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Ranjhan bin Adhuri
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saaha wich saah banke -
18th August 2007, 09:19 PM
Kuch milde ne loki nit sanu,
kuch milde vaang hawa banke,
kuch yaad rehnde, kuch bhul jaande,
kuch vas jaande saaha wich saah banke!!
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Jagpal (yaaden_kamal)
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2nd July 2008, 06:10 PM
Bilkul theek keha heeri ji
jagpal
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Ranjhan bin Adhuri
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3rd July 2008, 08:44 AM
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Originally Posted by yaaden_kamal
Bilkul theek keha heeri ji
jagpal
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Sukariya Jagpal ji
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3rd July 2008, 10:51 AM
vadia hai..bt ehnu hor vdda likh sakde c...............
kuj umar sari da rona bande,
kuj lag jande zindgi nu dua banke.
kyi kma jande dagge husna de groor ch,
kyi reh jande kitaba vich waffa banke.
kyi na vehnde aala duala,gall sidhi muh te kar dinde,
kyi jazbaat reh jande hya banke.
kyi beejde ne kande raaha vich hathi,
kyi aaunde sajan zindgi di dwa banke.
main hora de buhe kio khadkaava jdo nal tere hai laayi.
tu hi aaja "deep" kito,ve aaja mera khuda banke...........
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Ranjhan bin Adhuri
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4th July 2008, 01:55 AM
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Originally Posted by D33P
vadia hai..bt ehnu hor vdda likh sakde c...............
kuj umar sari da rona bande,
kuj lag jande zindgi nu dua banke.
kyi kma jande dagge husna de groor ch,
kyi reh jande kitaba vich waffa banke.
kyi na vehnde aala duala,gall sidhi muh te kar dinde,
kyi jazbaat reh jande hya banke.
kyi beejde ne kande raaha vich hathi,
kyi aaunde sajan zindgi di dwa banke.
main hora de buhe kio khadkaava jdo nal tere hai laayi.
tu hi aaja "deep" kito,ve aaja mera khuda banke...........
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Thank u Deep ji, tuhadi iss reply layi, tuhadi reply bahut hi sohni hai
bahut hi kamaal di poem hai deep
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4th July 2008, 10:40 AM
Well done heer ji and deep ji.
Merey Kissey wich aundaa ein tu .... Merey hissey wich kyuN nahi aundaa
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Ranjhan bin Adhuri
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5th July 2008, 12:47 AM
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Well done heer ji and deep ji.
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Thank u Tilak ji
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8th August 2008, 10:10 AM
[quote=ADHURI HEER;245141]Kuch milde ne loki nit sanu,
kuch milde vaang hawa banke,
kuch yaad rehnde, kuch bhul jaande,
kuch vas jaande saaha wich saah banke!!
very nice HEER JI
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Ranjhan bin Adhuri
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10th August 2008, 09:30 PM
[quote=A-BABBU;299955]
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Originally Posted by ADHURI HEER
Kuch milde ne loki nit sanu,
kuch milde vaang hawa banke,
kuch yaad rehnde, kuch bhul jaande,
kuch vas jaande saaha wich saah banke!!
very nice HEER JI
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Thanks Babbu ji
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