaali si is raat mai..
Gir ke 'sifar' aaj sambhal jayega..

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18th March 2012, 02:12 PM

Kunaal Bhaai:

namaste!

aapki koShiShoN ko paDhnaa Shuruaat se hi mujhe bahot pasaNd haii.. ees baar bhee bahot Khoob Ghazal kahi hay.. yeh Sher laa-jawaab rahaa

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Pyar humeN jhootha bhi chal jayega..
dil se daad aur duaaeN

KhuSh rahiye...apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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Adaab DostoN...

Bohat arse baad kuch likha hai jyun ka tyuN likh raha huN .. apni aara se zaroor nawaziyega ,.. aur behr kahin baahar hua ho to muafi ka talabgaar rahuNga


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Karke Mohabbat jo pighal jayega...
Waqt ki is aag mai Jal jayega..

Toote hai palko pe jo sapne yahaN..
Unka bhi dum, aaj nikal jayega ..

KyuN ye safaai ro ro ke dete ho...
Pyar humeN jhootha bhi chal jayega..

Humne bachi saaNsoN se keh bhi diya..
Shaam ko sooraj, ye bhi dhal jayega...

Khoya hai jo kaali si is raat mai..
Gir ke 'sifar' aaj sambhal jayega..

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Unka bhi dum, aaj nikal jayega .."


Bahot jyada Chubh Gaya..!!!

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23rd March 2012, 06:21 PM

KyuN ye safaai ro ro ke dete ho...
Pyar humeN jhootha bhi chal jayega..


Humne bachi saaNsoN se keh bhi diya..
Shaam ko sooraj, ye bhi dhal jayega...


Kyaa Kahne ... Kunaal Bhai ! WaaH !!

AchChhii Ghazal Huii Janaab .. !

Bahut Saadghii Se ... Dil Ko Chhote HaiN KhayaaL !

Mubaaraqbaad !!!

Ab Aa Hii Gaye HaiN Toh Yeh Silsilaa Barqarar Zaroor RakheN ... Aage Bhii !!!




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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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Bohat khoob kunaal
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Hamesha se aap ki tehreer mein jo masoomiyet hai us ka mein maddah raha hoon.
Lehje ka khaloos aap ki tehreer ki khaas baat hai.
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