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Daagh duniya ne diye zakhm zamaane se mile -
9th September 2003, 01:19 PM
Daagh duniya ne diye zakhm zamaane se mile
Hum ko ye tohfe tumhen dost banaane se mile Hum taraste hi taraste hi taraste hi rahe Woh falaane se falaane se falaane se mile Khud se mil jaate to chaahat ka bharam rah jaataa Kyaa mile aap jo logon ke milaane se mile Kaise maane ke unhen bhool gayaa tu ay 'Hafeez' Un ke Khat aaj hamen tere sarahaane se mile Hafeez Paradise is always where love dwells |
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Re: Daagh duniya ne diye zakhm zamaane se mile -
9th September 2003, 04:17 PM
Hafeez Sahab
Umdah hai. Achcha hai. Khud se mil jaate to chaahat ka bharam rah jaataa Kyaa mile aap jo logon ke milaane se mile Khuub! aatey rahiye aur sunate rhaiye Praveen manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi |
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9th September 2003, 04:29 PM
Praveen Sahab,
thanx for u'r appreciation. i'll try to send poetry as good as possible and yea i would also like to tell u that every word in u'r profile is poetic keep it up. Regards Hafeez Paradise is always where love dwells |
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Re: Daagh duniya ne diye zakhm zamaane se mile -
9th September 2003, 05:17 PM
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Ghalat baat hai ye -
9th September 2003, 05:21 PM
Haffez bhai
Main apne alfaaz waapas leta huuN aur jaisa ke mastram bhai ne bata hi diya hai wo ghazal darasl Kaif bhopali shab ki hai. Ye shubha mujhe isey paRhtey paRhte bhi hua tha lekin maqte meN aapka naam dekh kar ruk gaya. Ab to har tarah se aap chor saabit ho gaye haiN. Mastram aapka shukria. Jaankari ke liye] Praveen manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi |
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Re: Daagh duniya ne diye zakhm zamaane se mile -
9th September 2003, 05:22 PM
Kaise maane ke sudhar gaya hai 'Hafeez'
chori ki gazlein aaj hamen 'shayari.com' se mile http://www.urdupoetry.com/kbhopali04.html jai ho Kaif Bhopali saheb ki....  mastram |
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