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Mandir ki masjidoN ki khabar le ke aa gaya....( Ghayel ) - 21st April 2013, 05:25 PM

Aap sabke hawale meri ek koshish.
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Mandir ki masjidoN ki khabar le ke aa gaya
Yaaro chunaav phir se ghadar le ke aa gaya

Qaasid ko hansta dekh ke maine samajh liya
Koi buri zaroor khabar le ke aa gaya

They saamne hazaar idhar chend logh they
Mera Husain phir bhi jigar le ke aa gaya

Beghar tamam jitne mile mujhko raah mein
Main saare dard apne hi ghar le ke aa gaya

Shikwe shikaytein jo kabhi sunne woh chala
Auro ke apni aankh me dar le ke aa gaya

Ghayel ko aaj dekhiye Maula se kya mile
Tauheed dil me aur yeh sar le ke aa gaya

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Waah - 21st April 2013, 06:31 PM

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Aap sabke hawale meri ek koshish.
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Mandir ki masjidoN ki khabar le ke aa gaya
Yaaro chunaav phir se ghadar le ke aa gaya

Qaasid ko hansta dekh ke maine samajh liya
Koi buri zaroor khabar le ke aa gaya

They saamne hazaar idhar chend logh they
Mera Husain phir bhi jigar le ke aa gaya

Beghar tamam jitne mile mujhko raah mein
Main saare dard apne hi ghar le ke aa gaya

Shikwe shikaytein jo kabhi sunne woh chala
Auro ke apni aankh me dar le ke aa gaya

Ghayel ko aaj dekhiye Maula se kya mile
Tauheed dil me aur yeh sar le ke aa gaya

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originally posted by sajid ghayal

Mandir ki masjidoN ki khabar le ke aa gaya....( Ghayel ) - Yesterday, 05:25 PM
Aap sabke hawale meri ek koshish.
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Mandir ki masjidoN ki khabar le ke aa gaya
Yaaro chunaav phir se ghadar le ke aa gaya

Qaasid ko hansta dekh ke maine samajh liya
Koi buri zaroor khabar le ke aa gaya

They saamne hazaar idhar chend logh they
Mera Husain phir bhi jigar le ke aa gaya

Beghar tamam jitne mile mujhko raah mein
Main saare dard apne hi ghar le ke aa gaya

Shikwe shikaytein jo kabhi sunne woh chala
Auro ke apni aankh me dar le ke aa gaya

Ghayel ko aaj dekhiye Maula se kya mile
Tauheed dil me aur yeh sar le ke aa gaya

Sajid Ghayel


hamesha ki tarah ek bahut khoobsurat gazal kahi hai sajid bhai.....


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22nd April 2013, 03:21 PM

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sazid bhai...bahut khoobsurat ghazal ,waah kya kehne....dil ko chu gaye ehsaas.



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22nd April 2013, 05:25 PM

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Mandir ki masjidoN ki khabar le ke aa gaya
Yaaro chunaav phir se ghadar le ke aa gaya

Qaasid ko hansta dekh ke maine samajh liya
Koi buri zaroor khabar le ke aa gaya

They saamne hazaar idhar chend logh they
Mera Husain phir bhi jigar le ke aa gaya

Beghar tamam jitne mile mujhko raah mein
Main saare dard apne hi ghar le ke aa gaya

Shikwe shikaytein jo kabhi sunne woh chala
Auro ke apni aankh me dar le ke aa gaya

Ghayel ko aaj dekhiye Maula se kya mile
Tauheed dil me aur yeh sar le ke aa gaya

Sajid Ghayel
Kyaa Kahne ... Sajid Bhai !

Nihaayat Khoob Sher Kahe HaiN

Bakamaal Asar Angez Ghazal ...

Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
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Wah Subhan Allah!

Bahot hi khoobsurat qayaal aur usi khoobsurati se nazm bhi kiya hai.

'They saamne hazaar idhar chend logh they
Mera Husain phir bhi jigar le ke aa gaya'

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saajid bhaii:

namaste!


bahot hi umdaah Ghazal ! dil se daad hi daad... yuuNhi bazm ki Shaan ko baDhaate rahiye aage bhee

KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

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Aap sabke hawale meri ek koshish.
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Mandir ki masjidoN ki khabar le ke aa gaya
Yaaro chunaav phir se ghadar le ke aa gaya

Qaasid ko hansta dekh ke maine samajh liya
Koi buri zaroor khabar le ke aa gaya

They saamne hazaar idhar chend logh they
Mera Husain phir bhi jigar le ke aa gaya

Beghar tamam jitne mile mujhko raah mein
Main saare dard apne hi ghar le ke aa gaya

Shikwe shikaytein jo kabhi sunne woh chala
Auro ke apni aankh me dar le ke aa gaya

Ghayel ko aaj dekhiye Maula se kya mile
Tauheed dil me aur yeh sar le ke aa gaya

Sajid Ghayel

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