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Smile Kyon - 22nd September 2008, 12:55 PM

dur rehke bhi dil ke kitne kareeb ho..par paas hoke bhi itne dur kyon ho?
neend se tumne mujhe jagaya aur phir sapno ki duniya mein kyon chor diya?
pyar karke tumne is dil ke pyas ko hai bhujaya par is pyas ko aur kyon badhaya?
zindagi khubsurat hai ye tumse hai jaana..par zindagi tumhare bagair adhuri hai,ye maine hai ab jaana..
aake mere jehen se in yaado ko mitado ya apnake mujhe... in lamho ko yaadgar banado


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22nd September 2008, 01:12 PM

Anudeepa ji,
Your creation proves that
Dil se nikali sacchi baaten likhiye, sher apne aap ban jaayenge !
Keep writing.


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22nd September 2008, 03:06 PM

Sanjay Karndhar ji,
aapne hamara post padha...reply mein itna achha likha....iske liye bahot bahot shukriya.Mai zyada kuch nahi jaanti shero shayari k baare mein...bus kuch acha likhne ka mann karta hai..toh paper pen leke baith jati hu..... i am really thankful to u for appreciating my efforts...

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15th November 2008, 03:17 PM

hello anu
wakai me bahut achha likha hai aapne
khaskar ye lines......
"zindagi khubsurat hai ye tumse hai jaana..par zindagi tumhare bagair adhuri hai,ye maine hai ab jaana..
aake mere jehen se in yaado ko mitado ya apnake mujhe... in lamho ko yaadgar banado"

keep writing,
Raj.


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thi shayad uski bhi koi majboori,
jo aaj meri kahani fir adhoori reh gayi"
   
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