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22nd November 2014, 01:12 AM
Lakh chaho magar laut kar aati nahi
Fir dubara zindgi ,rukh modkar aati nhi.
rang bageeche ke soone hain sabhi..
Titli ithlati koi gar ,phoolon par aati nahi.
aasmaan pe chaand bhi aaj poora hai magar..
Kyon bhala Chandni ,dar pe mere aati nhi.
Khwaab aate hain ghadi bhar jo aankh lage..
Toot jaye jo kabhi to ,neend fir aati nahi.
Chehre tamam dekhe teri ankhon me magar..
ek meri surat hi ,mujhko nazar aati nahi
din guzar jata hai tere intzaar me..
Tujhse milna ho vo ,shaam hi aati nhi
Sari baatein tujhpe hi khatm hoti hain meri..
Jo zikra tera na ho to ,koi baat bhi aati nahi.
Teri khwahish rahi umra bhar mujhko sanam..
Tujhko paane ki ,koi surat nazar aati nhi.
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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22nd November 2014, 06:24 PM
khoobsurat panktiyon se sajee ek khobsurat peshkash madhu saahiba....
bahot acchaa likha hai aapne, padh kar bahot sukoon milaa hai.... likhtii rahen..
Shaad....
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23rd November 2014, 05:47 PM
Chehre tamam dekhe teri ankhon me magar..
ek meri surat hi ,mujhko nazar aati nahi
din guzar jata hai tere intzaar me..
Tujhse milna ho vo ,shaam hi aati nhi*
Wah..madhuji...
Bahut khub likha aapne..bade khubsurat andaj mein aapne ise pesh kiya hai..
aapke khyal behad pasand aaye..I
mera kya hai main to deewana hu
kya bataoo tumko baare mein apne
mein to khud se hi begaana hu
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6th December 2014, 01:02 PM
[QUOTE=sameer'shaad';472029]khoobsurat panktiyon se sajee ek khobsurat peshkash madhu saahiba....
bahot acchaa likha hai aapne, padh kar bahot sukoon milaa hai....
Hausla afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya shaad ji...yoon hi sath dete rahein..
khush rahein.
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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6th December 2014, 01:11 PM
Bohot khoobsurat gazal kahi aapne.....
Waaaahh........waaaaahhhh..... behad gehre ehsaas hai aur badi safai se pesh kiya aapne.
Dheeeroo daad
Apka apna
Bhushan
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6th December 2014, 04:22 PM
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Originally Posted by Madhu 14
Lakh chaho magar laut kar aati nahi
Fir dubara zindgi ,rukh modkar aati nhi.
rang bageeche ke soone hain sabhi..
Titli ithlati koi gar ,phoolon par aati nahi.
aasmaan pe chaand bhi aaj poora hai magar..
Kyon bhala Chandni ,dar pe mere aati nhi.
Khwaab aate hain ghadi bhar jo aankh lage..
Toot jaye jo kabhi to ,neend fir aati nahi.
Chehre tamam dekhe teri ankhon me magar..
ek meri surat hi ,mujhko nazar aati nahi
din guzar jata hai tere intzaar me..
Tujhse milna ho vo ,shaam hi aati nhi
Sari baatein tujhpe hi khatm hoti hain meri..
Jo zikra tera na ho to ,koi baat bhi aati nahi.
Teri khwahish rahi umra bhar mujhko sanam..
Tujhko paane ki ,koi surat nazar aati nhi.
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Dear madhu..........bahut khoobsurat ehsaas...hame accha lga aapko padna.
god bless u
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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6th December 2014, 05:07 PM
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Originally Posted by Madhu 14
Lakh chaho magar laut kar aati nahi
Fir dubara zindgi ,rukh modkar aati nhi.
rang bageeche ke soone hain sabhi..
Titli ithlati koi gar ,phoolon par aati nahi.
aasmaan pe chaand bhi aaj poora hai magar..
Kyon bhala Chandni ,dar pe mere aati nhi.
Khwaab aate hain ghadi bhar jo aankh lage..
Toot jaye jo kabhi to ,neend fir aati nahi.
Chehre tamam dekhe teri ankhon me magar..
ek meri surat hi ,mujhko nazar aati nahi
din guzar jata hai tere intzaar me..
Tujhse milna ho vo ,shaam hi aati nhi
Sari baatein tujhpe hi khatm hoti hain meri..
Jo zikra tera na ho to ,koi baat bhi aati nahi.
Teri khwahish rahi umra bhar mujhko sanam..
Tujhko paane ki ,koi surat nazar aati nhi.
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Madhu ji bhut khubsurat ehsaas or ek achi kavita likhi aapne meri daad hazir hai...Raj..
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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6th December 2014, 09:32 PM
Good One Madhu............
Chehre tamam dekhe teri ankhon me magar..
ek meri surat hi ,mujhko nazar aati nahi
Very beautiful...
ता उम्र रहा इक रोज़-ए -मुकम्मल का इंतज़ार
किसी में शाम न मिली तो किसी में सहर नहीं
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7th December 2014, 05:41 AM
Teri khwahish rahi umra bhar mujhko sanam..
Tujhko paane ki ,koi surat nazar aati nhi.
Kya dard hai aapki ghazal mein mMadhu ji , ek gila , ek udaasi per mehboob se phir bhi mohabbat , bas lajawab hai ye sab kuch .
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Bus aur nahiN sahi jaati teri judayi ,
Baat raat bhar muh ko tarpati rahi .
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Chehre tamam dekhe teri ankhon me magar..
ek meri surat hi ,mujhko nazar aati nahi
din guzar jata hai tere intzaar me..
Tujhse milna ho vo ,shaam hi aati nhi*
Wah..madhuji...
Bahut khub likha aapne..bade khubsurat andaj mein aapne ise pesh kiya hai..
aapke khyal behad pasand aaye..I
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Bahut bahut shukriya...vinay ji..ki aapko merae khyaal pasand aaye...
aate rahein..
khush rahein...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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बहुत खूब लिखा आपने मधु जी यूँ ही महफ़िल रोशन करती रहिये।।।।।।।।।। आपको पड़ना हमेशा से अच्छा लगा है मुझे।।।
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13th January 2015, 10:52 AM
Chehre tamam dekhe teri ankhon mein magar
ek meri surat hi, mujh ko nazar aati nahi..
wah ! kya baat hai..
Bohot umdaa Madhu ji. Bohot gehra ehsaas.. Andaaz-e-bayaan bhi bohot khoob.. Yunhi naye naye kalaam lekar mehfil ko rounaq bakhshti rahiyega.
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Bohot khoobsurat gazal kahi aapne.....
Waaaahh........waaaaahhhh..... behad gehre ehsaas hai aur badi safai se pesh kiya aapne.
Dheeeroo daad
Apka apna
Bhushan
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Bahut bahut shukriya bhushan ji...yoon hi sath dete rahein..
khush raheiin...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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6th February 2015, 04:39 PM
rang bageeche ke soone hain sabhi..
Titli ithlati koi gar ,phoolon par aati nahi.
wah kya umda khayaal hai mohtarma.... daad qubool farmaayeN...
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Dear madhu..........bahut khoobsurat ehsaas...hame accha lga aapko padna.
god bless u
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Bahut shukriya dii....
aapka sath aur pyaar yoon hee bana rahe...
Apna khyaal rakhein...
madhu.
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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25th April 2015, 04:08 PM
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Lakh chaho magar laut kar aati nahi
Fir dubara zindgi ,rukh modkar aati nhi.
rang bageeche ke soone hain sabhi..
Titli ithlati koi gar ,phoolon par aati nahi.
aasmaan pe chaand bhi aaj poora hai magar..
Kyon bhala Chandni ,dar pe mere aati nhi.
Khwaab aate hain ghadi bhar jo aankh lage..
Toot jaye jo kabhi to ,neend fir aati nahi.
Chehre tamam dekhe teri ankhon me magar..
ek meri surat hi ,mujhko nazar aati nahi
din guzar jata hai tere intzaar me..
Tujhse milna ho vo ,shaam hi aati nhi
Sari baatein tujhpe hi khatm hoti hain meri..
Jo zikra tera na ho to ,koi baat bhi aati nahi.
Teri khwahish rahi umra bhar mujhko sanam..
Tujhko paane ki ,koi surat nazar aati nhi.
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khoobsurat ehsaas.....................................!
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25th April 2015, 08:20 PM
Bahot khoob madhu jee
Likhte rahiye
Aapka
Dhaval
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Madhu ji bhut khubsurat ehsaas or ek achi kavita likhi aapne meri daad hazir hai...Raj..
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Bahut shukriya raaj veer ji..khushi huyi aapko yahaan dekhkar aate rahein..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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Good One Madhu............
Chehre tamam dekhe teri ankhon me magar..
ek meri surat hi ,mujhko nazar aati nahi
Very beautiful...
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Thank you very much mayoos jii..
Keep coming...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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8th June 2015, 04:26 PM
bahut khoob madhu jee
likhti rahiye
duaon ke saath
Aapka Apna Ishk
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इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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8th June 2015, 06:17 PM
Madhu ji,
Pehli baar aapki poetry pe reply kar rahe hain...sach bataye to I have read all your beautiful composition. I have loved every single one of them. I cant even pick out which one I liked the best. Just want to say that you write extremely well and I love reading all your poetry. I guess the reason someone loves kuch likha hua kyonki they can relate themselves one way or the other.
Another reason I love your poems cuz the words are so simple that anyone or everyone can understand them.
Please keep writing...its a pleasure to read you.
Smiles,
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9th June 2015, 09:23 AM
Hamesha ki tarah dil fareb.
Bohut khoob.
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Madhu ji,
Pehli baar aapki poetry pe reply kar rahe hain...sach bataye to I have read all your beautiful composition. I have loved every single one of them. I cant even pick out which one I liked the best. Just want to say that you write extremely well and I love reading all your poetry. I guess the reason someone loves kuch likha hua kyonki they can relate themselves one way or the other.
Another reason I love your poems cuz the words are so simple that anyone or everyone can understand them.
Please keep writing...its a pleasure to read you.
Smiles,
Sweet_Rain
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Sweet_rain jii..
bazm me aapko dekhkar bahut khushi ho rahi hai mujhe...purane members me se agar koi mujhe padhta hai aur pasand karta hai to alag hee khushi milti hai..aapki meharbani ka bahut shukriya jo aap vaqt nikal kar mujhe padhte hain..aur aapne reply kiya bahut achcha laga....aage bhi aapke reply ka intzaar rahega mujhe...
Aate rahiye.....
salamat rahein..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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5th September 2017, 12:53 PM
aaj is kachchi pakki si kavita pe nazar padi...kitna sara pyaar diya hai ap sab ne meri koshish ko aur main sabka shukriya karna bhi bhool gayi....muaf kariyega.....
hamdam ji bahot shukriya zamana hua aapko sdc par padhe huye aaiye kuch hammare sath share kijiyega... khushi hogi
aru ji bahot shukriya...
sagar aapki daad pakar hamesha hee hausla milta hai mujhe...padhte rahiyega..aur sath banaye rakhiyega
taish sahab...bahot khushi huyi apko apni post par dekhkar...hausla afzayi ka shukriya..
dhaval jibehad shukriya...
thank you di...
ishq ji bahot dhanywaad
thank u so much sarika....
thank u trialbyfire ji...
ekbaar phir sabka behad shukriya..aate rahiyega...
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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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