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tanha khuda rah jayega -
26th December 2010, 10:49 PM
dosto ko phir mera pyaar bhara salaam
ab darr ye ke salaam karte karte kahi dost na thak jaaye  ek ghazal peshekhidmat hai......... bahut si dhun hai ise adaa karne keliye...... khas taur par isi zameen par ghulam ali sahab ki gaaayi ghazal hai ' raasta kaT bhi gaya to faasla rah jayega' meri pasandida dhun hai manzile apni jagah hai raaste apni jagah' --------------------------------------------------- a apne takleef kyu ki ham to aane waale the hum samaj aur soch kar hi dhoka khaane wale the * mil naqaabo me mujhe, paas e wafa rah jayega ik fasana aur mera unkaha rah jayega marte marte jeete kyu hai, je ke marte kyu nahi taa qayamat raaz shayad, ye chupa rah jayega aaj aaya kal ka kal tha , kal bhi ayega vo kal roz hi roz ab din hi ye bus dekhna rah jayega fikr bando ki nahi ,bando ko hai fikre khuda gar na honge hum to kya ,tanha khuda rah jayega zidd mahabbat ka jahaa ik, apne peeche choD jaa varna is dunya me kya, tera mera rah rah jayega regards |
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26th December 2010, 11:18 PM
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marte marte jeete kyu hai, je ke marte kyu nahi taa qayamat raaz shayad, ye chupa rah jayega is sher ke liye dil se daad kubool karen... likhte rahen. shaad.. |
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27th December 2010, 09:11 AM
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Salaam Zidd sahab Ab aap se kya kahe. Jo asar aap ki peshkash karti hai jasbaaton par ussay baya karna mere bas main nahi bas ye hi kahungi....shukriya janab share karne ke liye Regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
 Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota Ananthpak |
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27th December 2010, 11:52 AM
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bahut khoob zidd bhai radhe radhe ......................................... Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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27th December 2010, 11:59 AM
[QUOTE=zidd;419155]dosto ko phir mera pyaar bhara salaam
ab darr ye ke salaam karte karte kahi dost na thak jaaye ek ghazal peshekhidmat hai......... bahut si dhun hai ise adaa karne keliye...... khas taur par isi zameen par ghulam ali sahab ki gaaayi ghazal hai ' raasta kaT bhi gaya to faasla rah jayega' meri pasandida dhun hai manzile apni jagah hai raaste apni jagah' --------------------------------------------------- a apne takleef kyu ki ham to aane waale the hum samaj aur soch kar hi dhoka khaane wale the * mil naqaabo me mujhe, paas e wafa rah jayega ik fasana aur mera unkaha rah jayega marte marte jeete kyu hai, je ke marte kyu nahi taa qayamat raaz shayad, ye chupa rah jayega sahi kaha hai bhayeeee......... kuch aisi baateN hai, jo waiseke waise hi rah jaati haiN ....yun laga jaise, sab chhod ke , jhunjhlaa ke foot pada hai khyaal umdaaa aaj aaya kal ka kal tha , kal bhi ayega vo kal roz hi roz ab din hi ye bus dekhna rah jayega awesome , word play fikr bando ki nahi ,bando ko hai fikre khuda gar na honge hum to kya ,tanha khuda rah jayega bahut bahut sahi bhayeee, bahut bahut sahi, ek misraa yaad aaya har saans ye kahti hai , hum haiN to khuda bhi hai zidd mahabbat ka jahaa ik, apne peeche choD jaa varna is dunya me kya, tera mera rah rah jayega bahut acha waah, khud se bahut acha mukhatib hue haiN bhayeee....... ye maktaa aapka best mere liye ...... bas bhayee matle ne utnaa maza nahi diyaa ..........!!! |
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27th December 2010, 01:01 PM
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maqta ne kamal kar diya..................its too real.Radhika  Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com |
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27th December 2010, 01:41 PM
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Janab Zid Saheb........! Boht Boht Khooob Ghazal Kahi Aap Ne.... Parh Kr Dil Khush Ho Gaya....... Aap Ke Khayalaat Or Alfaz KA Chunao Boht Behtr HAi Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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27th December 2010, 05:41 PM
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 not that it matters but am uncomfortable with this couplet....  |
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28th December 2010, 06:43 PM
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aor janaab kaise hain achhaa hai ghar pe baithe aaraam karte rahenaor ham aise naayaab heeron se istefaadah karte rahen jo chaabuk dastee aap me paayee jatee hai wo to akm akm hi nazar aatee hai alfazo bayaan pe aap ki aap ki qudarat apnee micaal aap hai aap aap nahi aap baap hain saahab bahot klhoob daad qabool karen masood hassaas |
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29th December 2010, 12:37 AM
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30th December 2010, 09:48 AM
Jaane kyoN .. har lihaaz se .. haal Ki likhi aapki sab Ghazal meN ... Yeh peshkash SuperBBBBBBB Creation lagi ... Zidd Bhai ! humari dili daad li jiye ... !
aise hi umdaa adaayegi aur khayaaloN ke saath humeshaa aate rahen aur likhte rahen ... ! ek repsssssssss ++++ Added Peshkash ... ! kal tak aapko reps mil jaayenge ... ! thodha intezaar karnaa padhega ... ! duaaoN ke saath ...  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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30th December 2010, 12:13 PM
Zidd jii, aapka likha to bada lai mein hota hai, pad kar majja aata hai, kyuNki aap saath meiN kis zameeN par likhi hai yeh bhi batate haiN, so easy rahta hai....shukriya, ki hume aap jaise shayroN ka saath naseeb hai.
god bless u regards .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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13th February 2011, 06:20 PM
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thanks for the appreciation. koshish har dafa karta hu ki kuch alag sa likhu,novelty jari rahti hai...varna khud shayar hi apne aapse bore ho jaaye regards |
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19th February 2011, 01:16 PM
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aapki ghazal par nazar padi aur yeh mein kya dekh raha hun??? iss sher ke khyaal maiN bhi bayaan kar chuka hun apni nayi koshish meiN.. aaj aaya kal ka kal tha , kal bhi ayega vo kal roz hi roz ab din hi ye bus dekhna rah jayega this poses a serious question.. r v all lurking around d same thought spots and familiar grounds of creativity? you & i (we r not in the same bracket of talent though..) should stretch our imaginations. wht say? none the less..dis one was beautiful & flawless work of a genius.. god bless u.. aapka dost, Pradhyuman gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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19th February 2011, 06:14 PM
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if you've not liked any part of what i've written here then pardon me.. i was driving your attention to sameer' ization of our thoughts.. need to evolve..i look upto you to create new benchmark.. dat was the only motive.. regards, Pradhyuman gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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