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Tun jo turiyaa naal ve_ valentine day 2012 ghazal |
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Tun jo turiyaa naal ve_ valentine day 2012 ghazal -
14th February 2012, 09:19 AM
Dosto aap sabh nu Valentine Day 2012 bahut mubaarak. May you and your partner have a very very happy long life together.
Ashk Valentine Day 2012 Ghazal TUN JO TURIYA NAAL VE tuN jo Turiya naal ve, Tor meri badal gayee madhosh hoiyaaN hasrataaN, khushbu teri jad ral gayee tuN mileiN taaN mile khuda, bin tere rahaaN gamzadaa ziNdgi kujh istrhaaN , hai meri badal gayee vekhyaa dharti daa chan, chan arshaaN da sharmaa gayaa poh di pehli kiran, tanuu vekhke machal gayee Heer Ranjhaa taaN nahiN, par jadoN ik raah Ture Dor dil di meri, hathoN rabba fisal gayee Keete hone ‘Ashk’ ne, pichle janam chaNge karam shabdaaN vich rooposh ho, tu ban meri ghazal gayee Tor-walk, poh-dawn, rooposh-disappear Copyright. Hardev Sodhi ‘Ashk’ "takaaza umar da nahiN jardaa e jee dil taaN bachha hai jee" |
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15th February 2012, 12:12 PM
tuN mileiN taaN mile khuda, bin tere rahaaN gamzadaa
ziNdgi kujh istrhaaN , hai meri badal gayee.. bahut bahut hi khoobsurat likhea hai tusi janab.. |
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15th February 2012, 03:00 PM
bahut khoobsurat ahsaas pesh kitey hai tusi....changa lagiya pad ke
 rabb raakha jii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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Tun jo turiya naal ve valentin day 2012ghazal (revised) |
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Tun jo turiya naal ve valentin day 2012ghazal (revised) -
21st February 2012, 10:27 AM
Dosto revised ghazal ik navein shayer naal peshkar reha hhaN. I hope you like it. Dosto aap sabh nu Valentine Day 2012 bahut mubaarak. May you and your partner have a very very happy long life together. Ashk Valentine Day 2012 Ghazal (REVISED) TUN JO TU RIYA NAAL VE tuN jo Turiya naal ve, Tor meri badal gayee madhosh hoiyaaN hasrataaN, khushbu teri jad ral gayee tuN mileiN taaN mile khuda, bin tere rahaaN gamzadaa ziNdgi kujh istrhaaN , hai meri badal gayee DharknaN vich wasdaa eiN, tuN taaN saahaN di tarhaa door hoveiN lagdaa iveiN, jaan meri nikal gayee (new shayer) vekhyaa dharti daa chan, chan arshaaN da sharmaa gayaa poh di pehli kiran, tanuu vekhke machal gayee Heer Ranjhaa taaN nahiN, par jadoN ik raah Ture Dor dil di meri, hathoN rabba fisal gayee Keete hone ‘Ashk’ ne, pichle janam chaNge karam shabdaaN vich rooposh ho, tu ban meri ghazal gayee Tor-walk, poh-dawn, rooposh-disappear Copyright. Hardev Sodhi ‘Ashk’ "takaaza umar da nahiN jardaa e jee dil taaN bachha e jee" |
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Tun jo turiya naal ve valentin day 2012ghazal (revised) |
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Tun jo turiya naal ve valentin day 2012ghazal (revised) -
21st February 2012, 10:31 AM
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Dhanvaad aapnu rachna pasaNd aayi. naveiN shayer te vi gaur farmaana khush raho Hardev Ashk RAATI KHUSHIYAAN DARD SAVERE AINI NAA PEE MITRAA MERE |
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15th April 2012, 07:18 PM
Awe some ashk ji.... SDC te es tarah hi chann ban ke chamakdey raho... Shaandaar gazal... bahut ghat shayar reh gaye ne punjabi gazal de... Tusi es raah da deewa ban ke jagmagaundey raho
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Tun jo tu riya naal ve -
27th April 2012, 08:55 AM
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Hello Tilak Ji: bahut bahut dhanvaad, aapnu ghazal pasand aayi. Haale bahut kujh sikhnaa hai. main taan haale kalam hi pakRi hai. Rab Raakha Hardev Ashk |
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