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Ankahi Kahaani
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Mujhe Aur Kitana Maarega? -
6th September 2007, 10:01 AM
Mai to mar hi chuki hoon,
Mujhe aur kitana maarega?
Meri duniya bhi to mitt hi chuki hai,
Ab kya dil se mere pyaar ko bhi mitaayega?
Har sapanaa toot chuka hai mera,
Ab aur kitana tu mujhe todna chaahega?
Sab kuchh mera loot gaya pyaar mai tere,
Kitana aur gairon se mujhe lutwaayega?
Barbaad to mai ho hi chuki hoon tere pinchhe,
Gairon se milake aur kitana mujhe barbaad kar jaayega?
Teri har khushi pe humane to lootadi apani har saans thi,
Tu kab tak dhadkan banke dil ko mere tod-ta jaayega?
Teri har taqleef har gum ko hum mar marke khushiyon mai badalte aaye hai,
Kya pata tha ki tu hi humase humaari har khushi ko chhin-le jaayega?
Pyaar mai aaj tere "Gudia" rahe gai banke khilona hai,
Kal shaayad galati pe tu bhi to apani pachhtaayega?
Tujhe banaake Bhagwaan apanaa basaaya tha dil ke mandir mai,
Mai deewaani na jaan paai ke tu banake Shaitaan mere hi dil ka mandir tod jaayega?
Love: Gudia
Jay Ambe
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Ek Aaina Jiski Tasveer Dhundhla Gai,
Ek Dil Jiski Dhadkan Ruksi Gai,
Ek Zindagi Jiski Manzil Ka Koi Pata Hi Nahi,
Ek Daaman Jahaan Se Khushiyaan Galti Se Bhi Guzarti Nahi.
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6th September 2007, 10:18 AM
bahut hi khoobsoorat ehsaas aapke Gudia g
ehsaason ko shabdon mein badalne ka hunar hai aapke paas. bahut hi achhe tarah se nwaza hai aapne apni is kalaam ko....
bahut hi achha laga isse padh kar.....
Khush Rahiye hamesha..........
Badnaseeb bhi nahi par mera naseeb bhi nahi Maana ke main ameer nahi par gareeb bhi nahi Dil ki gehraaiyon mein chhipaya hai jise Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki par mil jaayein unke gham "Jasdeep" itna khushnaseeb bhi nahi
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DIL KI BAAT DIL TAK
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6th September 2007, 01:14 PM
GUDIA JI................Adaab aj apka kalaam pada wah bahut khoob ehsaas apne pesh kiye hain bahut accha laga apka kalam ummid hai ki aap unhi likhti rahengi aur hame padne ko milta raheka..........khush rahiye hamesha........aap ka dost
"Do Pal Ruka Khushio.n ka Karwan"
Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko,
wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain.
Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif''
Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.
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~~Reshma ke Dil ki~~
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16th September 2007, 09:12 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by loveforgudia
Mai to mar hi chuki hoon,
Mujhe aur kitana maarega?
Meri duniya bhi to mitt hi chuki hai,
Ab kya dil se mere pyaar ko bhi mitaayega?
Har sapanaa toot chuka hai mera,
Ab aur kitana tu mujhe todna chaahega?
Sab kuchh mera loot gaya pyaar mai tere,
Kitana aur gairon se mujhe lutwaayega?
Barbaad to mai ho hi chuki hoon tere pinchhe,
Gairon se milake aur kitana mujhe barbaad kar jaayega?
Teri har khushi pe humane to lootadi apani har saans thi,
Tu kab tak dhadkan banke dil ko mere tod-ta jaayega?
Teri har taqleef har gum ko hum mar marke khushiyon mai badalte aaye hai,
Kya pata tha ki tu hi humase humaari har khushi ko chhin-le jaayega?
Pyaar mai aaj tere "Gudia" rahe gai banke khilona hai,
Kal shaayad galati pe tu bhi to apani pachhtaayega?
Tujhe banaake Bhagwaan apanaa basaaya tha dil ke mandir mai,
Mai deewaani na jaan paai ke tu banake Shaitaan mere hi dil ka mandir tod jaayega?
Love: Gudia
Jay Ambe
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Hi Gudia,
Mai to ye hi kahungi,ke keep smiling,khush rahiye...
Dunya ke sitam ka koi hisaab nahi, Lekin meri houslo ka bhi jawaab nahi...
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a broken shadow...
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17th September 2007, 03:39 AM
namaskar gudia ji
janab bahut khub, aap to bahut acha likto hain. bahut dard bara likha hai aapne, humare dil ko chu yeh dard.
humesha khush rahein aur haste rahein
aapka dost
manish
Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...
Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....
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Love To Walk In The Rain
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18th September 2007, 08:57 AM
Bahut hee Bakwaas hai kuchh achha saa likho naa
Stone Heart
I Love To Walk IN The Rain, Because Nobody Can See Me Crying !!!
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Zakhm-e-Rooh
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hi -
18th September 2007, 09:30 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by loveforgudia
Mai to mar hi chuki hoon,
Mujhe aur kitana maarega?
Meri duniya bhi to mitt hi chuki hai,
Ab kya dil se mere pyaar ko bhi mitaayega?
Har sapanaa toot chuka hai mera,
Ab aur kitana tu mujhe todna chaahega?
Sab kuchh mera loot gaya pyaar mai tere,
Kitana aur gairon se mujhe lutwaayega?
Barbaad to mai ho hi chuki hoon tere pinchhe,
Gairon se milake aur kitana mujhe barbaad kar jaayega?
Teri har khushi pe humane to lootadi apani har saans thi,
Tu kab tak dhadkan banke dil ko mere tod-ta jaayega?
Teri har taqleef har gum ko hum mar marke khushiyon mai badalte aaye hai,
Kya pata tha ki tu hi humase humaari har khushi ko chhin-le jaayega?
Pyaar mai aaj tere "Gudia" rahe gai banke khilona hai,
Kal shaayad galati pe tu bhi to apani pachhtaayega?
Tujhe banaake Bhagwaan apanaa basaaya tha dil ke mandir mai,
Mai deewaani na jaan paai ke tu banake Shaitaan mere hi dil ka mandir tod jaayega?
Love: Gudia
Jay Ambe
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love4gudia ji aap ke ye kalaam padh kar aisa laga jaise dard se bahri hai aap ki zindagi,aap ne jis tareeke se apne gham ko is labzo ki maala men piroyaa hai vo to sach men kaabil-e-taarif hai, itnee khoobsurati se to koi koi insaan hee likh saktaa hai jis kepaas hunar ho,aaj aap ka hunar bhi dekh liya maine. khudaa kare aap ka yeh hunar din daugunii-raat chaugunii badhaa kare, aap yunhee achhe kalaam likhate rahe hamaap ko padhate rahenge.
is dilkash kalam par philhaal meri aur se dilli daad kabool kare.aur yunhee aate rahiyega aise khoobsurat kalaam ke saath.sach me mazaa aa gaya yeh kalaam padh kar.phir se mubarakbad kabol kare is kalam par.
regards
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shayri is my life
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nice -
18th September 2007, 09:54 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by loveforgudia
Mai to mar hi chuki hoon,
Mujhe aur kitana maarega?
Meri duniya bhi to mitt hi chuki hai,
Ab kya dil se mere pyaar ko bhi mitaayega?
Har sapanaa toot chuka hai mera,
Ab aur kitana tu mujhe todna chaahega?
Sab kuchh mera loot gaya pyaar mai tere,
Kitana aur gairon se mujhe lutwaayega?
Barbaad to mai ho hi chuki hoon tere pinchhe,
Gairon se milake aur kitana mujhe barbaad kar jaayega?
Teri har khushi pe humane to lootadi apani har saans thi,
Tu kab tak dhadkan banke dil ko mere tod-ta jaayega?
Teri har taqleef har gum ko hum mar marke khushiyon mai badalte aaye hai,
Kya pata tha ki tu hi humase humaari har khushi ko chhin-le jaayega?
Pyaar mai aaj tere "Gudia" rahe gai banke khilona hai,
Kal shaayad galati pe tu bhi to apani pachhtaayega?
Tujhe banaake Bhagwaan apanaa basaaya tha dil ke mandir mai,
Mai deewaani na jaan paai ke tu banake Shaitaan mere hi dil ka mandir tod jaayega?
Love: Gudia
Jay Ambe
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gudia meri behna ko raj ka namaskaar.......gudia bhut dino baad dekh raha hoon tumhe....ab tumhaari tabiyat kaisee hai?ab tumhaari kavita ki baat karte hain.....gudia tumhaare ehsaas bhut gehre hain.....magar ye kavita ka style nahi hai.....jaise tumne likha hai ye koii short story maloom hoti hai.....tum acha likhne ke liye ache ache shayron ko khub dil laga ke parho....kavita nazam or gazal ke baare mein parho....mujhe umeed hai tab tum bhut acha likh paaogi......meri baaton ka bura na maan na......tareef to sabhi kar sakte hain magar sachaai koii koii hii likh sakta hai......khush raho.......raj.....
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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18th September 2007, 11:38 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by loveforgudia
Mai to mar hi chuki hoon,
Mujhe aur kitana maarega?
Meri duniya bhi to mitt hi chuki hai,
Ab kya dil se mere pyaar ko bhi mitaayega?
Har sapanaa toot chuka hai mera,
Ab aur kitana tu mujhe todna chaahega?
Sab kuchh mera loot gaya pyaar mai tere,
Kitana aur gairon se mujhe lutwaayega?
Barbaad to mai ho hi chuki hoon tere pinchhe,
Gairon se milake aur kitana mujhe barbaad kar jaayega?
Teri har khushi pe humane to lootadi apani har saans thi,
Tu kab tak dhadkan banke dil ko mere tod-ta jaayega?
Teri har taqleef har gum ko hum mar marke khushiyon mai badalte aaye hai,
Kya pata tha ki tu hi humase humaari har khushi ko chhin-le jaayega?
Pyaar mai aaj tere "Gudia" rahe gai banke khilona hai,
Kal shaayad galati pe tu bhi to apani pachhtaayega?
Tujhe banaake Bhagwaan apanaa basaaya tha dil ke mandir mai,
Mai deewaani na jaan paai ke tu banake Shaitaan mere hi dil ka mandir tod jaayega?
Love: Gudia
Jay Ambe
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dear gudia.............kaisi ho ab?
ahsaas acchey haiN.........!
maiN bhi rajveer ji se itefaak rakhti hoon....jo unhone kaha hai us baat par aap gaur kijiyega.
kush rahiye
god bless u
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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frnd 4 ever -
18th September 2007, 09:26 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by loveforgudia
Mai to mar hi chuki hoon,
Mujhe aur kitana maarega?
Meri duniya bhi to mitt hi chuki hai,
Ab kya dil se mere pyaar ko bhi mitaayega?
Har sapanaa toot chuka hai mera,
Ab aur kitana tu mujhe todna chaahega?
Sab kuchh mera loot gaya pyaar mai tere,
Kitana aur gairon se mujhe lutwaayega?
Barbaad to mai ho hi chuki hoon tere pinchhe,
Gairon se milake aur kitana mujhe barbaad kar jaayega?
Teri har khushi pe humane to lootadi apani har saans thi,
Tu kab tak dhadkan banke dil ko mere tod-ta jaayega?
Teri har taqleef har gum ko hum mar marke khushiyon mai badalte aaye hai,
Kya pata tha ki tu hi humase humaari har khushi ko chhin-le jaayega?
Pyaar mai aaj tere "Gudia" rahe gai banke khilona hai,
Kal shaayad galati pe tu bhi to apani pachhtaayega?
Tujhe banaake Bhagwaan apanaa basaaya tha dil ke mandir mai,
Mai deewaani na jaan paai ke tu banake Shaitaan mere hi dil ka mandir tod jaayega?
Love: Gudia
Jay Ambe
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Aadab gudiya ji,
kaise hai aap?
WAH gudiya ji,
aapne dard bhare in pyar ke ehsaason ko bhi kitni khubsurti se bayan kiya hain,
hamesha se hi aapko padhna bohot achha raha haiN,
kyunki aap kafi mukhtalif andaz me likhte hain,
ALLAH aapko bohot tarakki de,AAMIN,
aur umeed karte hain,aapki taraf se hame bohot kuch achha padhne ko milega,
hai na?
khush rahiye,
apna khayal rakkhiye,
ALLAH HAFIZ
Apki dost
Sweet HASSONI,
( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi )
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SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!
**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
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