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Kab duaa me'n hamne maa'ngii thii bhalaa aisii sahar. - 12th November 2011, 11:02 AM

shayri pariwaar ke sabhi sadsyo ko is nacheej ka dili istaqbaal.aap haajreen ke liye mera naam jitana nayaa hai,utanaa hi nayaa-2 main aadab ki duniya mein hoon. bahut himmat karke ek gair muraddaf gajal likhne ki koshish kee hai aur usse bhi jiyada himmat karke aapke samane rakhne kee himaakat ki hai. meri yeh koshish o himaakat kitanee qamaayab huyi.is baat ka phaisala aapko karna hai.aapki beshkimtee raay ka intajaar rahega.


Jalte jalte thak gayaa thaa WO azal* se pesh-tar*.
Ik sitaaraa gir raha hai aasmaa'n se tuutkar.

Tere aa'ngan chaa'nw de , patte'n giraataa mere ghar,
Uff , hamaare darmiyaa'n me'n kisne boya ye shajar.

Shahar-e-dil me'n ab tabaahi Ke siwaa kuch bhii nahii'n,
Jisko Jo Jo chaahiye thaa le gayaa hai luutkar.

Mujhse Milne ghar to mere khair aap aaye'n nahii'n,
Haal mera puuchh Lena raah me'n milnaa agar.

Aasmaa'n ko gard karne ki tamannaa , ahamaqo'n*,
De uchhali hai hawaa me'n khaak ,WO bhi musht* bhar.

Paa'nw aakar rakh gayaa jaa-e-paristash* me'n koi,
Mai'n jise mandir samajhta thaa WO niklii rahguzar.

Roshnii aisii huyii Ke aa'nkh hii khultii nahii'n,
Kab duaa me'n hamne maa'ngii thii bhalaa aisii sahar.

SHE'R kyaa hai aah Goyaa* dil se niklii hai ufaq
Sab Tujhe shaair bataaye'n mai'n kahu'ngaa nauhagar*



Azal = eternity
Pesh-tar = prior to
Ahamaqo'n = stupids
Musht = handful
Jaa-e -paristash = place of worship
Goyaa = as if
Nauhagar = lamenter

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12th November 2011, 11:16 AM

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uff hamare darmayan kisne boya yeh sajar.


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12th November 2011, 08:53 PM

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Shayri.Com Parivaar MeN Aapka Haardik SwaaghaT Hai ... !

tere aangan chhanw de ,patte giraye mere ghar
uff hamare darmayan kisne boya yeh sajar.


Bahut Khoob ... Janaab ! Nice Effort !

Mubaaraqbaad !!!

Aate RaheN Aur Likhte RaheN Aage Bhii ... !

ShubhkaamnaaoN Ke Saath ... !!!

daad ke liye bahut-2 shukriya,naresh ji.mujhe kushi hai ki gajal aapko pasand aayi.
   
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12th November 2011, 08:55 PM

Waah waah .... Is purkashish ghazal ko chookar dil se barbas hi ye aawaaz aati hai Subhan Allah...
Jitne aala kheyaalo soch haiN usse bhi ummdah alfaazon ki Parwaaz dikhi is qalaam meiN..
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Waah waah .... Is purkashish ghazal ko chookar dil se barbas hi ye aawaaz aati hai Subhan Allah...
Jitne aala kheyaalo soch haiN usse bhi ummdah alfaazon ki Parwaaz dikhi is qalaam meiN..
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shayri pariwaar ke sabhi sadsyo ko is nacheej ka dili istaqbaal.aap haajreen ke liye mera naam jitana nayaa hai,utanaa hi nayaa-2 main aadab ki duniya mein hoon. bahut himmat karke ek gair muraddaf gajal likhne ki koshish kee hai aur usse bhi jiyada himmat karke aapke samane rakhne kee himaakat ki hai. meri yeh koshish o himaakat kitanee qamaayab huyi.is baat ka phaisala aapko karna hai.aapki beshkimtee raay ka intajaar rahega.


Jalte jalte thak gayaa thaa WO azal* se pesh-tar*.
Ik sitaaraa gir raha hai aasmaa'n se tuutkar.

Tere aa'ngan chaa'nw de , patte'n giraataa mere ghar,
Uff , hamaare darmiyaa'n me'n kisne boya ye shajar.

Shahar-e-dil me'n ab tabaahi Ke siwaa kuch bhii nahii'n,
Jisko Jo Jo chaahiye thaa le gayaa hai luutkar.

Mujhse Milne ghar to mere khair aap aaye'n nahii'n,
Haal mera puuchh Lena raah me'n milnaa agar.

Aasmaa'n ko gard karne ki tamannaa , ahamaqo'n*,
De uchhali hai hawaa me'n khaak ,WO bhi musht* bhar.

Paa'nw aakar rakh gayaa jaa-e-paristash* me'n koi,
Mai'n jise mandir samajhta thaa WO niklii rahguzar.

Roshnii aisii huyii Ke aa'nkh hii khultii nahii'n,
Kab duaa me'n hamne maa'ngii thii bhalaa aisii sahar.

SHE'R kyaa hai aah Goyaa* dil se niklii hai ufaq
Sab Tujhe shaair bataaye'n mai'n kahu'ngaa nauhagar*



Azal = eternity
Pesh-tar = prior to
Ahamaqo'n = stupids
Musht = handful
Jaa-e -paristash = place of worship
Goyaa = as if
Nauhagar = lamenter
Masha Allah bohat khoob ufaq sahab

sabhi ashaar laajawaab hain

ek se badhker ek

yuhi likhte rahiye




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21st July 2014, 11:21 PM

ye ghazal 3 saal tak meree aaNkhoN se jaane kaise chhupi rahi, par behad khushi hai ki aaj is ke deedaar ho gaye, warna ek behtareen qalaam ke lutf se mehroom reh jaata main waah !! kya khoob ghazal hai !! sabhi aashaar behtareen, par aakhir ke 4 sher to aur bhi shaandaar lage mujhe !! dheron dheron daad Ufaq bhai !!


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26th July 2014, 11:03 AM

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Ufaqsaab,
waaah hi waaah nikaltii hai...... har ashaar ek se badhkar ek.....
hamaarii khushkiqmatii hi hai jo aaj yeh aalatariin ghazal hamaari nazar huii...

dilse dheroN daad-o-mubaarakbaad.....



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