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Aaj kehte hain….. -
29th December 2004, 10:33 PM
Ek gudiya ya phir ek masoom bacche ki tarah thi….. duniya usne dekhi na thi….ya phir maine hi nahi chaha ki vo is berahm duniye se mile…..har dard har sitam uthate rahe….ki uske hoton par muskaan bani rahe…..
kuch aage bada to pyar ko tolne lag gaya tha shayad, shayad ek tarazu pe khade the…. Aur use uhtaane ke liye main girta gaya….. tarazu ek taraf zhukne laga……pata nahi ki mera pyar bhari pad raha tha aur phir uski wafa kamzor….. Isi khayal mein kuch bikhre se ashaar jod paaya hoon….apki pesh-e-nazar hain…. Aaj kehte hain….. Tu kya, tera wajod hai kya….. Tere pyar se maine paya hai kya….. Ye to meri kismat thi….. Jo pahuchi sitaroon tak…. Tu kya banata mujhe…. Tune khud ko banaya hai kya….. Yeh jheel si aankhon mein….. Sameta sara samunder maine….. Apni do boond ashkon ko…. Tu samet paya hai kya….. Duniya ki har khushi hai…. mehfilon mein mere bahar hai…. Khali tere haath hain aaj….. Tune mujhe diya hai kya….. Raftaar meri koi pakad na paya ….. Vakt bhi mere aage bad na paya….. Tu kya daudna seekhata mujhe…. Do kadam aage bad paya hai kya….. Hausla dekho, toofaan se takrayi….. Saahil tak tair ke pahuch aayi….. Tu kya banta naakhuda mera….. Apne safine ko bacha paya hai kya….. Bhoola diya gujra har lamha….. Bhoola diya ehsaas bhi tera….. Tu kya sikhata bhoolana mujhe….. Khud ko bhoola paya hai kya…. Thokar kabhi na khayi maine….. Makhmal si rah hamesha paayi maine…. Tu jo girta raha yunhi ^AMAN^…. Khud ko utha paya hai kya….. Aaj kehte hain….. **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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30th December 2004, 02:52 PM
Yeh jheel si aankhon mein…..
Sameta sara samunder maine….. Apni do boond ashkon ko…. Tu samet paya hai kya….. Duniya ki har khushi hai…. mehfilon mein mere bahar hai…. Khali tere haath hain aaj….. Tune mujhe diya hai kya….. Hausla dekho, toofaan se takrayi….. Saahil tak tair ke pahuch aayi….. Tu kya banta naakhuda mera….. Apne safine ko bacha paya hai kya….. Bhoola diya gujra har lamha….. Bhoola diya ehsaas bhi tera….. Tu kya sikhata bhoolana mujhe….. Khud ko bhoola paya hai kya…. Thokar kabhi na khayi maine….. Makhmal si rah hamesha paayi maine…. Tu jo girta raha yunhi ^AMAN^…. Khud ko utha paya hai kya….. Aman Dost! Bahut khoob likha hai ek baar fir tumne... Dard hai tumahre kalaam me but this is very beautiful... bahut acche lage tumhare yeh ashaar bhi... meri daad kubool karna... aur aage bhi likhte rehna  TCLagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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hi -
30th December 2004, 04:20 PM
Thokar kabhi na khayi maine…..
Makhmal si rah hamesha paayi maine…. Tu jo girta raha yunhi ^AMAN^…. Khud ko utha paya hai kya….. hi, amanji, kya likhte ho aap, bahot khub............ bye, take care................... tune pyaar u sikhake Jindgi ho jindagi badal di....... **~ Aashi ~** |
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30th December 2004, 05:06 PM
bahot khub aman ji
aapka bagawat bhara kalam bahot khub hai take care jo ab ye bewaqt hi tuje satane aa gaye logo ne nahi dekha apne girebaan main aur dekho 'sanam' ko aajmane aa gaye -> SaNaM |
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4th January 2005, 07:27 PM
Aman Dost!
Bahut khoob likha hai ek baar fir tumne... Dard hai tumahre kalaam me but this is very beautiful... bahut acche lage tumhare yeh ashaar bhi... meri daad kubool karna... aur aage bhi likhte rehna TC Pulkit Dost..... thanks for coming to my post...... aaj kal kutch kam hi likh paata hoon.... lekin vaada hai ki yun hi likhta rahoonga..... tumhara dost..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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4th January 2005, 07:32 PM
Thokar kabhi na khayi maine…..
Makhmal si rah hamesha paayi maine…. Tu jo girta raha yunhi ^AMAN^…. Khud ko utha paya hai kya….. hi, amanji, kya likhte ho aap, bahot khub............ bye, take care................... ------------ Har lamha hai meherbaan, har pal hai khushi, Paa hi gaya ye kaarvaan, manzil pyaar ki........ Sweet Aashika......, shukriya..... aapka reply meri post pe dekh kar khushi hui..... bus aapka saath chahiye ..... khayal rakhiyega..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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4th January 2005, 07:38 PM
bahot khub aman ji
aapka bagawat bhara kalam bahot khub hai take care Sanam ji..... aapne meri post padi aur uspe reply bhi kiye...... pehli baar aapko yahan paaya...... tah-e-dil se shukriya aapka...... bus ye bagawat bhara kalam likh daala..... khoya hua tha apne ateet main aur vo har lamha saamne se gujra jisko alfaazoon mein jodne ki khoshish ki thi..... shukriya..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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5th January 2005, 04:41 PM
hi,
aman rahi ji............ aapki rah pe chalana to hamara kaam hai, main to apna khyal rakhuni tnx so much, au waise bhi aapne haar waqt mera saath jo diya hai......... aap bhi apna khyal rakhiyega........... tune pyaar u sikhake Jindgi ho jindagi badal di....... **~ Aashi ~** |
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Waah! -
5th January 2005, 04:49 PM
Tu kya banta naakhuda mera…..
Apne safine ko bacha paya hai kya.. Daad kubool keeje Amanbhai. Khoobsurat. Khoobsurat. Aapki ghazal ko meri ye saugat kubool karein. Dard rone se 'KAM' nahin hota Tujhko to dard-e-gham nahin hota Umr bhar mujhko rulane waale kabhi rote jo hansaaya hai kya. Meherbaani. Inaayat. ------------- Urooj-e-aadam-e-khaqi se Anjum sahme jaate hain... kahin ye toota hua taara mah-e-kaamil na ban jaaye |
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7th January 2005, 11:43 PM
hi,
aman rahi ji............ aapki rah pe chalana to hamara kaam hai, main to apna khyal rakhuni tnx so much, au waise bhi aapne haar waqt mera saath jo diya hai......... aap bhi apna khyal rakhiyega........... Sweet Aashi..... tnx..... rahoon ko apni hi chood chala hoon..... kafan is laash pe oodh chal hoon..... ab koi na thaamna daaman-e-^AMAN^..... rush ko kabr ki tarf mod chala hoon...... yahi likh paya tumhare liye aashi..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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9th January 2005, 04:26 PM
hi amanji h r u realy me bhut hi achi poem likhi hai bagawat par aapne itna acha likha hai mano har word aapke dil se nikhla ho humari daad kabul kare or ase hi likhte rhyega
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10th January 2005, 10:45 AM
hi......................
dear Aman........................................ ??? tune pyaar u sikhake Jindgi ho jindagi badal di....... **~ Aashi ~** |
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10th January 2005, 11:48 AM
bhai aman
bas yahiN kehna hai ... ki koi bhi gham jindgi se bada nahi hota ... gaur kariyega meri batOn pe jo sunday raat ko hui thi ,... kalam bohat sahilikha hai .. par ispe daad nahi de sakta ... apna khyal rakhna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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10th January 2005, 08:53 PM
Tu kya banta naakhuda mera…..
Apne safine ko bacha paya hai kya.. Daad kubool keeje Amanbhai. Khoobsurat. Khoobsurat. Aapki ghazal ko meri ye saugat kubool karein. Dard rone se 'KAM' nahin hota Tujhko to dard-e-gham nahin hota Umr bhar mujhko rulane waale kabhi rote jo hansaaya hai kya. Meherbaani. Inaayat. Kamakaze Ji..... shukriya...... jo aapne mere post pe reply kiya...... aur kadi ko aage badaya...... sher vakayie mein accha hai..... aate rahiyega..... tumhara dost..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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10th January 2005, 11:08 PM
hi amanji h r u realy me bhut hi achi poem likhi hai bagawat par aapne itna acha likha hai mano har word aapke dil se nikhla ho humari daad kabul kare or ase hi likhte rhyega
ok bye Chandni Ji...... aap yahan aayi..... yahi humare liye bahut hai....... shukriya ki is naacheez ke ye toote phoote se jo ashaar jode the.... aapko pasand aaye...... khayal rakhiyega..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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10th January 2005, 11:12 PM
hi......................
dear Aman........................................ ??? sweet Aashi...... kaisi ho...... aur ......??? take care...... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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10th January 2005, 11:21 PM
bhai aman
bas yahiN kehna hai ... ki koi bhi gham jindgi se bada nahi hota ... gaur kariyega meri batOn pe jo sunday raat ko hui thi ,... kalam bohat sahilikha hai .. par ispe daad nahi de sakta ... apna khyal rakhna kunal mere bhai Kunal...... jo raat ko baat hui..... aur jo tumne kaha.....ki gairoon ke baat ka gam manana aur apno ki baaten bhool jaana...... zindagi se bada koi gam nahi hota....... kutch der soochta raha...... aur vo jaam jispe sirf aman ka naam likha tha...... use aakri baar hoton se laga..... tod diya....... ..... se kehna..... bade bhai ka haat hamesh uske sar par hai..... jaan de sakta hai tumhara bhai..... lekin vachan se kabhi nahi phir sakta....... aur itna gussa....... ki daad bhi nahi di....... chalooo ab de do...... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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10th January 2005, 11:41 PM
aman jee ... maine aapki kalam pehli baar padhi hai ... aur itni pasand aayi ki mere ehsaas ko peishane ke liye mere paas koi alfaaz nahi. bahot hi zayada acha likha hai aapne ... aur isi tarah likhte rahiye ... khuda hafiz
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10th January 2005, 11:49 PM
Hi Aman,
Kahoon to kya? Bahut khub. Dil se likha ha. Dard bhi seedha mere dil ko laga hai. Wah dost aanhin nam karde aapne. Jawab likhna chahta tha au jawab hai bhi ....magar...dost tumhari duniya mein meri koi aukad nahi...isliye kabhi aur kissi aur jagah Ummed hai likhte rahoge Thanks Rohin |
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shukriya ki aapne meri post padi aur us pe apne khayal bhi jahir kiye...... aate rahiyega...... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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14th January 2005, 11:37 AM
Dear Aman,
Maaf kijiyega aapne apna dard bayan kiya hai apni poem mein aur main majboor hoon wah wah karne pe......Aapne bahut hi accha likha hai......Dard jab hadh se jyada bad jaye tau us mein itni kashish aa jati hai ki woh apna ehsaas dusron ko bhi dila deta hai.....Apka haal samjhti hoon is liye aankhon mein ek kayam nami aur hoton pe ek sacchi muskan lekar aapke pass aa rahi hoon......Pathar bane is dil ne aaj aapki poem ke jariye kuch mehsoos kiya hai.......Issi tarah hamesha mere is bejaan dil mein jaan dalte rahiyega.....Likhte rahiyega.....May God Bless U with every SUCCESS & SMILE ....Aameen !!! |
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18th January 2005, 04:16 PM
Hi Aman,
Kahoon to kya? Bahut khub. Dil se likha ha. Dard bhi seedha mere dil ko laga hai. Wah dost aanhin nam karde aapne. Jawab likhna chahta tha au jawab hai bhi ....magar...dost tumhari duniya mein meri koi aukad nahi...isliye kabhi aur kissi aur jagah Ummed hai likhte rahoge Thanks Rohin ji ....... aap aaye .... is baat ke liye shukriya............ lekin lagta hai humse anjaane mein koi khata ho gayi shayad kahin jo aap itne gusse mein.... rsishta dil se hota hai.... aur dil kisi ka bada ya choota nahi hota..... dil to dil hota hai.... aur iska koi mol nahi hota........ shukriya aapke aane ka..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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18th January 2005, 04:28 PM
Lagta hai meine kuch galat likh diya...
Arre dost apne likha itna aacha tha ki mere paas us waqt koi alfaz nahi the aapke sher ka jawab dene ke liye...Aapke lavz seedha mere dil ko chu gaye the... AAp to humare doston mein se hain...AAp se kaise gussa hosakte hain.... Ab mein apna hi likha padhoon to lagega mein jo kehna chahta tha woh shayad galat pad gaya.... Maaf karna agar tumhe bura lag gaya... Sorry But you write really well...Keep Writing... Thanks Rohin |
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25th January 2005, 12:17 PM
Dear Aman,
Maaf kijiyega aapne apna dard bayan kiya hai apni poem mein aur main majboor hoon wah wah karne pe......Aapne bahut hi accha likha hai......Dard jab hadh se jyada bad jaye tau us mein itni kashish aa jati hai ki woh apna ehsaas dusron ko bhi dila deta hai.....Apka haal samjhti hoon is liye aankhon mein ek kayam nami aur hoton pe ek sacchi muskan lekar aapke pass aa rahi hoon......Pathar bane is dil ne aaj aapki poem ke jariye kuch mehsoos kiya hai.......Issi tarah hamesha mere is bejaan dil mein jaan dalte rahiyega.....Likhte rahiyega.....May God Bless U with every SUCCESS & SMILE ....Aameen !!! Real honestlife ji..... Muafi chahoonga der se likhne ke liye.... kaafi dino se masroof tha..... is kalam ne aapke dil mein ek ehsaas jagaya..... meri ye koshish mukammal hui..... main har koshish karoonga ki aapke dil mein jeene ka ehsaas paida kar sakoon.....aur gam bhulaane mein aapka saath de sakhoon...... khuda aapko zahan ki nayab khushiyaan bakshe...... aapka apna..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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25th January 2005, 12:26 PM
Lagta hai meine kuch galat likh diya...
Arre dost apne likha itna aacha tha ki mere paas us waqt koi alfaz nahi the aapke sher ka jawab dene ke liye...Aapke lavz seedha mere dil ko chu gaye the... AAp to humare doston mein se hain...AAp se kaise gussa hosakte hain.... Ab mein apna hi likha padhoon to lagega mein jo kehna chahta tha woh shayad galat pad gaya.... Maaf karna agar tumhe bura lag gaya... Sorry But you write really well...Keep Writing... Thanks Rohin Rohin Sahab..... gussa apno ka nahi manate aur dosti mein sorry kahan se aa gayi.... bus aapka saath hai jo ye khaaksaar haqeeqat-e-zindagi bayan karrta rahega..... tumhara dost..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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25th January 2005, 03:01 PM
Hi,
Aman & all involved friends, Wah bhai wah kya khoob likha ha, aisa lagta ha khuda ne sare hi mohabbat ke dard aapki jholi me hi daal diye ha, magar aman sahab thoda sa apne aapko sambhalna kahi geer na jana, verna ye duniya badi bedard ha is duniya ko dard ka ehsaas hi nahi, aapko hath dekar utha bhi na sakegi. Sher ke liye, badhiya by take care OK By freinds |
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5th February 2005, 04:25 PM
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hi irfaan ji..... reply karne ke liye shukriya..... aur dost hum to gir kar akele hi uthe hain...... sambhalna baaki hai..... khuda se yahi dua hai ki sambhal jaayen aur zindagi ek naye sire se shuru kareen... aur jab aap logon ka saath hai to phir darr kaisa...... saath dete rehna..... tumhara bhai...... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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7th February 2005, 11:46 AM
hi...................... dear Aman........................................ ??? ------------ Har lamha hai meherbaan, har pal hai khushi, Paa hi gaya ye kaarvaan, manzil pyaar ki........ Sweet Aashika.... Sweet Aashika..... jawab nahi diya aapne...... intezaar rahega...... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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hi, aman,
which answer?????????? tune pyaar u sikhake Jindgi ho jindagi badal di....... **~ Aashi ~** |
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7th February 2005, 04:10 PM
soni kudi.....
are thoda upar jaaye aur padiye ki kay poocha tha humne... tumhara dost..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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waisa bhi hota hai -
8th February 2005, 12:21 PM
aman main to thik hu,
aap bhi apna khayal rakhiyega.................... tune pyaar u sikhake Jindgi ho jindagi badal di....... **~ Aashi ~** |
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8th February 2005, 12:29 PM
shukriya mohtarmaa.....
kahayal rakhiyega..... aapka dost..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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hi -
8th February 2005, 01:05 PM
Aman ji,
aaj aapki likhi rachana padhi to.. kuchh bhi nahi likh saka.. jaise laga kalam ruk si gayi hai... behad khubsurat hai.. bas likhate rahiye... Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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Re: hi -
10th February 2005, 12:09 PM
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aapko itni pasand aayi.....likhna mukammal hua dost..... shukriya..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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Re: hi -
16th February 2005, 11:33 PM
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aaj apni poorani post pad raha to dhyan aaya ki tumne poocha kya hai....aur jab maine poocha to iska jawab bhi nahi diya..... mohtarmaa jara batayengi ki aap kehna kya chahti hain......... tumhara dost....... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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hi -
17th February 2005, 03:24 AM
dear aman,
--------------- kya ques pucha hai aapne,pata nahi mera pyar bhari tha ya uski wafa kamjor kya kahu? this is amazing words, aki post se aisa laga ek kahani haiand this is what happens in the real world....we do everything we can for someone and in the end all we hear is tumne kiya hi kya hai.....what i am, i am myself, tum khud kuch kar na paye, mujhe kya shikhayoge? amzaing word of writing !!!!!!!!!!!!! Jisko maine sab kuch diya, dil diya jahhan diya aaj puchta hai mujhse, aakhir tera wajood kya hai, aaj me us se puchna chahti hu, tujhe pyar maine kiya, aur mera kasoor kya hai?? Luv Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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17th February 2005, 03:06 PM
hi, aman,
kaise ho? kuch bhi to nahi........... tune pyaar u sikhake Jindgi ho jindagi badal di....... **~ Aashi ~** |
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21st February 2005, 03:36 PM
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Priya.... tussi pehli ho jine eh padya....pata nahi mera pyar bhari tha ya uski wafa kamjor tusi bade gaur naal padhdi hoo.....changa lagya..... thuvaada sher bhi bahut changa hai...... shukriya Priya....mera saathe dene ke liye...... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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Sweet Aashi..... haal to theek hain.....kutch hadd tak..... aaj kal kam aati ho.......kutch masroof ho lagta hai..... khayal rakhna apna...... tumhara dost...... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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**Likhte Rahiyega younhi agar Aapka Dil Kahe tou**I do Understand & Have been Through A Lot too~Dekhne ko milti rehti hain...**Khair, Jo main kehna chah rahi thi wo thodi der baad wapas aa kar kahoungi**I know it's not easy when things happens to Human Being~Lekin ek baat ka Pata hain...aur haan, Yaaqeen Hain...Jo Bhi Guzar jaata hain Uss mein kuchhh na kuchhh achchha hi hota hain~Wo Kehte Hain Na Ki Khuda Jo Karte Hain Hamare Achchhai Ke Liye Hi Karta Hain**Waise tou ye sab baate agar gaur se soche tou zarour samajh aa jaayegi(Ek Deen Zarour~In Future **)_Haan ye aur baat hain ki Uss waqt ham aksar Dil Ke Darwaze Bandh Kardete Hain_Majbouran**Aap Ko Main Ek Achchha Insaan Samajhti Houn aur haan_Ek Dost Bhi aur iss liye hi kuchhh aur kahoungi thodi hi der mein~I hope You will Understand...**Khush Rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care...**God bless You. Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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