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Ek din es duniyaaN se, yuN hi chalaa jaaegaa Raj -
29th October 2011, 04:07 PM
Ek din es duniyaaN se, yuN hi chalaa jaaegaa Raj
Apne piche ek duniyaaN, chood jaaegaa Raj
Apni saaNseN bhi jab sath chood jaaeNgi
Meri dhadkaneN bhi mujhse muNh mood jaaeNgi
Phir khud ki duniyaaN, khud hi sajaaegaa Raj
Ek din es duniyaaN se, yuN hi chalaa jaaegaa Raj
GaerooN se kya shikvaa, apne hi bewafaa hai
Shaayad apnoo se piyaar karne ki yahi sajaa hai
Ab na kisi ke aage apne haath phaelaaegaa Raj
Ek din es duniyaaN se, yuN hi chalaa jaaegaa Raj
Sunee thi har diwaali meri, sunee thi hooli
Zamaane ne es kadar bhari , gamooN se meri jhooli
Chood khusiNyooN ko, gamooN ko apna banaaega Raj
Ek din es duniyaaN se, yuN hi chalaa jaaegaa Raj
Na jalaanaa, na dafnaanaa, na bahaanaa mujhe yaaroN
Ho sake to apne dil ke kisi kone meiN basaanaa yaaroN
Na jaane kahaaN jaakar, duniyaaN nayee basaaegaa Raj
Ek din es duniyaaN se, yuN hi chalaa jaaegaa Raj
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29th October 2011, 04:37 PM
Sad .............. I don't want to be harsh but it is almost poetry in self pity... maybe others would like it ... but I don't
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30th October 2011, 12:04 AM
Na jalaanaa, na dafnaanaa, na bahaanaa mujhe yaaroN
Ho sake to apne dil ke kisi kone meiN basaanaa yaaroN
Na jaane kahaaN jaakar, duniyaaN nayee basaaegaa Raj
Ek din es duniyaaN se, yuN hi chalaa jaaegaa Raj
nice expressions.... although very negative but very near to reality ... do keep writing.. tc
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30th October 2011, 10:19 AM
speechless...
aapka
~Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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30th October 2011, 10:37 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Rajeev Sharma
Ek din es duniyaaN se, yuN hi chalaa jaaegaa Raj
Apne piche ek duniyaaN, chood jaaegaa Raj
Apni saaNseN bhi jab sath chood jaaeNgi
Meri dhadkaneN bhi mujhse muNh mood jaaeNgi
Phir khud ki duniyaaN, khud hi sajaaegaa Raj
Ek din es duniyaaN se, yuN hi chalaa jaaegaa Raj
GaerooN se kya shikvaa, apne hi bewafaa hai
Shaayad apnoo se piyaar karne ki yahi sajaa hai
Ab na kisi ke aage apne haath phaelaaegaa Raj
Ek din es duniyaaN se, yuN hi chalaa jaaegaa Raj
Sunee thi har diwaali meri, sunee thi hooli
Zamaane ne es kadar bhari , gamooN se meri jhooli
Chood khusiNyooN ko, gamooN ko apna banaaega Raj
Ek din es duniyaaN se, yuN hi chalaa jaaegaa Raj
Na jalaanaa, na dafnaanaa, na bahaanaa mujhe yaaroN
Ho sake to apne dil ke kisi kone meiN basaanaa yaaroN
Na jaane kahaaN jaakar, duniyaaN nayee basaaegaa Raj
Ek din es duniyaaN se, yuN hi chalaa jaaegaa Raj
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Waah bahut khoob. Waise bhi ye ek sachhai hi hai. Negative is nothing but another side of positive always.... It always exists...
Truely speechless about your expressions.
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30th October 2011, 03:59 PM
Rajeev ji...mere khayaal se jina marna yeh sab upar waale ke haath me chhod dena chahiye...
Jab jaana hai tou jaana hai...soch soch ke kyuN zindegi kharaab karna..
Zindegi mili hai tou usay jee bhar ke ji lijiye...apne aas paas khushiyoN ko dhuundiye...
..Life is like a blanket too short. ..You pull it up and your toes rebel, you yank it down and shivers meander about your shoulder; but cheerful folks manage to draw their knees up and pass a very comfortable night.
~Marion Howard.....
The happiness of life is made up of minute fractions ,..a smile, a kind look, a heartfelt compliment ,countless pleasurable thought and genial feeling...
There's a lot hidden around us, that can make us happy ...its just that we have to find it out ourselves.
THINK POSITIVE AND BE POSITIVE........
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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31st October 2011, 09:57 AM
Bahut PeeDhaaDaayek Ehsaasaat Likhe HaiN .... Rajeev Ji !
Tahreer Kaa Dard Hai Toh AchChhaa Hai ... Magar Khud Ko Iss MeN Dubaa Huaa Bilkul Naa DekheN ... Humaari Yeh Hii Kaamnaa Hai ... !
Khush RaheN ... !
Apnaa Theek Se Khayaal RakheN ... !
DuaaoN Ke Saath ... !
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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24th July 2012, 10:52 AM
एक दिन इस दुनियाँ से, यूँ ही चला जाएगा राज
अपने पीछे एक दुनियाँ, छोड़ जाएगा राज
अपनी साँसें भी जब साथ छोड़ जाएंगी
मेरी धडकनें भी मुझसे मुंह मोड़ जाएंगी
फिर खुद की दुनियाँ, खुद ही सजाएगा राज
एक दिन इस दुनियाँ से, यूँ ही चला जाएगा राज
गैरों से क्या शिकवा, अपने ही बेवफा है
शायद अपनों से प्यार करने की यही सजा है
अब ना किसी के आगे अपने हाथ फैलाएगा राज
एक दिन इस दुनियाँ से, यूँ ही चला जाएगा राज
सूनी थी हर दिवाली मेरी , सूनी थी होली
ज़माने ने इस कदर भरी, ग़मों से मेरी झोली
छोड़ खुशियों को , ग़मों को अपना बनाएगा राज
एक दिन इस दुनियाँ से, यूँ ही चला जाएगा राज
ना जलाना , ना दफनाना , ना बहाना मुझे यारों
हो सके तो अपने दिल के किसी कोने में बसाना यारों
ना जाने कहाँ जाकर , दुनियाँ नयी बसाएगा राज
एक दिन इस दुनियाँ से, यूँ ही चला जाएगा राज ,,!!
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12th January 2013, 04:26 PM
kya baat hai rajeev jee, very touchy and near to reality....kafi milte zulte hain hamare ehsaas ha ha.....hain na.keep writing...khush rahein
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
Arvind Saxena
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13th January 2013, 10:43 AM
Dear Rajeev,
Mujhe aapki gazal bahut pasand ayi....Mujhe Is Rachna meinShiv Batalvi ki Jhalak Nazar
ayee and bahut hi nazaakat se apne dard bayan kiya hain , Main ise self pity naheen kahunga aur naa hi depressive thoughts kahunga..mujhe to is ghazal ka ek ek shabd bahut
pasand aya
and I feel Rajeev yeh Rachna Shiv Batalvi ki Gazal YA RAYIA RaB KARKE MANU
PAIN BIRHU DE KEERE VE.....ke kafi kareeb Hai.
So Salutations and REPS for it..
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Sanjay Sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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21st January 2013, 03:09 PM
aap sabhi ke qimti waqt ka, aur aap sabhi ka yahaN aane ka bahut bahut sukriyaa
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