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do din mein..ek mazaahiya gazal |
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do din mein..ek mazaahiya gazal -
17th May 2008, 11:23 PM
yahan dekha nahin hai do rupaye ka note do din mein
miyan tum char gaye ho do kilo akhrot do din mein. ye marze-ishq hai tum kya hansi thattha samajhte ho kabhi achhi hui hai us nazar ki chot do din mein. meri izzat tumhare haath hai inkaar mat karna main lauta doonga sach maano tumhara coat do din mein. are mazdoor ji shaadi ka ghar hai jante ho tum kisi surat se karne hain tumhe do kote do din mein. na us se itni ummeeden lagao wo to leader hai bhula dega use kisne diya tha vote,do din mein. by... PRASHANT VASL |
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19th May 2008, 12:50 AM
mayank ji
meharbaani hogi agar kabhi kabhi meri thodi 'alochna'bhi kar diya karen..ravaayatan nahin..agar zaoori samjhen..main 'nindak niyare raakhiye aangan kuti chavaay'type.. jo bhi ho tareef se hausla badhta hai aur alochna se aur zyada HAUSLA badhta hai..kuchh behtar kuchh aur behtar karne ka.. shukriya. prashant vasl |
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19th May 2008, 01:29 AM
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U have a good sense of humour! Keep it up! ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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19th May 2008, 02:16 AM
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hahahaha last sher la jawaab hai likhte rahiye  apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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main aur meri bivi.. |
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main aur meri bivi.. -
19th May 2008, 11:54 AM
BAHUT SAKHT GARMI HAI PANKHA CHALA DO
HALAQ SOOKHTA HAI MUJHE KUCHH PILA DO. YE KYON TUM SAVERE SE ROOTHI HUI HO ZARA PAAS AAO ZARA MUSKURA DO. HAR IK SUBAH MUJH SE RUPAYE MANGTI HO BAHUT HO GAYA AB YE SYSTEM HATA DO. IJAAZAT AGAR HO TO THODI PEE LOON ZARA PYAZ KE KUCHH PAKAUDE BANA DO. YE NAUKAR BHI KAMBAKHT IK DARD-E-SAR HAI GHADI PAL MEIN KAHTA HAI T.V CHALA DO. MISES LALWAANI KI HIMMAT TO DEKHO MUJHE KAH RAHI THEE KI RIKSHA BULA DO. CHALO HO GAYE DIL KE ARMAAN POORE BAHUT KAH RAHI THEEN CINE-MA DIKH DO. BAHUT ACHHA LAGTA HAI JAB 'VASL' MUJH SE WO KAHTI HAI MOPED PE APNI GHUMA DO. PRASHANT VASL's original for all concerned.. |
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19th May 2008, 11:44 PM
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Take Care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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20th May 2008, 03:14 PM
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 kahin tanesh se yeh sab nahin karvati.......... na wakayi prashantji..bahut khub rahin yeh miya biwi ki baateeiN...... .....padhke badi hasi bhi aa rahin hain...yunhin likhte rahe..........mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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