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29th May 2014, 11:06 PM
mere saare zakhm bhi kya kya maza dene lage jaise tufaano ko tinke aasraa dene lage kis qadar badlaa hua hai is zamaane ka chalan kitni sachaaii se mujrim faisla dene lage  hum bhi ab lene lage hai duhmano se mashwara !! dost jabse dusmano ko mashwara dene lage  berukhi se jinki meri zindagi me rang hai ab hame vo berukhi ka waasta dene lage  aapki chahat ke sadqe khoob ye bhi chah hai zidd ne chaha tha kuch aur, aur aap kya dene lage?  |
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29th May 2014, 11:24 PM
Khushamadeed....☺
Wah wah kya kehne...aate hi dhamaka... Bohat hi zabardast ghazal pesh ki hai huzoor.. Too good. ...☺ Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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29th May 2014, 11:25 PM
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waah waahhhh... waah waahhhhh kyaa baat hai kyaa baat hai..... aaj to hamaari SDC ki kismat hi chamak uTThii..... do do mahaarathi ek saath prakat ho gaye.... behad dhamaakedaar peshkash laaye ho miyaan.. aisaa lagta hia dil kaat ke rakh diyaa saamne.... saare gubaar nikaal ke rakh diye.... behad mubaarakbaad..... zindabaad zindabaad......... aapka bhai Shaad..... |
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29th May 2014, 11:36 PM
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ab aapne hazir hone ko kaha to kiski shamat aayi hai jo baat na maane aapki? izzatafzaaii ke liye bahut bahut shukriya aapka. regards |
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30th May 2014, 08:01 AM
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.... khushaamdeed janaab.... Bayhad aalatareen wa pur-lutf ghazal... jahaan. matlay nay ghazab dha diyaa to waheen maqtay nay samaa baand diya... aap itnay taweel arsay baad aayay/ ghair mawjood rahay... is baat ki tou shikaayat zaroor thee .. this beaut of a ghazal... does go a long way in repairing that ..... Dua hai.... ho zor e qalm aur bhi zyaadaa! Ahmad |
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30th May 2014, 12:40 PM
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bus bore ho gaya tha aur ek online game me phas gaya, that game just gripped me...din raat ek ho gaya usme.lol aur waise bhi mai Fb par jata nahi kabhi..bus kal usi game ka ek link check karne FB par gaya to zainy ji mil gayi. unhone ne hukm diya ki jald hazir ho jaoo ,mai to bus us hukm ki tameel kar raha hu. aapke sarahne ka bahut bahut shukriya sahab.. kuch shuru karo yaar dhamaka...zara maza aaye... |
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30th May 2014, 12:53 PM
Zidd sahab ..Ahmed bhai...aap dono meri request per sdc dubaara aaye. ..main aap dono ki shukrguzaar huun...
Zidd sahab yeh to aapka badappan hai jo aap itna maan dete hain hamein. ....thanks a lot That's very kind of you ☺  Hope ke ab dubaara yaha pehle jaisi raunak hogi.. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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30th May 2014, 12:55 PM
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all quit coz u quit. if u remain , i guess we can again get a vibrant community. |
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30th May 2014, 12:58 PM
InshaAllah I will try to be regular sir ji
Per kya karein aur bhi gham hai duniya me Sdc ke siwa..lol Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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30th May 2014, 01:59 PM
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30th May 2014, 09:24 PM
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Zidd saahab aadaab... bahot khushi ho rahi aapko waapas yahaan paa kar... aap jaise aalaa shaayar hii mahfil ji jaan hain... aur aap hain to mahfil jawaan hai.. hamne abhii haal me hi tasweer pe tahreer naam ka ek silsilaa shuru kiyaa hai.. aap apni post hame bhej sakte hain related to that tasweer.... aapko us tasweer ko dekh kar kyaa khayaal aataa hai.... something like that.. you caan find that post in ghazal section.... let me know in case of any difficulties... thankss... Shaad..... |
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30th May 2014, 11:31 PM
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jab mai yaha nahi aata tha aur kabhi kabhi SDc ki yaad aati thi ...to sabse zyada aapki yad ati thi, na jaane kyo. mujhe pata nahi , par mujhe aisa lagta hai ki mere kahe ko sabse zyada aap samjhte ho. aap ki daad ka behadd shukriya. double dil se (double dil hota hai  ...hota hai is time par )deepest regards |
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31st May 2014, 12:39 PM
Zidd sahab ek arsey ke baad aap ka qalaam padha hai .... Kamaal ki ghazal kahi hai aapne .... Bahaut bahaut lutf aayaa padhkar ... Dheron daad aap ko !!!
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3rd June 2014, 02:28 PM
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bohut bohut pyara kalaam hai aur apke emoticons bhi uspar chaar chaand laga rahe hain wah! |
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4th June 2014, 05:25 PM
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Saahab aapkay kalimaat ka nacheez mamnoon wa mashkoor haye. Takheer e jawaab kay liyay maazrat bhaee! Bhaee mayn tou koshish yahi karta hoon ki jab kisi ko parhooon tou pooori tarha mutawajjay hojaoon taakee uss shayar ki mehnat kay saath insaaf ho aur uski kalaa ka haq adaa kar sakoon. Aur aapkee shayree tou (angrezi muaaf karna) very rich hotee haye muaynaon aur shayree ki paycheedgiyaon mayn. Everdeepest Regards Bhaeee! Ahmad |
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4th June 2014, 06:14 PM
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Behad umda likhaa hai aapne aapko bas ek sher hi kehNaa chahunGaa.. Bahut khoob hai yeh ehsaas inhe behne dena dil jo baat kehta hai use yunhi kehne dena qubool hoti hai woh dua bhi jise dil th'aan leta hai gar 'zidd' hai to hai aachi ise rehne dena Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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5th June 2014, 11:00 AM
Adaab Zidd sahab ghazal bhut achi hui hai hamesha ki hi trah aapke maqsoos andaaz e bayaaN ke kya kehne khoobsoorat paishkash ke liyn daad aapki khidmat mai hazir hai qibool farmaaiye
Aslam Khoobsurat sa intekhaab ho tum |
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8th June 2014, 03:24 PM
hum bhi ab lene lage hai duhmano se mashwara !!
dost jabse dusmano ko mashwara dene lage Bahut-2 umda......janaab |
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9th June 2014, 10:06 AM
lajawab ashaaroN se nawaza hai aapne bahut khoob ....bohat ssari daad qabool farmaaayeN ...salamat rahain..
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9th June 2014, 08:21 PM
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9th June 2014, 09:30 PM
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bahut khoob likha hai zidd bhai hamesha ki tarah kya kahne hain is kalaam ke par ek sher mujhe bahut bhaaya hum bhi ab lene lage hai duhmano se mashwara !! dost jabse dusmano ko mashwara dene lage with regards radhe radhe Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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10th June 2014, 12:53 AM
zidd jee.....kaise hain aap......bahut dino baad aapko pada....kamaal ka likhte ho aap.....har aashsar jaise dil mein utart jata hai.......aate rahein aur mehfil mein chaar chaand lagate rahiye....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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