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mujh ko baatain kab atin hain.....? |
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mujh ko baatain kab atin hain.....? -
10th July 2008, 02:48 PM
MUJH KO BAATAIN KAB ATI HAIN?
MAIN TO BUS KHAMOSH SA SHAYIR, ULFAT CHAHAT K RANGO SE, DIL KI KHALI TASVEERON MAIN, KOI MOHABBAT LIKH DAITA HON, AUR KABHI DEWAAR SE LAG KR, KOI MOHABBAT RO DAITA HON, AUR KABHI ANKHON ANKHON MAIN, SARI BAATAIN KEH JATA HON, MAIN TO EK KHAMOSH SA SHAYIR, MUJH KO BAATAIN KAB ATI HAIN? MUJH KO BAATAIN GAR ATIN TO, TUM KYA MUJH KO CHOR K JATIN? MERAY SAPNE TOR K JATIN? KYA MERI ANKHON MAIN DUKH K, ITNE ANSON DAI SAKTIN THIN? MERA KUL SARMAYA THA JO, KYA WO MUJHE SA LA SAKTIN THIN? MUJHE KO BATAIN GAR ATIN TO, MAIN BHI TUM SA WO SAB KEHTA? JO TUM SUNNE KI KHUWAISH MAIN , SARE RASTA BHOL AYE HON? MAIN TEHRA KHAMOSH SA SHAYIR, MUJH KO BAATAIN GAR ATIN TO!!! TUM BHI MERAY KHUWAB SAJATIN, YUN NA TANHA CHOR K JATIN, KASH MUJHE BHI BAATAIN ATIN.............  New friends are like POEMS.. but old friends are like ALPHABETS... donot forget ur old friends, because, u always need ALPHABETS to read POEMS.. S@N@ KH@N |
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mere sath na chal -
10th July 2008, 03:23 PM
apney kerdar se aare hun mere sath na chal
mein tu khud ap pe bhari hun mere sath na chal sanp ke tarah mera sath tujey das le ga mein ak khatarnak shakari hun mere sath na chal tujh se berham na hu jai kahen tera khud mein tu shuloon ka pujari hun mere sath na chal mere mahboob mujey qaroon ka khazana na samij mein tu dar dar ka bhekari hun mere sath na chal zindgi tak ko bhi dao per laga detta hun mein ak badnam jowari hun mere sath na chal |
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10th July 2008, 05:25 PM
hi salam,
thanxxxxxxxxxx k appne itni achi ghazal share ki New friends are like POEMS.. but old friends are like ALPHABETS... donot forget ur old friends, because, u always need ALPHABETS to read POEMS.. S@N@ KH@N |
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10th July 2008, 11:53 PM
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12th July 2008, 04:41 AM
nice one .....sanaji
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12th July 2008, 07:52 AM
lagta hai kafi chot khai hain aapne...par wah ..kya likhti hai aap.bass apna gham kissise baatlijiye..main hoon na. dinesh
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12th July 2008, 06:30 PM
hi salam,
thanxxxxxxxxxxxx zainy , koi to ho, n dinesh for reply...........n thanxxxxx dinesh k app sab dost saath hain. New friends are like POEMS.. but old friends are like ALPHABETS... donot forget ur old friends, because, u always need ALPHABETS to read POEMS.. S@N@ KH@N |
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12th July 2008, 06:35 PM
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wah sanaji kya baat hai aap to ek ke baad ek achhi achhi poet likhte hi ja rahe hai aur sach kahu aapki sabhi poet ek se badh ke ek hoti hai aapki ye rachna hame behad pasand aai bas aage bhi isse achhi achhi poet likhte rahena hum aapke saath hai |
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12th July 2008, 11:38 PM
thanxxxxxxxxxxxx krenil
New friends are like POEMS.. but old friends are like ALPHABETS... donot forget ur old friends, because, u always need ALPHABETS to read POEMS.. S@N@ KH@N |
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13th July 2008, 12:52 PM
bahut gajab ka kalaam likha hai sana ji,is sdc ke kuch chand kalaamo me se aik jinhoe mujhe rone par mazboor kiya,bahut hi accha likha hai apne,pls ese khoobsurat aur apne se ahsaas se hame nawajte rahe....sukriya.......baagi
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13th July 2008, 01:48 PM
bahut khoob !
behad saadgi ke saath aapne apne zuzbatoN ko lafzoN ki shakal aikhtiyaar dii ! MUJHE KO BATAIN GAR ATIN TO, MAIN BHI TUM SA WO SAB KEHTA? JO TUM SUNNE KI KHUWAISH MAIN , SARE RASTA BHOL AYE HON? inn pe poore Qalaam ke dauraan kuch khaas nazar rahi ! tareef Qabool ho ! |
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14th July 2008, 03:06 PM
nice sharing...........sana ji
reps ke kabil hai........  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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14th July 2008, 05:47 PM
hi salam,
baagi, kshitiz, sunita ji thanxxxxxxxxxx 4r replyyyyyyy New friends are like POEMS.. but old friends are like ALPHABETS... donot forget ur old friends, because, u always need ALPHABETS to read POEMS.. S@N@ KH@N |
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14th July 2008, 07:37 PM
wah sana ji wah kya likha hai man gaye aap ko kitna dard hai aap ke seene me
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9th October 2008, 05:43 PM
thanxxxxxxxxxxx jaimini..............................
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