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paheli si muhabbat -
17th October 2007, 08:14 PM
sach hai ki wo paheli si muhabbat nahi rahi
aapas men wo khulush muhabbat nahi rahi. waise to ghar men char kamate hain lekin kyun budhe bap ki si wo barkat nahi rahi. aangan men na diwar uthane ki bat kar ghar chor dun main gar koi surat nahi rahi. us ghar me nemate utarti nahi kabhi jis ghar me budhe bap ki izzat nahi rahi. sab dost mere chal diye daman samet kar jab se daulat mere ghar ki zeenat nahi rahi. |
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18th October 2007, 04:00 AM
hai janab....mar dala...bahut khub. bil kul sach kaha hai aapne. a really really good and thought provokin poem. aishi hi likte rahein aur khush rahein.
aapka dost manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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manish ji -
6th December 2007, 08:19 PM
manish ji aap ki haula afjai ka shukriya jald hi aapke liye ek nai gazal pesh karunga
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