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Jo LaUt KaR AaYe WaHi SaChChI mUhAbBaT hAi -
27th December 2004, 04:44 PM
Pata nahi main kya likhe ja rahi hu..
 kuchh format ban bhi raha hai ki nahi  fir bhi...dil kar raha hai ...jis ehsas ne lafjo ka roop liya hai..use post kar hi diya jaye.. "Bardast" kar lijiyega  Quote:
jo ab ye bewaqt hi tuje satane aa gaye logo ne nahi dekha apne girebaan main aur dekho 'sanam' ko aajmane aa gaye -> SaNaM |
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Re: Jo LaUt KaR AaYe WaHi SaChChI mUhAbBaT hAi -
28th December 2004, 08:33 PM
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bas yahi kahunga ... ki jab tak hum ehsaas hi nahi karaenge ki wakai sacchi mohbbat hai ya nahi to koi nahi aane wala /... ab mayavi jamana nahi raha ,,, aur sach jab banda jane lagta hai kisi se door ... to sanam ki pukar hi use ehsaas dila sakti hai ... yun na rokne se shayad bat kahin bigad na jaye ... aur apne pyar ko bachane ke liye hum jhuk jaye to shayad koi gunah nahi ... khair muaf kijiyega gar kuch bhi jyada likh gaya hun to .. kalam ke taur pe shayad ye theek hai dua karounga sukoon mile aapko ... dilon ne lagaye taale kadmo pe juban hili nahi meri tere julmo pe waqt-e-rukhsat, pukaro kash 'saccha_pyar' milu na milun kal etbaar nahi lakeeron pe./.. aap apna khayal rakhiyega umeed hai meri naadaaniyon ko nazarandaz kar mujhe muaf karengi gar main jyada bola hun to ... aapka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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28th December 2004, 10:29 PM
Sanam.....
khayal aache hai aur zasbaaton ko bhi bkhubi bayan kiya hai..... aur Kunal ne bhi uspe reply aacha likha hai..... kehna chaahonga..... gar saachi mohaabat thi to kyun chood dard chala gaya..... meri aagosh ki rehas thi to kyun uski baahon mein ghul gaya ..... bhool gaya har sitam bhool gaya wafa-e-^AMAN^..... kya kabhi laut ke aayega jo saare aam nilaam kar gaya...... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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28th December 2004, 11:17 PM
meri sanam,
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29th December 2004, 10:26 AM
Sanam..
Tumhaare is kalaam me koi 'format' na hote hui bhi ek rawaani si hai.. lafzoN aur jazbaatoN ka ek bahaav sa hai jo ek sher ko doosre se joD kar rakhe hai.. Waise hi jaise khayaaloN ke silsile hote hain.. aur shayad ye kalaam yahi hai.. tumhaare khayaaloN ka ek kaafila sa.. jo hume behad khubsoorat raha.. Kalaam me jahaan ek nayapan hai.. ek taazgi hai.. wahiN tumhaari 'Signature' saadgi bhi hai.. saade lafzoN me, gehre jazbaat, sachche khayaal. Tumhaare is kalaam ke har sher me ek sachchai hai, jo ise aur bhi nayaab bana deti hai. All in all a great work! Its always a pleasure to read you! Apna khayaal rakna.. aur muskuraati rehna..  |
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Re: Re: Jo LaUt KaR AaYe WaHi SaChChI mUhAbBaT hAi -
30th December 2004, 05:14 PM
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sayad aapne sahi kaha.. lekin fir bhi me ye kahungi ki this varies from person to person ho sakta hai kisi ko rukna hi na ho..or ye bhi to ho sakta hai ki rokne wale ko ego problem ho ya fir wo kisii pe koi dabaw na chahta ho aur janab Aapne to bahot sulje hui baat kahi hia..nadani kaha ki? to fir najar andaj karne ka to sawal hi nahi uthta. Aapka sher bhi bahot sahi hia i will remeber that thank you jo ab ye bewaqt hi tuje satane aa gaye logo ne nahi dekha apne girebaan main aur dekho 'sanam' ko aajmane aa gaye -> SaNaM |
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30th December 2004, 05:16 PM
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aapne bhi utna hi khubsurat sher baya kiya hai jitna kunal ji ne. muje to pata hi nahi chal raha me kya bolu bas ye keh sakti hu ki... Bahot bahot shukriya jo ab ye bewaqt hi tuje satane aa gaye logo ne nahi dekha apne girebaan main aur dekho 'sanam' ko aajmane aa gaye -> SaNaM |
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30th December 2004, 05:18 PM
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aapki baate to mere palle nahi padti or aap ab isharo me samjane lagi.. hadd karti hai aap bhi a-re nahi... bas majak kar rahi thi. thanks for ur ...................... take care jo ab ye bewaqt hi tuje satane aa gaye logo ne nahi dekha apne girebaan main aur dekho 'sanam' ko aajmane aa gaye -> SaNaM |
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30th December 2004, 05:20 PM
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muje batao..tum jaisa hunar pane ke liye me kya kahu jitni khubsurati se kalam likhti ho usse bhi jiyada khubsurati se dusro ka hausla afjayee karti ho. tumhara ek ek lafj padh kar lag raha hai jaise meri koi teacher muje motivate kar rahi hai.. bahot bahot shukriya ise padhne ke liye or apni rai dene ke liye take care jo ab ye bewaqt hi tuje satane aa gaye logo ne nahi dekha apne girebaan main aur dekho 'sanam' ko aajmane aa gaye -> SaNaM |
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3rd January 2005, 12:10 AM
sana'
kasi ho? bohat kmaal likha hay.... bohat din bad likhti ho acha likhti ho aksar aisa hota hay..dil main jo baat chuppi hoti hay use byan karne k liye lafzon ki rah nahi milti.... or klam..bas likhe jata...bekhabri...main.. FILBADI..shayri kahte hain ise.. acha likha hay tareef agar mohabbat hay to judai kiyon or judai main mohabbat kasi???? |
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3rd January 2005, 04:29 PM
IS kadar hairani Se na dekh..
ye haSad nahi mohabbat he jiSka tuje ilm tak nahi bekadar ye wahi chhupi hui chahat hai Waahh! Tune kabhi Socha hi kahan hai ki muje bhi teri jarurat hai Tuje to iShq he uchaiyon Se. . SaNaM kaha teri haSrat hai.. Toooo Goood! kyo bahe aShk mere,teri yad me In ankho ki nahi tuje kimat hai Main kyo roku tuje... kiSi ne kaha bhi to hai “jo laut kar aaye wahi sachchi mohabbat hai" Sanam! Bahut hi sundar likha hai aapne.... I loved it.. specially the above lines..... Full of Love.. Full of Pain... Really Beautiful Words... Bahut accha lgaa aapko padhkar.... Rahi baat format ki.. uski samajh to mujhe hai nahi... Padha aapko bahut accha laga... Aage bhi aise hi likhti rahengi.. yehi ummeed hai.... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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3rd January 2005, 09:32 PM
Tuje to iShq he uchaiyon Se. .
SaNaM kaha teri haSrat hai.. kyo bahe aShk mere,teri yad me In ankho ki nahi tuje kimat hai Sanam.. YuN tou yah puri qalam hi behtariiN hai.. parye 2 sher tou ek nayaa aayaam de jaate haiN pure ghazal ko.. waaah! waah! Andaaz e bayaaN la jawaaB hai.. Kya kahena.. Jinhe apne aasooN ki kimat nahi hai unke liye aanso bahaana.. ek paagalpan ke sivaa kuchh nahi.. Jyada taariif karna .. suraj ko diya dikhna hi hoga.. Ek sher arz hai.. ustaadoN ki likhi huyi..Umeed hai pasand aayegaa.. [color=dark red]Mere gham ne hosh unke kho diye.. wo samjhaate samjhaate khud ro diye..[/color] Khush rahiye aur yuN hi likhte rahiye.. MayanK |
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24th January 2005, 11:26 AM
Bahnaa .. kaisi ho
likhte waQt kabhi ye nahi socha kii kya likh raha huN jo bhi ban gaya kabhi kisi ne kaha ki ghazal ban gayi aur kabhi apni tooti hui zindgi ka fasana .. filhaal jo kuch bhi likha vo sab apna hi thaa aur jab hum sunane apnoN ko ja raheiN ho to ye kaisa sochna ki kuch apna humare apnoN ko bardasht karna padega .. TUM JO KUCH BHI LIKHOGI VO HUMARI PALKON TALE DIL ME QAID RAHEGA dil ki dua hamesha rahegi ki jab bhi likho khush ho kar likho kabhi bhi udaas mat hona .. Qalaam kii tareef me kya likhuN tareef to hamesha banane wale ki hoti hai vo chahe hume banane wala ho ya ... khair isi tarah sabke beech apni mauzoodgi banaye rakho AUR KHUSH RAHO |
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