Kab duaa me'n hamne maa'ngii thii bhalaa aisii sahar. -
12th November 2011, 11:02 AM
shayri pariwaar ke sabhi sadsyo ko is nacheej ka dili istaqbaal.aap haajreen ke liye mera naam jitana nayaa hai,utanaa hi nayaa-2 main aadab ki duniya mein hoon. bahut himmat karke ek gair muraddaf gajal likhne ki koshish kee hai aur usse bhi jiyada himmat karke aapke samane rakhne kee himaakat ki hai. meri yeh koshish o himaakat kitanee qamaayab huyi.is baat ka phaisala aapko karna hai.aapki beshkimtee raay ka intajaar rahega.
Jalte jalte thak gayaa thaa WO azal* se pesh-tar*.
Ik sitaaraa gir raha hai aasmaa'n se tuutkar.
Tere aa'ngan chaa'nw de , patte'n giraataa mere ghar,
Uff , hamaare darmiyaa'n me'n kisne boya ye shajar.
Shahar-e-dil me'n ab tabaahi Ke siwaa kuch bhii nahii'n,
Jisko Jo Jo chaahiye thaa le gayaa hai luutkar.
Mujhse Milne ghar to mere khair aap aaye'n nahii'n,
Haal mera puuchh Lena raah me'n milnaa agar.
Aasmaa'n ko gard karne ki tamannaa , ahamaqo'n*,
De uchhali hai hawaa me'n khaak ,WO bhi musht* bhar.
Waah waah .... Is purkashish ghazal ko chookar dil se barbas hi ye aawaaz aati hai Subhan Allah...
Jitne aala kheyaalo soch haiN usse bhi ummdah alfaazon ki Parwaaz dikhi is qalaam meiN..
Most welcome to SDC... Hope it would be wonderful time for you...
Take care and keep writing...
Waah waah .... Is purkashish ghazal ko chookar dil se barbas hi ye aawaaz aati hai Subhan Allah...
Jitne aala kheyaalo soch haiN usse bhi ummdah alfaazon ki Parwaaz dikhi is qalaam meiN..
Most welcome to SDC... Hope it would be wonderful time for you...
Take care and keep writing...
Shaad...
samir sahib,aadab.mujhe khushi hai gajal aapko pasand aayi. tariph ke liye bahut-2 shukriya.
shayri pariwaar ke sabhi sadsyo ko is nacheej ka dili istaqbaal.aap haajreen ke liye mera naam jitana nayaa hai,utanaa hi nayaa-2 main aadab ki duniya mein hoon. bahut himmat karke ek gair muraddaf gajal likhne ki koshish kee hai aur usse bhi jiyada himmat karke aapke samane rakhne kee himaakat ki hai. meri yeh koshish o himaakat kitanee qamaayab huyi.is baat ka phaisala aapko karna hai.aapki beshkimtee raay ka intajaar rahega.
Jalte jalte thak gayaa thaa WO azal* se pesh-tar*.
Ik sitaaraa gir raha hai aasmaa'n se tuutkar.
Tere aa'ngan chaa'nw de , patte'n giraataa mere ghar,
Uff , hamaare darmiyaa'n me'n kisne boya ye shajar.
Shahar-e-dil me'n ab tabaahi Ke siwaa kuch bhii nahii'n,
Jisko Jo Jo chaahiye thaa le gayaa hai luutkar.
Mujhse Milne ghar to mere khair aap aaye'n nahii'n,
Haal mera puuchh Lena raah me'n milnaa agar.
Aasmaa'n ko gard karne ki tamannaa , ahamaqo'n*,
De uchhali hai hawaa me'n khaak ,WO bhi musht* bhar.
ye ghazal 3 saal tak meree aaNkhoN se jaane kaise chhupi rahi, par behad khushi hai ki aaj is ke deedaar ho gaye, warna ek behtareen qalaam ke lutf se mehroom reh jaata main waah !! kya khoob ghazal hai !! sabhi aashaar behtareen, par aakhir ke 4 sher to aur bhi shaandaar lage mujhe !! dheron dheron daad Ufaq bhai !!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
Ufaqsaab,
waaah hi waaah nikaltii hai...... har ashaar ek se badhkar ek.....
hamaarii khushkiqmatii hi hai jo aaj yeh aalatariin ghazal hamaari nazar huii...
dilse dheroN daad-o-mubaarakbaad.....
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता