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27th July 2011, 10:42 PM
ek mukhtlif mood ke sheroN se bani ghazal pesh hai ... bhala buraa chahe jaisa salook karen
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bahayee thi jo bachpan meiN woH saari kashtiyaaN dhoondo
har ik barish ko dohrao puraani mastiyaaN dhoondo
lage dil thaamne, meri ghazal ka dard samjhe kyuN
are ! nakkad ho tum beh'r ki bas galtiyaaN dhoondo
meri bibi mere bachy mujhe kahne lage hai ye
chalo ye shayri chhodo, hamari rotiyaan dhoondo
mujhe kaboo karega kaun, kisme itni himmat hai
are jao zara majboot isse bediyaaN dhoondo
muaafi aur talafi ke marasim dil se hote haiN
jo aaNkhoN se chalak jayeN na aisi badliyaaN dhoondo
patayee thi jo collage maiN badi mehnat se humne yaar
kaha gum wo gayee saari bhalaa wo ladkiyaaN dhoondo
nikal jao tum is nafart ki bandish se abhi bahar
na ye diwaar gar toote to isme khidkiyaan dhoondo
agar mai mayke apne chalee jauN to mumkin hai
kahaN cham'ach pade haiN aur kahaN haiN karhchhiyaaN dhoondo
mujhe kya lena majhab se, mere dil hi maiN moula hai
tumhari raah hai kuch aur apni seediyaan dhoondo
laga kar itr kagaz pe humeN pagal samjhte ho
jo kagaz ko samjh le phool aisi titliyaaN dhoondo
na maro kokh maiN " beti, bahan, bibi, bahu aur Maa"
kahi dunia na ruk jaye kahiN fir betiyaan dhoondo
zubaan se bol kar kya fayda dil maiN nahi jab rab
bhala kyun 'fiKr sookhe mai sunhari machliyaan dhoondo
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28th July 2011, 12:15 AM
nikal jao tum is nafart ki bandish se abhi bahar
na ye diwaar gar toote to isme khidkiyaan dhoondo
laga kar itr kagaz pe humeN pagal samjhte ho
jo kagaz ko samjh le phool aisi titliyaaN dhoondo
Bahut BaDhiyaaaaaaaaaa .... Vikas Bhai !
Tamaam Ghazal MeN ... JahaaN Apni VyaktiGhaT VyaThaa Ko Jis Khoobi Se Ehsaasaat Ke Zariye ChiTriT Kiyaa ... WahiN Samajik KrutiyoN Ko Asardaar Dhangh Se RekhaaKankit Karne MeN Puri Tarha Safal Dikhai Diye ... !
Qafiya Aur Radeef Ka Istemaal ... Ghazal Ko Aur Bhi Purkashish Banaa Gayaa !
Behad Umdaa Peshkash Rahi ... Janaab Aapki !!!
Tahe Dil Se DheroN Daad Aur Mubaaraqbaad Qubuul KareN ... !!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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28th July 2011, 12:31 PM
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Originally Posted by janumanu
ek mukhtlif mood ke sheroN se bani ghazal pesh hai ... bhala buraa chahe jaisa salook karen
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bahayee thi jo bachpan meiN woH saari kashtiyaaN dhoondo
har ik barish ko dohrao puraani mastiyaaN dhoondo
lage dil thaamne, meri ghazal ka dard samjhe kyuN
are ! nakkad ho tum beh'r ki bas galtiyaaN dhoondo
meri bibi mere bachy mujhe kahne lage hai ye
chalo ye shayri chhodo, hamari rotiyaan dhoondo
mujhe kaboo karega kaun, kisme itni himmat hai
are jao zara majboot isse bediyaaN dhoondo
muaafi aur talafi ke marasim dil se hote haiN
jo aaNkhoN se chalak jayeN na aisi badliyaaN dhoondo
patayee thi jo collage maiN badi mehnat se humne yaar
kaha gum wo gayee saari bhalaa wo ladkiyaaN dhoondo
nikal jao tum is nafart ki bandish se abhi bahar
na ye diwaar gar toote to isme khidkiyaan dhoondo
agar mai mayke apne chalee jauN to mumkin hai
kahaN cham'ach pade haiN aur kahaN haiN karhchhiyaaN dhoondo
mujhe kya lena majhab se, mere dil hi maiN moula hai
tumhari raah hai kuch aur apni seediyaan dhoondo
laga kar itr kagaz pe humeN pagal samjhte ho
jo kagaz ko samjh le phool aisi titliyaaN dhoondo
na maro kokh maiN " beti, bahan, bibi, bahu aur Maa"
kahi dunia na ruk jaye kahiN fir betiyaan dhoondo
zubaan se bol kar kya fayda dil maiN nahi jab rab
bhala kyun 'fiKr sookhe mai sunhari machliyaan dhoondo
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muaafi aur talafi ke marasim dil se hote haiN
jo aaNkhoN se chalak jayeN na aisi badliyaaN dhoondo
nikal jao tum is nafart ki bandish se abhi bahar
na ye diwaar gar toote to isme khidkiyaan dhoondo
mujhe kya lena majhab se, mere dil hi maiN moula hai
tumhari raah hai kuch aur apni seediyaan dhoondo
laga kar itr kagaz pe humeN pagal samjhte ho
jo kagaz ko samjh le phool aisi titliyaaN dhoondo
zubaan se bol kar kya fayda dil maiN nahi jab rab
bhala kyun 'fiKr sookhe mai sunhari machliyaan dhoondo
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
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29th July 2011, 09:36 AM
Nice collection of shers..... keep writing...
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30th July 2011, 12:08 AM
Janumanu ji,
kya likhte haiN aap...mashaallah..daad hi daad..
yeh sher kamaal ke rahe..matla to laajawaab hai
bahayee thi jo bachpan meiN woH saari kashtiyaaN dhoondo
har ik barish ko dohrao puraani mastiyaaN dhoondo
lage dil thaamne, meri ghazal ka dard samjhe kyuN
are ! nakkad ho tum beh'r ki bas galtiyaaN dhoondo
meri bibi mere bachy mujhe kahne lage hai ye
chalo ye shayri chhodo, hamari rotiyaan dhoondo
nikal jao tum is nafart ki bandish se abhi bahar
na ye diwaar gar toote to isme khidkiyaan dhoondo
aap jo jeevan ke anubhav ko..rozindagi ko..shayri mein piroote ho woh bahot maasum sa lagta hai..aise hi likhte rahiye...hume bhi kuch seekhne mil jaata hai..god bless u
aapka dost,
Pradhyuman
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gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai?
musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai?
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30th July 2011, 09:22 AM
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ek mukhtlif mood ke sheroN se bani ghazal pesh hai ... bhala buraa chahe jaisa salook karen
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bahayee thi jo bachpan meiN woH saari kashtiyaaN dhoondo
har ik barish ko dohrao puraani mastiyaaN dhoondo
lage dil thaamne, meri ghazal ka dard samjhe kyuN
are ! nakkad ho tum beh'r ki bas galtiyaaN dhoondo
meri bibi mere bachy mujhe kahne lage hai ye
chalo ye shayri chhodo, hamari rotiyaan dhoondo
mujhe kaboo karega kaun, kisme itni himmat hai
are jao zara majboot isse bediyaaN dhoondo
muaafi aur talafi ke marasim dil se hote haiN
jo aaNkhoN se chalak jayeN na aisi badliyaaN dhoondo
patayee thi jo collage maiN badi mehnat se humne yaar
kaha gum wo gayee saari bhalaa wo ladkiyaaN dhoondo
nikal jao tum is nafart ki bandish se abhi bahar
na ye diwaar gar toote to isme khidkiyaan dhoondo
agar mai mayke apne chalee jauN to mumkin hai
kahaN cham'ach pade haiN aur kahaN haiN karhchhiyaaN dhoondo
mujhe kya lena majhab se, mere dil hi maiN moula hai
tumhari raah hai kuch aur apni seediyaan dhoondo
laga kar itr kagaz pe humeN pagal samjhte ho
jo kagaz ko samjh le phool aisi titliyaaN dhoondo
na maro kokh maiN " beti, bahan, bibi, bahu aur Maa"
kahi dunia na ruk jaye kahiN fir betiyaan dhoondo
zubaan se bol kar kya fayda dil maiN nahi jab rab
bhala kyun 'fiKr sookhe mai sunhari machliyaan dhoondo
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Yeh ek misaal hai ki likhne waale kis gehraYi ko muqaam de sakta hai
Aapki is creativity ke aage mast ka sar jhuka kar salaaam
aage bhi yunhi mehfil mein rangat badhaate rahiYeGaa
-aapka apnaa
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नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं
क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें
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7th September 2011, 02:56 PM
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nikal jao tum is nafart ki bandish se abhi bahar
na ye diwaar gar toote to isme khidkiyaan dhoondo
laga kar itr kagaz pe humeN pagal samjhte ho
jo kagaz ko samjh le phool aisi titliyaaN dhoondo
Bahut BaDhiyaaaaaaaaaa .... Vikas Bhai !
Tamaam Ghazal MeN ... JahaaN Apni VyaktiGhaT VyaThaa Ko Jis Khoobi Se Ehsaasaat Ke Zariye ChiTriT Kiyaa ... WahiN Samajik KrutiyoN Ko Asardaar Dhangh Se RekhaaKankit Karne MeN Puri Tarha Safal Dikhai Diye ... !
Qafiya Aur Radeef Ka Istemaal ... Ghazal Ko Aur Bhi Purkashish Banaa Gayaa !
Behad Umdaa Peshkash Rahi ... Janaab Aapki !!!
Tahe Dil Se DheroN Daad Aur Mubaaraqbaad Qubuul KareN ... !!
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7th September 2011, 08:48 PM
Vikas Baii,
Ik honda ha apni dil di gal shairy ch dusna hor duja honda ha khoobsoorti ch ik gazzal nu complete kerna.....a dono di ustaadi hasil kerne per main tohnu congrats kaenda han!
Keep sharing Sir G!
Honaa Hai Fenaah Yaad Rakh Aye Shams Tujhko Bhi,
Is Kehkashaan Mein Mai He Nahi Waahid Shaye Faanee!
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Vikas Baii,
Ik honda ha apni dil di gal shairy ch dusna hor duja honda ha khoobsoorti ch ik gazzal nu complete kerna.....a dono di ustaadi hasil kerne per main tohnu congrats kaenda han!
Keep sharing Sir G!
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O sajjnaa mere .......... gall inni hai ... dil di gall dill ne keeti si..... changi lag jaandi hai kade kade
baaqi............. tuhadiyaN muhabbat .......... Hor ki
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8th September 2011, 12:16 PM
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Originally Posted by janumanu
ek mukhtlif mood ke sheroN se bani ghazal pesh hai ... bhala buraa chahe jaisa salook karen
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bahayee thi jo bachpan meiN woH saari kashtiyaaN dhoondo
har ik barish ko dohrao puraani mastiyaaN dhoondo
lage dil thaamne, meri ghazal ka dard samjhe kyuN
are ! nakkad ho tum beh'r ki bas galtiyaaN dhoondo
meri bibi mere bachy mujhe kahne lage hai ye
chalo ye shayri chhodo, hamari rotiyaan dhoondo
mujhe kaboo karega kaun, kisme itni himmat hai
are jao zara majboot isse bediyaaN dhoondo
muaafi aur talafi ke marasim dil se hote haiN
jo aaNkhoN se chalak jayeN na aisi badliyaaN dhoondo
patayee thi jo collage maiN badi mehnat se humne yaar
kaha gum wo gayee saari bhalaa wo ladkiyaaN dhoondo
nikal jao tum is nafart ki bandish se abhi bahar
na ye diwaar gar toote to isme khidkiyaan dhoondo
agar mai mayke apne chalee jauN to mumkin hai
kahaN cham'ach pade haiN aur kahaN haiN karhchhiyaaN dhoondo
mujhe kya lena majhab se, mere dil hi maiN moula hai
tumhari raah hai kuch aur apni seediyaan dhoondo
laga kar itr kagaz pe humeN pagal samjhte ho
jo kagaz ko samjh le phool aisi titliyaaN dhoondo
na maro kokh maiN " beti, bahan, bibi, bahu aur Maa"
kahi dunia na ruk jaye kahiN fir betiyaan dhoondo
zubaan se bol kar kya fayda dil maiN nahi jab rab
bhala kyun 'fiKr sookhe mai sunhari machliyaan dhoondo
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mindblowing ji................................................ .
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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8th September 2011, 01:50 PM
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ek mukhtlif mood ke sheroN se bani ghazal pesh hai ... bhala buraa chahe jaisa salook karen
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bahayee thi jo bachpan meiN woH saari kashtiyaaN dhoondo
har ik barish ko dohrao puraani mastiyaaN dhoondo
lage dil thaamne, meri ghazal ka dard samjhe kyuN
are ! nakkad ho tum beh'r ki bas galtiyaaN dhoondo
meri bibi mere bachy mujhe kahne lage hai ye
chalo ye shayri chhodo, hamari rotiyaan dhoondo
mujhe kaboo karega kaun, kisme itni himmat hai
are jao zara majboot isse bediyaaN dhoondo
muaafi aur talafi ke marasim dil se hote haiN
jo aaNkhoN se chalak jayeN na aisi badliyaaN dhoondo
patayee thi jo collage maiN badi mehnat se humne yaar
kaha gum wo gayee saari bhalaa wo ladkiyaaN dhoondo
nikal jao tum is nafart ki bandish se abhi bahar
na ye diwaar gar toote to isme khidkiyaan dhoondo
agar mai mayke apne chalee jauN to mumkin hai
kahaN cham'ach pade haiN aur kahaN haiN karhchhiyaaN dhoondo
mujhe kya lena majhab se, mere dil hi maiN moula hai
tumhari raah hai kuch aur apni seediyaan dhoondo
laga kar itr kagaz pe humeN pagal samjhte ho
jo kagaz ko samjh le phool aisi titliyaaN dhoondo
na maro kokh maiN " beti, bahan, bibi, bahu aur Maa"
kahi dunia na ruk jaye kahiN fir betiyaan dhoondo
zubaan se bol kar kya fayda dil maiN nahi jab rab
bhala kyun 'fiKr sookhe mai sunhari machliyaan dhoondo
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bahut khoob Vikas bhai.......dili daad
radhe radhe
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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8th September 2011, 04:31 PM
Vikas....behaddddddddd khoobsurat ahsaas....padkar dil khush ho gya...bahut sacchi baate kahi hai aapne....god bless u
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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21st November 2011, 10:39 PM
One of ur best Work Vikas Saheb...........simply amazing.
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...
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21st November 2011, 11:22 PM
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ek mukhtlif mood ke sheroN se bani ghazal pesh hai ... bhala buraa chahe jaisa salook karen
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bahayee thi jo bachpan meiN woH saari kashtiyaaN dhoondo
har ik barish ko dohrao puraani mastiyaaN dhoondo
lage dil thaamne, meri ghazal ka dard samjhe kyuN
are ! nakkad ho tum beh'r ki bas galtiyaaN dhoondo
meri bibi mere bachy mujhe kahne lage hai ye
chalo ye shayri chhodo, hamari rotiyaan dhoondo
mujhe kaboo karega kaun, kisme itni himmat hai
are jao zara majboot isse bediyaaN dhoondo
muaafi aur talafi ke marasim dil se hote haiN
jo aaNkhoN se chalak jayeN na aisi badliyaaN dhoondo
patayee thi jo collage maiN badi mehnat se humne yaar
kaha gum wo gayee saari bhalaa wo ladkiyaaN dhoondo
nikal jao tum is nafart ki bandish se abhi bahar
na ye diwaar gar toote to isme khidkiyaan dhoondo
agar mai mayke apne chalee jauN to mumkin hai
kahaN cham'ach pade haiN aur kahaN haiN karhchhiyaaN dhoondo
mujhe kya lena majhab se, mere dil hi maiN moula hai
tumhari raah hai kuch aur apni seediyaan dhoondo
laga kar itr kagaz pe humeN pagal samjhte ho
jo kagaz ko samjh le phool aisi titliyaaN dhoondo
na maro kokh maiN " beti, bahan, bibi, bahu aur Maa"
kahi dunia na ruk jaye kahiN fir betiyaan dhoondo
zubaan se bol kar kya fayda dil maiN nahi jab rab
bhala kyun 'fiKr sookhe mai sunhari machliyaan dhoondo
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22nd November 2011, 07:39 PM
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ek mukhtlif mood ke sheroN se bani ghazal pesh hai ... bhala buraa chahe jaisa salook karen
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bahayee thi jo bachpan meiN woH saari kashtiyaaN dhoondo
har ik barish ko dohrao puraani mastiyaaN dhoondo
lage dil thaamne, meri ghazal ka dard samjhe kyuN
are ! nakkad ho tum beh'r ki bas galtiyaaN dhoondo
meri bibi mere bachy mujhe kahne lage hai ye
chalo ye shayri chhodo, hamari rotiyaan dhoondo
mujhe kaboo karega kaun, kisme itni himmat hai
are jao zara majboot isse bediyaaN dhoondo
muaafi aur talafi ke marasim dil se hote haiN
jo aaNkhoN se chalak jayeN na aisi badliyaaN dhoondo
patayee thi jo collage maiN badi mehnat se humne yaar
kaha gum wo gayee saari bhalaa wo ladkiyaaN dhoondo
nikal jao tum is nafart ki bandish se abhi bahar
na ye diwaar gar toote to isme khidkiyaan dhoondo
agar mai mayke apne chalee jauN to mumkin hai
kahaN cham'ach pade haiN aur kahaN haiN karhchhiyaaN dhoondo
mujhe kya lena majhab se, mere dil hi maiN moula hai
tumhari raah hai kuch aur apni seediyaan dhoondo
laga kar itr kagaz pe humeN pagal samjhte ho
jo kagaz ko samjh le phool aisi titliyaaN dhoondo
na maro kokh maiN " beti, bahan, bibi, bahu aur Maa"
kahi dunia na ruk jaye kahiN fir betiyaan dhoondo
zubaan se bol kar kya fayda dil maiN nahi jab rab
bhala kyun 'fiKr sookhe mai sunhari machliyaan dhoondo
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vikas bhai badhiya ghazal hui hai...to salook bhi badhiya hi hona chaahiye....
dheroN daad haazir haiN, qubuul karte jaaiye...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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