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Thumbs up "tarahi Ghazal- MARCH 2012" - 1st March 2012, 11:25 AM

Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab!!

aap sabhee ka tah-e-dil se ShuKriyaah adaa kartaa huuN ki aap sab kaa saath mil rahaa haii ... tarahi Ghazal ke silsile ko ab aur bhee aage baDhaate huye mujhe KhuShii ho rahii hay


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yeh rahaa tarahi Ghazal- MARCH 2012 ka miCra jo bashir badr saaHeb ki be-Had umdaah Ghazal se hai:

Khvaab is aaNkhon se ab koii churaa kar le jaaye


tarahi Ghazal mein diyaa gayaa huaa miCraa aap apni Ghazal meiN kahiin bhee raKh sakte haiN

dostoN aap sab se aik guzaariSh bhee hai... koShiSh keejiye ki aap jo bhee Ghazal liKheN wo Ghazal minimum 5 Sher aur maximum 7 aSh'aar ki submit kareN..taa.K Ghazal meiN hissa lene waale sabhee ki Ghazal ke aSh'aar 7 hoN ek se ..Shukriyaah


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Rules kuch is tarah se haiN:

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1) Ghazal should be of your own creation .

2) Ghazal submitted for the competition should be an unpublished one.

3) Only those members can participate who have more then fifty posts.

4) Aap ek baar ghazal submit karne ke baad us me phir koi radd-o-badal nahi kar sakte

5) Ghazalein "Ghazal section" forum me ek sticky thread bana kar post kii jaayegi

6) Shayar ka naam display nahi hoga, result tak shayer ka naam gupt rahega,sirf mods ko pata rahega

7> Moderators bhee tarahi Ghazal mein hissa le sakte haiN

8> Voting meiN Vote dene waale sadasya ki minimum post 50 honi chaahiye aur kis sadasya ne kis Ghazal ko apna Vote diya hai wo bhee show honga

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Instructions:

1> Ghazal submit karne ki aaKhiri date hai 30th April 2012

2> 1st APRIL 2012 ko submit kee gayii GhazaleN "Ghazal Section" meiN polling ke liye raKhi jaayengii

3> Polling ke liye aaKhiiri Date hai 1st MAY 2012

4> 1st JUNE 2012 meiN tarahi Ghazal ke winner ka naam declare kiyaa jaayengaa aur unki Ghazal ek mahine tak Ghazal section mein sticky rahengi

5> aap sabhee ko apni GhazaleN mujhe submit karni haii

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7 aashar ki hadh sahi nahi hai........ghazal me minimum 5 sher hone chahiye yeh dastoor hai isey kayem rehne diya jaaye to ghazal ki khoobsurti ke liye achcha hai........mushkil se kisi ghazal me koi ek ya do sher hi achcha ban pata hai.........5 achchey sher kehna hi bohat badi chunauti hai......aur aapne yaha 7 ki hadh tay kar di hai.........Quality pe dhiyaan diya jaaye Quantity pe nahi.

Yu karein Minimum 5 aur Maximum 7.

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25th March 2012, 05:31 PM

saajid bhaa'ii:

main aapka ShuKriyaah adaa kartaa huun aapne apni baat saamne rakKhi.. ees par zaruur sochaa jaayega

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7 aashar ki hadh sahi nahi hai........ghazal me minimum 5 sher hone chahiye yeh dastoor hai isey kayem rehne diya jaaye to ghazal ki khoobsurti ke liye achcha hai........mushkil se kisi ghazal me koi ek ya do sher hi achcha ban pata hai.........5 achchey sher kehna hi bohat badi chunauti hai......aur aapne yaha 7 ki hadh tay kar di hai.........Quality pe dhiyaan diya jaaye Quantity pe nahi.

Yu karein Minimum 5 aur Maximum 7.

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1st April 2012, 11:11 AM

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tarahi Ghazal March 2012 mein abhee tak ek member ki hi Ghazal submit huii haii mujhe lagtaa hai ki 7 Sher ki paabandi ki wajh se baaqee members Ghazal ko ta'ey kiye huye waQt mein submit nahiiN karwaa paayeN.. ees liye kuChh mudde change kiye jaa rahe haiN

>> Ghazal aapki 5 Sher se lekar 7 Sher ki honi chaahiye

>> Ghazal submit karne ki aaKhiri date ko bhee baDhaayaa jaa rahaa hai 30 th April

ummid kartaa huuN zyaadaah se zyaadaah members hissa lenge

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sabhi participate karne walon ko shub-kaamnaye.........


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