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zindagi bhar zindagi ka tabsira karte rahe - 17th February 2013, 07:24 PM

Gulkade ki justuju me, choT to khaii bahut
Kaam ayegi kabhi ye zakhm aaraaii bahut

Lutf e may bhi, ashiki me ,ban gaya dohra azaab
Khudko bhula, aur teri ,yaad bhi aaii bahut

Laazmi hai accha hona, naaz phir kis baat ka?
Accha ho, gar vo na jaane, khudki acchaii bahut

Zindagi bhar ,zindgai ka, tabsira karte rahe !
Zindagi ke ,paas phir bhi ,zindagi laaii bahut

Maar hi Dale na tujko, uska zidd ,ahd e qaraar
Jaan jaye so alag, aur uspe ruswaii bahut

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17th February 2013, 08:06 PM

Aadaab !

bahut hee umdah kavish zidd saHib , dil se daad qabool fermaaieN , her aik sher dil ko bhaa gaya or andaaze bayaaN to khoob hai hee , bus youN keh lijiye keh peRhaa or peRhty reh gaey daad Hazir hai

passand aai ghazal , lafz ba lafz dil maiN utar gai hai .

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Ahd e qaraar ka meaning?......




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18th February 2013, 12:28 PM

WaaH ! Zidd Bhai !!

Zindagi bhar ,zindgai ka, tabsira karte rahe !
Zindagi ke ,paas phir bhi ,zindagi laaii bahut

Bemisaal .....

Maar hi Dale na tujko, uska zidd ,ahd e qaraar
Jaan jaye so alag, aur uspe ruswaii bahut

Laajawaab .....

Khoob Ghazal Huii Janaab

Bakamaal ....... Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!




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18th February 2013, 12:30 PM

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Ahd e qaraar ka meaning?......
ahd e qaraar = promise of acceptance (agreement)




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18th February 2013, 12:43 PM

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ahd e qaraar = promise of acceptance (agreement)
As far as i know acceptance or agreement is iqraar

Qaraar is something different...its kind of rest or satisfaction.....

Not very sure......




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18th February 2013, 12:54 PM

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A قرار qarār (inf. n. of قرّ 'to dwell, to abide'; 'to rest,' &c.), s.m. Dwelling, residence; fixing (one's) abode (in), settling; resting; fixedness, fixity; permanence; consistency; stability, firmness, constancy; tenacity (of purpose);—rest, repose, quietness, quiet, peace, tranquillity; quietude, patient waiting, patience;—settlement, determination, confirmation; conclusion; ratification; agreement, engagement;—reality, certainty, truth:—qarār ānā (-ko), 'Rest, &c. to come' (to), to get or find rest, &c., to be at rest, or ease, &c.; to be or become still or quiet:—qarār pānā, v.n. To be or become fixed or settled, or at rest; to be agreed upon; to be determined, or decided; to be established, to be laid down, or ruled, or provided; to obtain; to be based (on); to arise:—qarār-dād (prob. contrac. fr. qarār-dāda, 'settled, established,' &c.), s.m. Settlement, establishment; confirmation; conclusion; ratification; agreement, engagement, contract; bargain; the specification, or formal charge (of a crime, &c.);—qarār-dād karnā, v.t. To settle, confirm, conclude, &c.:—qarār denā (-ko), To fix, establish, settle; to determine, decide; to lay down; to adjudge; to receive, admit (as correct, e.g. ṣaḥīḥ qarār denā):—qarār karnā, v.t. To settle, establish, confirm, ratify, conclude (a bargain, treaty, &c.);—v.n. To establish oneself (on); to take (one's) stand (on);—to agree, promise (=iqrār karnā):—qarār-nāma, s.m. A written engagement, &c. (=iqrār-nāma, q.v.):—qarār-wāqěʻī, adv. Definitively; positively;—effectually, efficaciously; truly, accurately rightly, in a proper manner.

ek example dimaag me aa raha hai.....

'vo jo humme tumme qaraar tha ,tumhe yaad ho ke na yaad ho'

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A قرار qarār (inf. n. of قرّ 'to dwell, to abide'; 'to rest,' &c.), s.m. Dwelling, residence; fixing (one's) abode (in), settling; resting; fixedness, fixity; permanence; consistency; stability, firmness, constancy; tenacity (of purpose);—rest, repose, quietness, quiet, peace, tranquillity; quietude, patient waiting, patience;—settlement, determination, confirmation; conclusion; ratification; agreement, engagement;—reality, certainty, truth:—qarār ānā (-ko), 'Rest, &c. to come' (to), to get or find rest, &c., to be at rest, or ease, &c.; to be or become still or quiet:—qarār pānā, v.n. To be or become fixed or settled, or at rest; to be agreed upon; to be determined, or decided; to be established, to be laid down, or ruled, or provided; to obtain; to be based (on); to arise:—qarār-dād (prob. contrac. fr. qarār-dāda, 'settled, established,' &c.), s.m. Settlement, establishment; confirmation; conclusion; ratification; agreement, engagement, contract; bargain; the specification, or formal charge (of a crime, &c.);—qarār-dād karnā, v.t. To settle, confirm, conclude, &c.:—qarār denā (-ko), To fix, establish, settle; to determine, decide; to lay down; to adjudge; to receive, admit (as correct, e.g. ṣaḥīḥ qarār denā):—qarār karnā, v.t. To settle, establish, confirm, ratify, conclude (a bargain, treaty, &c.);—v.n. To establish oneself (on); to take (one's) stand (on);—to agree, promise (=iqrār karnā):—qarār-nāma, s.m. A written engagement, &c. (=iqrār-nāma, q.v.):—qarār-wāqěʻī, adv. Definitively; positively;—effectually, efficaciously; truly, accurately rightly, in a proper manner.

ek example dimaag me aa raha hai.....

'vo jo humme tumme qaraar tha ,tumhe yaad ho ke na yaad ho'

Aahhhaaaan....I never knew qaraar means agreement as well....


Qaraar aur iqraar me kya diff. Hai?.....




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Aahhhaaaan....I never knew qaraar means agreement as well....


Qaraar aur iqraar me kya diff. Hai?.....
iqraar primarily means 'promosi'. agreement. it has a limited meaning in that sense and is a legalistic kind of word.

qaraar = offers multi faceted meanings ,the primary meaning ( if it can be argued so) may not be 'promise' and ' agreement'.
it is more of a poetical word ,where the meaning may differ due to the extant context .
   
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iqraar primarily means 'promosi'. agreement. it has a limited meaning in that sense and is a legalistic kind of word.

qaraar = offers multi faceted meanings ,the primary meaning ( if it can be argued so) may not be 'promise' and ' agreement'.
it is more of a poetical word ,where the meaning may differ due to the extant context .

Oh ok.....thanks a lot...


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Gulkade ki justuju me, choT to khaii bahut
Kaam ayegi kabhi ye zakhm aaraaii bahut

Lutf e may bhi, ashiki me ,ban gaya dohra azaab
Khudko bhula, aur teri ,yaad bhi aaii bahut

Laazmi hai accha hona, naaz phir kis baat ka?
Accha ho, gar vo na jaane, khudki acchaii bahut

Zindagi bhar ,zindgai ka, tabsira karte rahe !
Zindagi ke ,paas phir bhi ,zindagi laaii bahut

Maar hi Dale na tujko, uska zidd ,ahd e qaraar
Jaan jaye so alag, aur uspe ruswaii bahut


Bahot acchi peshkash hai Zidd Saahab.... bahot ummdah khayaal aur alfaaz ka intekhab kiyaa hai aapne.....
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bahut hee umdah kavish zidd saHib , dil se daad qabool fermaaieN , her aik sher dil ko bhaa gaya or andaaze bayaaN to khoob hai hee , bus youN keh lijiye keh peRhaa or peRhty reh gaey daad Hazir hai

passand aai ghazal , lafz ba lafz dil maiN utar gai hai .
kisi ko pasand aaye na aaye mujhe pata tha aapko zarur pasand ayegi.....ya kam se ek acchi koshish ke liye to aapse daad to milegi hi.

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Gulkade ki justuju me, choT to khaii bahut


Kaam ayegi kabhi ye zakhm aaraaii bahut

Lutf e may bhi, ashiki me ,ban gaya dohra azaab
Khudko bhula, aur teri ,yaad bhi aaii bahut

Laazmi hai accha hona, naaz phir kis baat ka?
Accha ho, gar vo na jaane, khudki acchaii bahut

Zindagi bhar ,zindgai ka, tabsira karte rahe !
Zindagi ke ,paas phir bhi ,zindagi laaii bahut

Maar hi Dale na tujko, uska zidd ,ahd e qaraar

Jaan jaye so alag, aur uspe ruswaii bahut
Zidd Saheb,

Due to time constraints, I am not able to read all the posts in SDC. Whenever time permits, I do so and try to read and understand the feel of various talented writers of SDC. I must confess that I have not strong grip over Urdu language and as such many times I feel slight difficulty in understainding many complex words in Ghazals. I have read this Ghazal of yours and find it very impressive. May I request you to kindly give the meaning of the hard words below the Ghazal for ready reference of many like me.

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Kaam ayegi kabhi ye zakhm aaraaii bahut

Lutf e may bhi, ashiki me ,ban gaya dohra azaab
Khudko bhula, aur teri ,yaad bhi aaii bahut

Laazmi hai accha hona, naaz phir kis baat ka?
Accha ho, gar vo na jaane, khudki acchaii bahut

Zindagi bhar ,zindgai ka, tabsira karte rahe !
Zindagi ke ,paas phir bhi ,zindagi laaii bahut

Maar hi Dale na tujko, uska zidd ,ahd e qaraar
Jaan jaye so alag, aur uspe ruswaii bahut
Tasleemaat Zidd Bhaee,
Bayhad mutaasir huay aapki is aalaatareen ghazal say janaab! MashaAllah both on your work as well as your craft! Bayhad rawaan dawaan

Laazmi hai accha hona, naaz phir kis baat ka?
Accha ho, gar vo na jaane, khudki acchaii bahut

yay shayr mayree oopar kahe baat ko perfectly describe kerta haye!

Dhayron daad wa mobarakbaad janaab!

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Gulkade ki justuju me, choT to khaii bahut
Kaam ayegi kabhi ye zakhm aaraaii bahut

Lutf e may bhi, ashiki me ,ban gaya dohra azaab
Khudko bhula, aur teri ,yaad bhi aaii bahut

Laazmi hai accha hona, naaz phir kis baat ka?
Accha ho, gar vo na jaane, khudki acchaii bahut

Zindagi bhar ,zindgai ka, tabsira karte rahe !
Zindagi ke ,paas phir bhi ,zindagi laaii bahut

Maar hi Dale na tujko, uska zidd ,ahd e qaraar
Jaan jaye so alag, aur uspe ruswaii bahut
Zidd Bhai Namaskar,

Yaar uljhan meiN daal dete haiN. Intna behtariin kalaam hai ki kisi ek sher ko chun_na mushkil hi nahi balki baaki aashaaroN ki tauhiin hogi! Subhanallah. Chekhoob bhai. Pa.Dhke ba.Daa taskiin huaa.

Ek laajawaab Ghazal per nachiiz ki daad qubool farmayeN.

Ho zor-e-kalam aur ziyaadaa.

Likhte raheN aur khush raheN.

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WaaH ! Zidd Bhai !!

Zindagi bhar ,zindgai ka, tabsira karte rahe !
Zindagi ke ,paas phir bhi ,zindagi laaii bahut

Bemisaal .....

Maar hi Dale na tujko, uska zidd ,ahd e qaraar
Jaan jaye so alag, aur uspe ruswaii bahut

Laajawaab .....

Khoob Ghazal Huii Janaab

Bakamaal ....... Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!
many thanks naresh ji......kaam aati hai aapki hauslaa afzaaii bahut..

mujhe aisa lagta hai ye meri zindgi ka sabse behtar kalaaam hai...

thanks a lot nareshji.
   
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Zidd Sahaab Aadaab!



WallaaH janab kyaa kahne aapke is gazal ke behad umdaa gazal kahi hai aapne... Sabhi Ashaar behad dilkash rahe...

Mujhe yeH quoted ashaar behad umdaa lage janab behad khoob ... bade hi gehre aur umdaa khayaal bayaaN kiye hai aapne..

haaN yeH Gulkade ke mayne kya hote haiN zarra bata dijiye... mujhe..


Likhate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez..


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Lutf e may bhi, ashiki me ,ban gaya dohra azaab
Khudko bhula, aur teri ,yaad bhi aaii bahut

Zindagi bhar ,zindgai ka, tabsira karte rahe !
Zindagi ke ,paas phir bhi ,zindagi laaii bahut

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Zindagi bhar ,zindgai ka, tabsira karte rahe !
Zindagi ke ,paas phir bhi ,zindagi laaii bahut

Maar hi Dale na tujko, uska zidd ,ahd e qaraar
Jaan jaye so alag, aur uspe ruswaii bahut

bahot khoobsurat

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