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kahin say lot aao tum - 24th March 2004, 05:33 PM

andheri raat aai hay
kahin say lot aao tum
tumhari yaad aai hay
kahin say lot aao tum

baharain aa gayin ban main
shabhee teri bani man main
isi main rang jaganay ko
kahin say lot aao tum

chupa badal main sooraj bhi
ghata aai barsnay ko
yahein sawan barsanay ko
kahin say lot aao tum

andheree raat aai hay
andharay saath lai hay
na janay kis ki dunya main
sitaray choor ai hay

main andhair ratoon ko
chamktay din bananay ko
kahin say lot aao tum
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hi - 25th March 2004, 12:44 PM

tumhare alfaaz tumhari soch tumhara hur sher hur gazal ke kayal hue jate hai hum
yakeen mano tumhari gazalo mai khud ka gum talaash karten hai hum
andheri raat aai hay
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in lino ne bahut der taq sochne par majboor kar diya kya humare dil kee ye sada un taq bhi pahunchti hogi jinke liye ye hain par haan un taq to pahunch hi jati hai jinhe in durd bhare marham kee jaroorat hoti hai itna to kaafi hai hai na
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thanx anish once again for appreaciating!
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andheri raat aai hay
kahin say lot aao tum
tumhari yaad aai hay
kahin say lot aao tum

baharain aa gayin ban main
shabhee teri bani man main
isi main rang jaganay ko
kahin say lot aao tum

chupa badal main sooraj bhi
ghata aai barsnay ko
yahein sawan barsanay ko
kahin say lot aao tum

andheree raat aai hay
andharay saath lai hay
na janay kis ki dunya main
sitaray choor ai hay

main andhair ratoon ko
chamktay din bananay ko
kahin say lot aao tum
kahin say lot aao tum
hmmmmmmm...............kisko bula rahi ho dear....kaya woh abhi tak laut ke aaye haiN ki nahi


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hmmmmmmm...............kisko bula rahi ho dear....kaya woh abhi tak laut ke aaye haiN ki nahi
hmmmmmm di......kahin jaanewale laut ke aate bhi hain kya...khair ....main to apko hi bula rahin thi aap aap aa gayi na


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andheri raat aai hay
kahin say lot aao tum
tumhari yaad aai hay
kahin say lot aao tum

baharain aa gayin ban main
shabhee teri bani man main
isi main rang jaganay ko
kahin say lot aao tum

chupa badal main sooraj bhi
ghata aai barsnay ko
yahein sawan barsanay ko
kahin say lot aao tum

andheree raat aai hay
andharay saath lai hay
na janay kis ki dunya main
sitaray choor ai hay

main andhair ratoon ko
chamktay din bananay ko
kahin say lot aao tum
kahin say lot aao tum


wowwwwwwwww di bohat bohat zaberdast likha hai bohat purana kalaam hai aap ne itne dard wale bhi likhe hain aaj pata chala per bohat acha hai didi likhte rahiye mager khush rahain humesha ameeen


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arre di kya likha hai. maan gaye aapki kalam ko. ghazal mein bebassi nazar aah rahi hai. ehsaas bi ach lage..aur lafzon ka istmaal bi. yuhin likte rahein.

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andheri raat aai hay
kahin say lot aao tum
tumhari yaad aai hay
kahin say lot aao tum

baharain aa gayin ban main
shabhee teri bani man main
isi main rang jaganay ko
kahin say lot aao tum

chupa badal main sooraj bhi
ghata aai barsnay ko
yahein sawan barsanay ko
kahin say lot aao tum

andheree raat aai hay
andharay saath lai hay
na janay kis ki dunya main
sitaray choor ai hay

main andhair ratoon ko
chamktay din bananay ko
kahin say lot aao tum
kahin say lot aao tum

wah di bahut acha likha hai apne
chupa badal main sorraj bhi ghata aai barasne ko yahi sawan barasne ko kahi se lot aavo tum


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andheri raat aai hay
kahin say lot aao tum
tumhari yaad aai hay
kahin say lot aao tum

baharain aa gayin ban main
shabhee teri bani man main
isi main rang jaganay ko
kahin say lot aao tum

chupa badal main sooraj bhi
ghata aai barsnay ko
yahein sawan barsanay ko
kahin say lot aao tum

andheree raat aai hay
andharay saath lai hay
na janay kis ki dunya main
sitaray choor ai hay

main andhair ratoon ko
chamktay din bananay ko
kahin say lot aao tum
kahin say lot aao tum
lo..lout aai main

kya baat hai, kya baat hai......maashaa'allaah......wah wah is liye kar rahi hu kyuki main jaanti hu ki ye sirf ek kalaam thha....haqeekat nahi....
bahot achha likha 29....mujhe achha laga....wah wah wah............yunhi likhti rahiye chirkut jee....khush rahiye

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kya baat hai, kya baat hai......maashaa'allaah......wah wah is liye kar rahi hu kyuki main jaanti hu ki ye sirf ek kalaam thha....haqeekat nahi....
bahot achha likha 29....mujhe achha laga....wah wah wah............yunhi likhti rahiye chirkut jee....khush rahiye

grazie

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andheri raat aai hay
kahin say lot aao tum
tumhari yaad aai hay
kahin say lot aao tum

baharain aa gayin ban main
shabhee teri bani man main
isi main rang jaganay ko
kahin say lot aao tum

chupa badal main sooraj bhi
ghata aai barsnay ko
yahein sawan barsanay ko
kahin say lot aao tum

andheree raat aai hay
andharay saath lai hay
na janay kis ki dunya main
sitaray choor ai hay

main andhair ratoon ko
chamktay din bananay ko
kahin say lot aao tum
kahin say lot aao tum
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andheri raat aai hay
kahin say lot aao tum
tumhari yaad aai hay
kahin say lot aao tum

baharain aa gayin ban main
shabhee teri bani man main
isi main rang jaganay ko
kahin say lot aao tum

chupa badal main sooraj bhi
ghata aai barsnay ko
yahein sawan barsanay ko
kahin say lot aao tum

andheree raat aai hay
andharay saath lai hay
na janay kis ki dunya main
sitaray choor ai hay

main andhair ratoon ko
chamktay din bananay ko
kahin say lot aao tum
kahin say lot aao tum
Sach di.. agar kahin se laut ayein woh to kitna acha ho... hai na???

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