Me and The Rain part - 4

[Rohin]

Drop by Drop it starts to gush out
Traveling through the peaks and troughs
Giving a wet feeling in my heart
tricking down to the rim of my lips
Salty as the water of the sea
I sit and look as it clings to me
Finally plunging into the grains of sand
Only to be taken away by the waves at sea
dissolving my pain, like many they keep
Others follow the same path,
Only quicker, like the rain in amazon
-- Rohin Bhargava

For all those who know the series and all those who wanna read the series

Me and The Rain Part 1

Me and The Rain Part 2

Me and The Rain Part 3

[acharya_mj]

Originally Posted by Rohin

Drop by Drop it starts to gush out
Traveling through the peaks and troughs
Giving a wet feeling in my heart
tricking down to the rim of my lips
Salty as the water of the sea
I sit and look as it clings to me
Finally plunging into the grains of sand
Only to be taken away by the waves at sea
dissolving my pain, like many they keep
Others follow the same path,
Only quicker, like the rain in amazon
-- Rohin Bhargava

For all those who know the series and all those who wanna read the series

Me and The Rain Part 1

Me and The Rain Part 2

Me and The Rain Part 3

Hello Rohin How r u......??
we have meeted here after such a long passage of time
Your all the 3 poetries are really wonderful and hearttouching brother.........
And yaa this 4th one is another classic 1 as u write poetries for the class and not the mass. when i read these poetries i absorbed myself in to those golden days of shayri.com which are now just woven in to unforgettable memories.

Really nice and beautiful creation brother
keep coming and sharing ur precious thoughts this site still miss and need jewel like u and ur creation.

nice to see u and read u here
regards
manu

[Rohin]

Originally Posted by acharya_mj

Hello Rohin How r u......??
we have meeted here after such a long passage of time
Your all the 3 poetries are really wonderful and hearttouching brother.........
And yaa this 4th one is another classic 1 as u write poetries for the class and not the mass. when i read these poetries i absorbed myself in to those golden days of shayri.com which are now just woven in to unforgettable memories.

Really nice and beautiful creation brother
keep coming and sharing ur precious thoughts this site still miss and need jewel like u and ur creation.

nice to see u and read u here
regards
manu

Hi Manu,

Thanks for the appreciation... but shayri.com par pehle jaisa raha nahi dost...
But I am glad you liked the poetry...

Regards
Rohin

[mann_chand]

Hi Rohin...
Kiase ho tum?I loved it ... ehsaas beyaan karna tumse sikhe ....
Sabhi parts r good
Yeh sab zindagi ke rang hai .... aur har mausaam dekhne hi chaye ... aur sab se zada khushi ki baat hoti hai ...
Best writers r Back ...
Iam happy to see posts jenho ne mujhe hamesha support kiya kuch likhne ke liye
Aur always keep posting ....aapna aacha khayal rakhna
Tc
Ur sis
mandeep

[musafir ek pal]

hello rohin ji,
how are you?

Read ur creation, must say i was blown away by the sheer simplicity. the scenario you created and the way it was described is simpy beautilful. love the contrasts and also the sudden change in writing. very well expressed and beautilfully written. i have nothing but praise for you. do keep on writing like this....

God Bless U

Manish

[Rohin]

Originally Posted by mann_chand

Hi Rohin...
Kiase ho tum?I loved it ... ehsaas beyaan karna tumse sikhe ....
Sabhi parts r good
Yeh sab zindagi ke rang hai .... aur har mausaam dekhne hi chaye ... aur sab se zada khushi ki baat hoti hai ...
Best writers r Back ...
Iam happy to see posts jenho ne mujhe hamesha support kiya kuch likhne ke liye
Aur always keep posting ....aapna aacha khayal rakhna
Tc
Ur sis
mandeep

Mandeep sis,

thanks for reading... I always try to write from my heart... hoping to strike a chord with the readers... I am glad I struck your chord... jaise ki kaha hai likhte rehne ki koshish karunga...

Take Care
Rohin

[Rohin]

Originally Posted by musafir ek pal

hello rohin ji,
how are you?

Read ur creation, must say i was blown away by the sheer simplicity. the scenario you created and the way it was described is simpy beautilful. love the contrasts and also the sudden change in writing. very well expressed and beautilfully written. i have nothing but praise for you. do keep on writing like this....

God Bless U

Manish

Manish bhai,

thanks for the appreciation....I do not know or understand difficult things.. so I keep it simple.. I am glad you liked it....

Take Care
Rohin

[nisha.r.jhala]

Originally Posted by Rohin

Drop by Drop it starts to gush out
Traveling through the peaks and troughs
Giving a wet feeling in my heart
tricking down to the rim of my lips
Salty as the water of the sea
I sit and look as it clings to me
Finally plunging into the grains of sand
Only to be taken away by the waves at sea
dissolving my pain, like many they keep
Others follow the same path,
Only quicker, like the rain in amazon
-- Rohin Bhargava

For all those who know the series and all those who wanna read the series

Me and The Rain Part 1

Me and The Rain Part 2

Me and The Rain Part 3

hi... rohinji ....

I m nisha new to shayri and have seen ur post it is really kool ..... but there is something that i can add to it ... is

Rain Rain Rain,
Up above from the skies
Youu come,
As drops of joy
As drops of sorrow
As a shower of blessing from the heaven

i have also read ur other post ... u r just so good rohinji i think u just put your pen down and go on writing ova and ova.....

[Rohin]

Originally Posted by nisha.r.jhala

hi... rohinji ....

I m nisha new to shayri and have seen ur post it is really kool ..... but there is something that i can add to it ... is

Rain Rain Rain,
Up above from the skies
Youu come,
As drops of joy
As drops of sorrow
As a shower of blessing from the heaven

i have also read ur other post ... u r just so good rohinji i think u just put your pen down and go on writing ova and ova.....

thanks nisha.... For digging out the post , taking d time out t read it and my other posts. I hope they were worth your time

regards,
Rohin