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jab tak na chhape tasveer uski, akhbar adhura rahta he...ek gane ki parody |
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jab tak na chhape tasveer uski, akhbar adhura rahta he...ek gane ki parody -
6th April 2008, 10:13 AM
Hi friends,
men ek mashhur gane ki parody pesh kar raha hun. yeh men ne 2002 men likhi thi jab men ne nai nai shairi karni shuru ki thi. men ne is men koi rad o badal nahin ki he, jese ke tese post kar raha hun. us samai mujhe baher ki koi fehem nahin thi par men ne gane ki dhun ko follow karte hue likha tha. kami beshi ke lie sorry. regards, muKhlis jab tak na milen "nainoN se nayan", iqrar adhura rahta he jab tak na hile "sar hoNToN ke sang", izhaar adhura rahta he badli ki rat men chandrma chhup chhup ke nikalta he jab tak na haten "dilbar ki zulfeN", didar adhura rahta he sajni ki oat men sajan ka har lamha ik yad he jab tak na mile "badan se badan", ye pyar adhura rahta he preetam ne aankh meN kaajal ka ik lep lagaya he jab tak na lage "mathe pe bindiya", singhar adhura rahta he jani ne pyar se janiya ka jo haath maanga dasvin baar jab tak na paRe " bhar-poor thappaR", inkar adhura rahta he sadiyon se pyar ke jazbat ka izhar mushkil men he jab tak na khule "raaz-e-mohabbat", asraar adhura rahta he shadi ki aad men "shaayar" ka ishtehar chhapta he jab tak na chhape "tasveer uski", akhbar adhura rahta he padhne ke lie shukrya |
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6th April 2008, 01:47 PM
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aadaab arz! aap kii yeh perody bohat achchhi lagii... paDh kar lutf aayaa.. aur jaan kar khushii huii kii ek aalaa shaayar ham sab ke beech maujuud hai.n.. aap ka yahaan swaagat hai... yuu.n hii apane ehsaas ham se baa.nTate rahiye... Mayank |
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6th April 2008, 05:15 PM
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apko meri koshish pasand ayi men abhari hun apka. men shayar hi nahin to ala ka sawal hi nahin peda hota. apki zaranawazi he verna men is qabil nahin. ap mujhe jhar ke ped pe chadha rahe hen kahin men maghrur na ho jaun haha dhanyawad muKhlis |
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11th May 2008, 03:26 AM
a RE-RUN for the benefit of those who missed it the first time around. thank you!
 tu aur aaraa'ish-e-Kham-e-kaakul maiN aur andesha_haa-e-dur o daraaz |
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13th May 2008, 06:12 PM
Cool mukhlisji..............enjoyed ..reading it..................
 Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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14th May 2008, 09:26 AM
Very nice Mukhlis ji!
Bahut maza aaya padh ke!!! Khaas kar ke woh thappad vaali do lines..  ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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14th May 2008, 08:54 PM
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thank you!tu aur aaraa'ish-e-Kham-e-kaakul maiN aur andesha_haa-e-dur o daraaz |
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17th May 2008, 03:20 PM
Aur kya kahoon ????
Wah Wa.. W.........Wah. |
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19th May 2008, 08:12 PM
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tu aur aaraa'ish-e-Kham-e-kaakul maiN aur andesha_haa-e-dur o daraaz |
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