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23rd August 2014, 11:23 AM
SaaGar me dekhtaa hoon tumhe aur sharaab meiN,
pahraa hai tumhaara hi meree neeNd-o-khwaab meiN.
tumko khabar nahii hai dil-e-beqaraar kii,
aaye ho sitamgar tabhii, itne hijaab meiN.
Shaayad kiyaa thaa usne bhii izhaare-muhabbat,
sookhe hue se phool mile haiN kitaab meiN.
Tumko mili hain shohrateN, ruswaa kiyaa mujhe,
mujhko bahot hai zindagee khaana-kharaaab meiN.
Ab tak kisii ki yaad ne gheraa nahii mujhe,
saaqii mere baDhaa bhi de talkhii sharaaab meiN.
khushboo tumhaariii jab se ghulee hai FazaaoN meiN,
ik chaah khudkushii ki hai laakhoN Gulaab meiN.
Main Nagma-e-be-saaz-o-sadaa* ho gayaa hooN Shaad,
na lutf khushii me hai naa gham hai Azaab meiN...
(song without music and voice)
Shaad.....
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23rd August 2014, 01:47 PM
kya baat hai...
i declare myself to be your fan.
kis zamane me le gaye bhai...
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23rd August 2014, 02:18 PM
*"tumko khabar nahii hai dil-e-beqaraar kii,
aaye ho sitamgar tabhii, itne hijaab meiN.
Shaayad kiyaa thaa usne bhii izhaare-muhabbat,
sookhe hue se phool mile haiN kitaab meiN.
"*
Waah Shad bhai kya kehne aap ke ..uupar wale do ashar bahut pasand aye..
sanjay sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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23rd August 2014, 06:34 PM
wwwwwwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhh
bilkul ghazab dhaatee huwee kamaal barsaatee huwee ghazal hai Shaad mere yaar !!! jhoom ke mast bhi karti hai, dil ko tatol bhi jaatee hai, zehn ko sochne ka saamaan bhi de jaatee hai!! Gehree fiqr ko kis rindaana andaaz mein pesh kiya hai .... ki aisa lutf paida kiya ki bas mat poochho !! sabhi aashaar naayaab aur qaabil e daad ... aur matla aur maqta to zameen ke naheen hain seedhe aasmaan se utre hain !!
anginat beshumaar daad Shaad bhai aap ko !!!!!!!!!!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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23rd August 2014, 07:10 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Saagar me dekhtaa hoon tumhe aur sharaab meiN,
pahraa hai tumhaara hi meree neeNd-o-khwaab meiN.
tumko khabar nahii hai dil-e-beqaraar kii,
aaye ho sitamgar tabhii, itne hijaab meiN.
bahut achchey ....achcha sher hai..bahut achcha sher hai
Shaayad kiyaa thaa usne bhii izhaare-muhabbat,
sookhe hue se phool mile haiN kitaab meiN.
ahaaa....kyaa kah diyaa..umda....aala
Tumko mili hain shohrateN, ruswaa kiyaa mujhe,
mujhko bahot hai zindagee khaana-kharaaab meiN.
Ab tak kisii ki yaad ne gheraa nahii mujhe,
saaqii mere baDhaa bhi de talkhii sharaaab meiN.
bahut khoob.....aksar sharaab yaad bhulaane Ke liye peete hai log...aap kuch naya karne Ka iraada rakhte hai...daad........ise kahate hai mauzoo e aafrini...shaayad besh shuraa ko ehsaas bhi na ho lekin ye bait ul ghazal hai.
khushboo tumhaariii jab se ghulee hai FazaaoN meiN,
ik chaah khudkushii ki hai laakhoN Gulaab meiN.
Main Nagma-e-be-saaz-o-sadaa* ho gayaa hooN Shaad,
na lutf khushii me hai naa gham hai Azaab meiN...
khoob kahaa...behatreen maqta...
(song without music and voice)
Shaad.....
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...........shaayad ki aapko ehsaas na ho main ghazal par comment nahi De raha hu....aapne mujhe majboor kar diya ..comment dene Ke liye
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23rd August 2014, 07:45 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Saagar me dekhtaa hoon tumhe aur sharaab meiN,
pahraa hai tumhaara hi meree neeNd-o-khwaab meiN.
tumko khabar nahii hai dil-e-beqaraar kii,
aaye ho sitamgar tabhii, itne hijaab meiN.
Shaayad kiyaa thaa usne bhii izhaare-muhabbat,
sookhe hue se phool mile haiN kitaab meiN.
Tumko mili hain shohrateN, ruswaa kiyaa mujhe,
mujhko bahot hai zindagee khaana-kharaaab meiN.
Ab tak kisii ki yaad ne gheraa nahii mujhe,
saaqii mere baDhaa bhi de talkhii sharaaab meiN.
khushboo tumhaariii jab se ghulee hai FazaaoN meiN,
ik chaah khudkushii ki hai laakhoN Gulaab meiN.
Main Nagma-e-be-saaz-o-sadaa* ho gayaa hooN Shaad,
na lutf khushii me hai naa gham hai Azaab meiN...
(song without music and voice)
Shaad.....
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wah sameer saheb wah.. bhai kya khubsurat gazal h.. aap ko pata h maine apki kayi rachnaaye padhi hai or aapki har nayi peshkash ka besabri se intzaar karta hu or haa aapne kabhi bhi mere intzaar ko zaayaa hone nahi diya.. aapko bahut mubarakbaad..
Mujse ab Shayriya nahi hoti,
mujhe Lafzo ne maar dala hai...nm
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23rd August 2014, 10:46 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Saagar me dekhtaa hoon tumhe aur sharaab meiN,
pahraa hai tumhaara hi meree neeNd-o-khwaab meiN.
tumko khabar nahii hai dil-e-beqaraar kii,
aaye ho sitamgar tabhii, itne hijaab meiN.
Shaayad kiyaa thaa usne bhii izhaare-muhabbat,
sookhe hue se phool mile haiN kitaab meiN.
Tumko mili hain shohrateN, ruswaa kiyaa mujhe,
mujhko bahot hai zindagee khaana-kharaaab meiN.
Ab tak kisii ki yaad ne gheraa nahii mujhe,
saaqii mere baDhaa bhi de talkhii sharaaab meiN.
khushboo tumhaariii jab se ghulee hai FazaaoN meiN,
ik chaah khudkushii ki hai laakhoN Gulaab meiN.
Main Nagma-e-be-saaz-o-sadaa* ho gayaa hooN Shaad,
na lutf khushii me hai naa gham hai Azaab meiN...
(song without music and voice)
Shaad.....
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Waah shaad ji lazwaab.....bahut hi khoobsurat. .baar baar padne ka dil hota hai....
Bahut mubarak apko..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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23rd August 2014, 11:31 PM
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Saagar me dekhtaa hoon tumhe aur sharaab meiN,
pahraa hai tumhaara hi meree neeNd-o-khwaab meiN.
tumko khabar nahii hai dil-e-beqaraar kii,
aaye ho sitamgar tabhii, itne hijaab meiN.
Shaayad kiyaa thaa usne bhii izhaare-muhabbat,
sookhe hue se phool mile haiN kitaab meiN.
Tumko mili hain shohrateN, ruswaa kiyaa mujhe,
mujhko bahot hai zindagee khaana-kharaaab meiN.
Ab tak kisii ki yaad ne gheraa nahii mujhe,
saaqii mere baDhaa bhi de talkhii sharaaab meiN.
khushboo tumhaariii jab se ghulee hai FazaaoN meiN,
ik chaah khudkushii ki hai laakhoN Gulaab meiN.
Main Nagma-e-be-saaz-o-sadaa* ho gayaa hooN Shaad,
na lutf khushii me hai naa gham hai Azaab meiN...
(song without music and voice)
Shaad.....
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24th August 2014, 06:29 AM
bahut hee khoobsurat ghazal hai shoiab bhai......saare aashaar dil me utar gaye......aap jab bhi likhte ho kamaal likhte ho.....daad kubul kare...
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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24th August 2014, 03:52 PM
As Salaam Alaikm Shaad bhaee!! Sub'haanAllah!
Aapki is aalatareen ghazal nay mahfil loot lee kahoon tou baat waqayee mayn chhotee hogi!! Har ik Misra, Satar wa shayr pur-lutf pur suroor!! C on g r a t u l a t i o n s! Janaab! Dhayroan daad wasool karayn!!! Dua haye Rab say ..ho Zor e Qalm Aur bheeeeee zyaaadaa!!
Duago
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24th August 2014, 07:48 PM
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kya baat hai...
i declare myself to be your fan.
kis zamane me le gaye bhai...
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aapki laakh darja inaayat aur muhaaabat ne mujhe mashkoor kiyaa hai bhai.....
aap aisi baaaten karke hame sharmindah mmat kereN..... ham aap jaise aalaa shoraaaon se hi ilm ki chahat poori karte hain.... behad shukrguzaaar hoon aaapka zidd saahab...... tashreef laaate rahiyega
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24th August 2014, 09:23 PM
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SaaGar me dekhtaa hoon tumhe aur sharaab meiN,
pahraa hai tumhaara hi meree neeNd-o-khwaab meiN.
tumko khabar nahii hai dil-e-beqaraar kii,
aaye ho sitamgar tabhii, itne hijaab meiN.
Shaayad kiyaa thaa usne bhii izhaare-muhabbat,
sookhe hue se phool mile haiN kitaab meiN.
Tumko mili hain shohrateN, ruswaa kiyaa mujhe,
mujhko bahot hai zindagee khaana-kharaaab meiN.
Ab tak kisii ki yaad ne gheraa nahii mujhe,
saaqii mere baDhaa bhi de talkhii sharaaab meiN.
khushboo tumhaariii jab se ghulee hai FazaaoN meiN,
ik chaah khudkushii ki hai laakhoN Gulaab meiN.
Main Nagma-e-be-saaz-o-sadaa* ho gayaa hooN Shaad,
na lutf khushii me hai naa gham hai Azaab meiN...
(song without music and voice)
Shaad.....
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Masha Allah bohat khoob shaad sahab. ...
sabhi ashaar laajawaab hain. .totally agree with zarraa sahab...
reps added. ..+++......
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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25th August 2014, 02:54 PM
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*"tumko khabar nahii hai dil-e-beqaraar kii,
aaye ho sitamgar tabhii, itne hijaab meiN.
Shaayad kiyaa thaa usne bhii izhaare-muhabbat,
sookhe hue se phool mile haiN kitaab meiN.
"*
Waah Shad bhai kya kehne aap ke ..uupar wale do ashar bahut pasand aye..
sanjay sehgal
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aapka behad shukrguzaar hoon sanjay saahab...... jaan kar mere dil ko bahot sukoon pahochaa ke aapne is par nazar farmaayee.... tashreef laate rahen aage bhi aur apna saath aur pyaara banaae rakkhen.... shukriyaa
Shaad......
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25th August 2014, 03:47 PM
Shoaibbhai,
behad khubsurat ghazal...
hamne iise FB pe padhi tabhii uspe dil aa gayaa...
bahot khub. dilse dheroN daad aur duaaeN
Adil
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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25th August 2014, 08:38 PM
bahut khoob likha hai shaad bhai
dili daad
radhe radhe
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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25th August 2014, 11:16 PM
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SaaGar me dekhtaa hoon tumhe aur sharaab meiN,
pahraa hai tumhaara hi meree neeNd-o-khwaab meiN.
tumko khabar nahii hai dil-e-beqaraar kii,
aaye ho sitamgar tabhii, itne hijaab meiN.
Shaayad kiyaa thaa usne bhii izhaare-muhabbat,
sookhe hue se phool mile haiN kitaab meiN.
Tumko mili hain shohrateN, ruswaa kiyaa mujhe,
mujhko bahot hai zindagee khaana-kharaaab meiN.
Ab tak kisii ki yaad ne gheraa nahii mujhe,
saaqii mere baDhaa bhi de talkhii sharaaab meiN.
khushboo tumhaariii jab se ghulee hai FazaaoN meiN,
ik chaah khudkushii ki hai laakhoN Gulaab meiN.
Main Nagma-e-be-saaz-o-sadaa* ho gayaa hooN Shaad,
na lutf khushii me hai naa gham hai Azaab meiN...
(song without music and voice)
Shaad.....
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wahhhhh....................bahut umda likha hai Shaad Bhai
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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26th August 2014, 10:25 AM
Hamesha ki Tarha Behtreen janab Saad sahab....
आँखों में चन्द ख्वाब थे , वो भी नहीं रहे
काँटों में कुछ गुलाब थे ,वो भी नहीं रहे
ऐसा अँधेरा छा गया मेरी निगाह में
अश्कों के आफ़ताब थे ,वो भी नहीं रहे
sahaab .
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27th August 2014, 01:12 PM
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wwwwwwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhh
bilkul ghazab dhaatee huwee kamaal barsaatee huwee ghazal hai Shaad mere yaar !!! jhoom ke mast bhi karti hai, dil ko tatol bhi jaatee hai, zehn ko sochne ka saamaan bhi de jaatee hai!! Gehree fiqr ko kis rindaana andaaz mein pesh kiya hai .... ki aisa lutf paida kiya ki bas mat poochho !! sabhi aashaar naayaab aur qaabil e daad ... aur matla aur maqta to zameen ke naheen hain seedhe aasmaan se utre hain !!
anginat beshumaar daad Shaad bhai aap ko !!!!!!!!!!
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aapki is darjaa muhabbat aur beshumaar khuloos ne mujhe aapka karzdaar banaa diyaa hai mere bhai.... meri khushnaseebii hai jo aise adnaa se kalaam ko khaas bana diyaa hai apni daad peshh kar...... ummeed hai aage bhi aapka saath yunhi miltaa rahegaa...... khush rahen...
Shaad.....
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27th August 2014, 01:16 PM
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...........shaayad ki aapko ehsaas na ho main ghazal par comment nahi De raha hu....aapne mujhe majboor kar diya ..comment dene Ke liye
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ufaq saahab awwall to bazm me aapka tahe dil se istaqbaal karta hu main...
baad iske ye kkahna chahungaa ke mujhe khoob ehsaas hai ke aap aajkal bahot kam shirqat farmaa hain SDC ki bazmoN me..... aur yaqeen maniye yaqeen ke baahar ki baat hai jo aapko mujood paa raha hoon is adnaa se kalaam me.....
aap jise majbuuri kah rahe hain wo mere liye khushnaseebii hai bhai.... aapka lafz lafz duaaon ki tarah utar raha hai mujh par..... Allaah aapko hifaazat me rakkhe.... shaad rahen aabaad rahen..
aaidah bhi tashhreef laate rahen...
Shaad....
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27th August 2014, 01:19 PM
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wah sameer saheb wah.. bhai kya khubsurat gazal h.. aap ko pata h maine apki kayi rachnaaye padhi hai or aapki har nayi peshkash ka besabri se intzaar karta hu or haa aapne kabhi bhi mere intzaar ko zaayaa hone nahi diya.. aapko bahut mubarakbaad..
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bahot mashkoor hoon aapka mere bhai...... tahe dil se shukriyaa pesh kiyaa hai qubool farmaaiyega..... aage bhi aamad banaae rakhiyega apni... aate rahiyega
Shaad.....
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27th August 2014, 03:36 PM
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bahot mashkoor hoon aapka mere bhai...... tahe dil se shukriyaa pesh kiyaa hai qubool farmaaiyega..... aage bhi aamad banaae rakhiyega apni... aate rahiyega
Shaad.....
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qubool ki shaad shaheb.. aap yu hi likhte rahe aapke chahne wale yu hi aate rahenge.. apna khyal rakhe..
Mujse ab Shayriya nahi hoti,
mujhe Lafzo ne maar dala hai...nm
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