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Mera dil bechain hai - 2nd August 2014, 04:12 PM

Ek nazm pesh hai ..kachy..pakki si, kabool farmayein
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Mera dil bechain hai usse milne ko ,
jiske aane ki koi umeed nahin.

Ise dil ka veham kahun ya pagalpan ,
Na jaane kyon aati mujhe neend nahin.

Gar aankh lag jaye ghari do gharee ,
Shayad sapnon mein ho jaye unki deed kahin.

Jab bichre thhe waqt tham gaya tha wahin ,
Ab us bin man ko aata chain nahin.

Per farfarate hai per urne ki aadat nahin ,
Dil aur dimag mein chalti hai takraar kahi.



khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
   
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2nd August 2014, 06:11 PM

Bahut khoobsurat.........
Wah....



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आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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3rd August 2014, 02:34 AM

Bilkul kabool ki ye khoobsurat jazbaat se bhari nazm Hamdam ji !! Waah !!


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3rd August 2014, 11:56 PM

Per farfarate hai per urne ki aadat nahin ,
Dil aur dimag mein chalti hai takraar kahi.


Hamdam saheb,,

Wahhh! kia kehne... Poori nazm dilkash hai...
lekin quoted lines to janab bilkul hi naya aur aik achhota
khiyaal hai... wahh! wahh!

Khaas in lines k liye dherooN daad qabool kijiye..

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Likhte rahiye,,

DuaooN ke saath,,


*hSn* : parStaar

tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
("Asad")

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5th August 2014, 10:51 AM

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Bahot khoob......khaskar ye ashaar kafi pasand aye
Thanks Nazneen ......aap ko humara khayal bahut pasand aya.

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5th August 2014, 11:15 AM

bahot khoob peshkash hai Sanjay saahab... kaafi waqt ke baad aapko padhnaa acchaa lagaa... llikhte rahen...

Gar aankh lag jaye ghari do gharee ,
Shayad sapnon mein ho jaye unki deed kahin.

Jab bichre thhe waqt tham gaya tha wahin ,
Ab us bin man ko aata chain nahin.

nice lines.....


Shaad...
   
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16th August 2014, 03:35 PM

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Bahut khoobsurat.........
Wah....
Madhu ji aap ka tahe dil se shukriya



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Bilkul kabool ki ye khoobsurat jazbaat se bhari nazm Hamdam ji !! Waah !!

Zarra ji aap ke dil se nikli wah ko hum kabool karte hain
aur humari nazm ko sarahne ke liye shukriya ada karte hain.



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16th August 2014, 03:58 PM

kya baat hai sir ji.................bahut khubbbbbbbbbbbbb


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Per farfarate hai per urne ki aadat nahin ,
Dil aur dimag mein chalti hai takraar kahi.


Hamdam saheb,,

Wahhh! kia kehne... Poori nazm dilkash hai...
lekin quoted lines to janab bilkul hi naya aur aik achhota
khiyaal hai... wahh! wahh!

Khaas in lines k liye dherooN daad qabool kijiye..

Reps added for that lines.

Likhte rahiye,,

DuaooN ke saath,,
Hasan Bhai , Namaskar

Aaj peeche jhanka aur paya.ki.main aap logon ke complements acknowlege karna bhool
gaya.. Khair der aye durust aye ...bahut meherbani janab aapki .



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16th September 2014, 08:07 PM

Sameer bhai , Masoom pyar ji aur Rajeev bhai ...

Aap logon se bhi ye hi kahunga .

..ki bhool jane ki.koi na saza dena
bus hi humara hausla barate rehna .

Aap.sub khush rahein.aur yun hi khsushoyan baante rahein sab mein .

Duaon ke saath izazat .

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bht mast likha hai humdam ji...


Aaj fir dil shayar hona chahta hai..
Dard lafzon me pirona chahta hai..


   
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Mera dil bechain hai usse milne ko ,
jiske aane ki koi umeed nahin.
(Na-ummeed bhi ho toh ummeed milne ki hai, issiliye bechaini hai.. nice one)

Ise dil ka veham kahun ya pagalpan ,
Na jaane kyon aati mujhe neend nahin.
(seriously, bata nahin sakte ki veham hai ya pagalpan, bas ek aarzoo rehti hai dil mein, good one again sir)

Gar aankh lag jaye ghari do gharee ,
Shayad sapnon mein ho jaye unki deed kahin.
(yeh toh bas wish hoti hai.. )

Jab bichre thhe waqt tham gaya tha wahin ,
Ab us bin man ko aata chain nahin.
(Bas yeh chhahat hoti hai ki dobara ussi ghadi mein wapis jayein, fir manayein, duuriyon ko mitayein, waqt toh ussi soch par tham sa gaya hai..
nice sir)

Per farfarate hai per urne ki aadat nahin ,
Dil aur dimag mein chalti hai takraar kahi.
(Battle of Mind and Heart.. Mind says ignore, Heart says No)
Awesome feelings..


Nice one Hamdam;464018 ji.
very nicely expressed feelings of love and desire..


Keep writing..


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Ki koi phir apni Mohabbat se,
Jeene ki nayi wajah de dein...
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21st September 2014, 06:07 PM

bahut khoob sanjay jee..... very nice work.............................................. ............



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