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mujhe sataati hai teree judaayi har lamha -
16th November 2010, 08:07 AM
aadaab yaaraane mahfil
aaj yahaan eid hai ajeeb si dil ki haalat ho rahee hai usee kaifiyat ki ek taazah ghazal shaayad aap ko pasand aaye meree tarf se tamaam chaahne waalon ko eid mobaarak
mujhe sataati hai teree judaayi har lamha
meraa naseeb teree kaj adaayi har lamha
kaj adaayi ….. munh pherne ki adaa ... lamha ...... pal
merey wajood pe gar che ghamon ki hai yurish
merey khayaal me kangan kalaayi har lamha
yurish…… hamlah
merey sho”oor ko ban ban ke naag dastee hai
wo teri saanson ki ouqdah kushaayi har lamha
so”oor ………ehsaas
ougdah kushaayi ….. gaanth (girah )kholnaa
ai kaash aaye koi din meree bhi qismat me
labon ki howe labon tak rasaayi har lamha
lab … lips ,,,,,,,,, rasaayi …….. pahonch
kabhi to gaisuye khamdaar the kabhi aariz
jo yaad aayi to saoghaat laayi har lamha
gaisuye khamdaar ….. lahraati zulf
aariz ….. gaal
tumhen jo sochun to dhadkan thehar si jaati hai
hai merey saath meree ye kamaayi har lamha
kabhi to darde jigar thaa kabhi hesaar e gham
nawaaderaat se mahfil sajaayi har lamha
hesaare gham …. Ghamon ka gheraa
nawaaderaat …… anmol cheezen
zaraa si baat pe Hassaas ho gaye barham ?
zaraa si baat pe itnee dohaayi har lamha ?
barham ……. Gussa
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16th November 2010, 08:35 AM
tumhen jo sochun to dhadkan thehar si jaati hai
hai merey saath meree ye kamaayi har lamha
kabhi to darde jigar thaa kabhi hesaar e gham
nawaaderaat se mahfil sajaayi har lamha
zaraa si baat pe Hassaas ho gaye barham ?
zaraa si baat pe itnee dohaayi har lamha ?
Bahut Hi Umdaa Khayal Rahe ... Masood Sahab !
Tamaam Ghazal Ke Ashaar Qabile Taareef kahe jayenge ... bahut accha likha hai aapne... Tahe dil se daad hazir hai ..
yunhi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...
duaaon ke saath ...
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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16th November 2010, 10:48 AM
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tumhen jo sochun to dhadkan thehar si jaati hai
hai merey saath meree ye kamaayi har lamha
kabhi to darde jigar thaa kabhi hesaar e gham
nawaaderaat se mahfil sajaayi har lamha
zaraa si baat pe Hassaas ho gaye barham ?
zaraa si baat pe itnee dohaayi har lamha ?
Bahut Hi Umdaa Khayal Rahe ... Masood Sahab !
Tamaam Ghazal Ke Ashaar Qabile Taareef kahe jayenge ... bahut accha likha hai aapne... Tahe dil se daad hazir hai ..
yunhi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...
duaaon ke saath ...
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aadaab
naresh saahab
aap jaise sukhan daan sukhan fahm sukhan shanaash sukhan war ke qalam se daad ka milnaa aashirwaad se kam nahi ham khush naseem hain ki aap jaise buzurgon ki chhatr chhaaya me pal rahe hain main tahe dil se aapke kholoos ka shukriya adaa kartaa hun
haan jin ashaar ko aap ne pasand kiyaa hai taqreeban wahi meree bhi pasand hain
mukhlis
masood hassaas
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16th November 2010, 12:10 PM
bahut khoob.........................................
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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16th November 2010, 08:34 PM
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aadaab yaaraane mahfil
aaj yahaan eid hai ajeeb si dil ki haalat ho rahee hai usee kaifiyat ki ek taazah ghazal shaayad aap ko pasand aaye meree tarf se tamaam chaahne waalon ko eid mobaarak
mujhe sataati hai teree judaayi har lamha
meraa naseeb teree kaj adaayi har lamha
kaj adaayi ….. munh pherne ki adaa ... lamha ...... pal
merey wajood pe gar che ghamon ki hai yurish
merey khayaal me kangan kalaayi har lamha
yurish…… hamlah
merey sho”oor ko ban ban ke naag dastee hai
wo teri saanson ki ouqdah kushaayi har lamha
so”oor ………ehsaas
ougdah kushaayi ….. gaanth (girah )kholnaa
ai kaash aaye koi din meree bhi qismat me
labon ki howe labon tak rasaayi har lamha
lab … lips ,,,,,,,,, rasaayi …….. pahonch
kabhi to gaisuye khamdaar the kabhi aariz
jo yaad aayi to saoghaat laayi har lamha
gaisuye khamdaar ….. lahraati zulf
aariz ….. gaal
tumhen jo sochun to dhadkan thehar si jaati hai
hai merey saath meree ye kamaayi har lamha
kabhi to darde jigar thaa kabhi hesaar e gham
nawaaderaat se mahfil sajaayi har lamha
hesaare gham …. Ghamon ka gheraa
nawaaderaat …… anmol cheezen
zaraa si baat pe Hassaas ho gaye barham ?
zaraa si baat pe itnee dohaayi har lamha ?
barham ……. Gussa
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Hassaas sahab,
sabse pehle ... aapko aur aapke pure pariwaar ko LAMHA ki aur se Eid ki bahut bahut bahut mubarakbaad......
rahi baat aapke kalaam ki..... to kya kehna aapka ! aapki kalam to har baar ghazab dhaati hai... aapki kalam se nikla har lafz jaise koi jaadu sa kar jata hai... ye kalaam be-shaq kaabil-e-tarif hai.... dilse daad hazir hai janab.... yuhi is mehfil ko roshan rakhiye.... khush rahiye.....
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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17th November 2010, 02:25 AM
[QUOTE=ISHK EK IBADAT;415627]bahut khoob.........................................
bahot shukriya janaab aap kaa
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17th November 2010, 02:28 AM
aadaab
lamha saahibah
khudaa barkaton se nawaaze
aap ke alfaaz soroor bakhsh hote hain jin se roonaroo hone ke baad ehsaas ke athaah samundar me sokoon ki kaifiyat paidaa ho jaatee hai
aap jis khollos se nawaaztee hain wo bhi taqreeban aaj kal naa paid hotaa jaa rahaa hai
allah aap ko oumre khizr ataa kare
doa go
masood hassaas
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17th November 2010, 03:42 PM
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Originally Posted by masoodhassas
aadaab yaaraane mahfil
aaj yahaan eid hai ajeeb si dil ki haalat ho rahee hai usee kaifiyat ki ek taazah ghazal shaayad aap ko pasand aaye meree tarf se tamaam chaahne waalon ko eid mobaarak
mujhe sataati hai teree judaayi har lamha
meraa naseeb teree kaj adaayi har lamha
kaj adaayi ….. munh pherne ki adaa ... lamha ...... pal
merey wajood pe gar che ghamon ki hai yurish
merey khayaal me kangan kalaayi har lamha
yurish…… hamlah
merey sho”oor ko ban ban ke naag dastee hai
wo teri saanson ki ouqdah kushaayi har lamha
so”oor ………ehsaas
ougdah kushaayi ….. gaanth (girah )kholnaa
ai kaash aaye koi din meree bhi qismat me
labon ki howe labon tak rasaayi har lamha
lab … lips ,,,,,,,,, rasaayi …….. pahonch
kabhi to gaisuye khamdaar the kabhi aariz
jo yaad aayi to saoghaat laayi har lamha
gaisuye khamdaar ….. lahraati zulf
aariz ….. gaal
tumhen jo sochun to dhadkan thehar si jaati hai
hai merey saath meree ye kamaayi har lamha
kabhi to darde jigar thaa kabhi hesaar e gham
nawaaderaat se mahfil sajaayi har lamha
hesaare gham …. Ghamon ka gheraa
nawaaderaat …… anmol cheezen
zaraa si baat pe Hassaas ho gaye barham ?
zaraa si baat pe itnee dohaayi har lamha ?
barham ……. Gussa
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ji very nice creation................................
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
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17th November 2010, 04:08 PM
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ji very nice creation................................
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aadaab
aap ka behad shukriyah
masood hassaas
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26th November 2010, 01:03 AM
masood bhai aadab ,,
apki ik ghazal se mustafeed howa hi tha ke .. is shandar ghazal ne apne hisar me le liya ....bhai yaar kya kaha jaaye ......apki shaan khuch kaha jaaye aise koi lafz nahi gareeb ke paas ...bus itna kahe sakta hun ke ap is fun ke ustad maloom padte ho ..allah apko mazeed barkaton se nawaze bhai ...kaunse sher ki tareef ki jaye ......ghazal kya hai gazab hai gazab ...allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ...
dad o mubarak khubool kijiye ...
reps added ....ye reps ka majra aaj hi pata chala sahab ....to suncha issi shandar ghazal se aghaz kiya jaye ..
talib e ilm
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27th November 2010, 06:46 AM
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masood bhai aadab ,,
apki ik ghazal se mustafeed howa hi tha ke .. is shandar ghazal ne apne hisar me le liya ....bhai yaar kya kaha jaaye ......apki shaan khuch kaha jaaye aise koi lafz nahi gareeb ke paas ...bus itna kahe sakta hun ke ap is fun ke ustad maloom padte ho ..allah apko mazeed barkaton se nawaze bhai ...kaunse sher ki tareef ki jaye ......ghazal kya hai gazab hai gazab ...allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ...
dad o mubarak khubool kijiye ...
reps added ....ye reps ka majra aaj hi pata chala sahab ....to suncha issi shandar ghazal se aghaz kiya jaye ..
talib e ilm
qadeertoopchi
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aadab
janaab kaise hain kiyaa ho raha hai
aap ki daad qabool ki gayee janaab aapne jis andaaz me daad dihai bhalaa kiyaa majaal ki aap ki daad dil se na wasool ki jaaye
aap mukhlis hain aor aise doston ka kal para huwa hai aise me aap ka mil jana dame ghaneemat hai
apnaa khiyaal rakhiye gaa doa me yaad rakhiye ga
masood hassaas
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28th November 2010, 08:21 PM
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aadaab yaaraane mahfil
aaj yahaan eid hai ajeeb si dil ki haalat ho rahee hai usee kaifiyat ki ek taazah ghazal shaayad aap ko pasand aaye meree tarf se tamaam chaahne waalon ko eid mobaarak
mujhe sataati hai teree judaayi har lamha
meraa naseeb teree kaj adaayi har lamha
kaj adaayi ….. munh pherne ki adaa ... lamha ...... pal
merey wajood pe gar che ghamon ki hai yurish
merey khayaal me kangan kalaayi har lamha
yurish…… hamlah
merey sho”oor ko ban ban ke naag dastee hai
wo teri saanson ki ouqdah kushaayi har lamha
so”oor ………ehsaas
ougdah kushaayi ….. gaanth (girah )kholnaa
ai kaash aaye koi din meree bhi qismat me
labon ki howe labon tak rasaayi har lamha
lab … lips ,,,,,,,,, rasaayi …….. pahonch
kabhi to gaisuye khamdaar the kabhi aariz
jo yaad aayi to saoghaat laayi har lamha
gaisuye khamdaar ….. lahraati zulf
aariz ….. gaal
tumhen jo sochun to dhadkan thehar si jaati hai
hai merey saath meree ye kamaayi har lamha
kabhi to darde jigar thaa kabhi hesaar e gham
nawaaderaat se mahfil sajaayi har lamha
hesaare gham …. Ghamon ka gheraa
nawaaderaat …… anmol cheezen
zaraa si baat pe Hassaas ho gaye barham ?
zaraa si baat pe itnee dohaayi har lamha ?
barham ……. Gussa
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Masood sahaab kya kehne..waahh..daad..is tarah ke ehsaas likh paana bahot mushkil hota hai mere hisaab se..
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gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai?
musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai?
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30th November 2010, 06:14 PM
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Masood sahaab kya kehne..waahh..daad..is tarah ke ehsaas likh paana bahot mushkil hota hai mere hisaab se..
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aadaab
bas janaab aapjaise logon ki doaayen hain jo itnaa yahaan pe peyar mil raha hai aor yahi mohabbat hi khiyaalaat janam de rahi hai
main shukr guzaar ap ke is khoobsoorat lafzon ka
mukhlis
masood hassaas
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15th September 2014, 01:23 PM
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Originally Posted by masoodhassas
aadaab yaaraane mahfil
aaj yahaan eid hai ajeeb si dil ki haalat ho rahee hai usee kaifiyat ki ek taazah ghazal shaayad aap ko pasand aaye meree tarf se tamaam chaahne waalon ko eid mobaarak
mujhe sataati hai teree judaayi har lamha
meraa naseeb teree kaj adaayi har lamha
kaj adaayi ….. munh pherne ki adaa ... lamha ...... pal
merey wajood pe gar che ghamon ki hai yurish
merey khayaal me kangan kalaayi har lamha
yurish…… hamlah
merey sho”oor ko ban ban ke naag dastee hai
wo teri saanson ki ouqdah kushaayi har lamha
so”oor ………ehsaas
ougdah kushaayi ….. gaanth (girah )kholnaa
ai kaash aaye koi din meree bhi qismat me
labon ki howe labon tak rasaayi har lamha
lab … lips ,,,,,,,,, rasaayi …….. pahonch
kabhi to gaisuye khamdaar the kabhi aariz
jo yaad aayi to saoghaat laayi har lamha
gaisuye khamdaar ….. lahraati zulf
aariz ….. gaal
tumhen jo sochun to dhadkan thehar si jaati hai
hai merey saath meree ye kamaayi har lamha
kabhi to darde jigar thaa kabhi hesaar e gham
nawaaderaat se mahfil sajaayi har lamha
hesaare gham …. Ghamon ka gheraa
nawaaderaat …… anmol cheezen
zaraa si baat pe Hassaas ho gaye barham ?
zaraa si baat pe itnee dohaayi har lamha ?
barham ……. Gussa
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Masha Allah bohat khoob Hassas sahab. ..aaj achanak nazar padi aapki ghazal per. ..
waqay dil ko chu gaye sabhi ashaar. ..
waise kahaan ghayab hain aap aajkal?
Aate rahiye...khush rahiyr
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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15th September 2014, 01:29 PM
merey sho”oor ko ban ban ke naag dastee hai
wo teri saanson ki ouqdah kushaayi har lamha
Masood saheb..
Adaab-o-tasleemaat,
Waahhh! wahh! wahh!.. meHfil meiN aap ki ghazal dard ka aik samandar
le kar aati hai..... aur sabhi ko uss meN na chahte hue bhi doobna paRta hai..
kia kehne saheb.... bohat aala-darjay ka kalaam pesh kiya hai...
dherooN daad is nayaab ghazal ke liye....
meHfil meiN aap ki waapisi ka intezaar rahe ga,
DuaooN ke saath,
Khaaksaar,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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16th September 2014, 12:11 PM
Wah Hassas Sb.
Kya baat hai
Is damdaar Ghazal ke liye dil se mubarakbaad qubool farmayiye.
Mujeeb Parwaaz
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17th September 2014, 05:10 PM
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Originally Posted by masoodhassas
aadaab yaaraane mahfil
aaj yahaan eid hai ajeeb si dil ki haalat ho rahee hai usee kaifiyat ki ek taazah ghazal shaayad aap ko pasand aaye meree tarf se tamaam chaahne waalon ko eid mobaarak
mujhe sataati hai teree judaayi har lamha
meraa naseeb teree kaj adaayi har lamha
kaj adaayi ….. munh pherne ki adaa ... lamha ...... pal
merey wajood pe gar che ghamon ki hai yurish
merey khayaal me kangan kalaayi har lamha
yurish…… hamlah
merey sho”oor ko ban ban ke naag dastee hai
wo teri saanson ki ouqdah kushaayi har lamha
so”oor ………ehsaas
ougdah kushaayi ….. gaanth (girah )kholnaa
ai kaash aaye koi din meree bhi qismat me
labon ki howe labon tak rasaayi har lamha
lab … lips ,,,,,,,,, rasaayi …….. pahonch
kabhi to gaisuye khamdaar the kabhi aariz
jo yaad aayi to saoghaat laayi har lamha
gaisuye khamdaar ….. lahraati zulf
aariz ….. gaal
tumhen jo sochun to dhadkan thehar si jaati hai
hai merey saath meree ye kamaayi har lamha
kabhi to darde jigar thaa kabhi hesaar e gham
nawaaderaat se mahfil sajaayi har lamha
hesaare gham …. Ghamon ka gheraa
nawaaderaat …… anmol cheezen
zaraa si baat pe Hassaas ho gaye barham ?
zaraa si baat pe itnee dohaayi har lamha ?
barham ……. Gussa
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bahut khoobsurat ehsaas.....dil se pasand aaye sabhi ashiyaar.
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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18th September 2014, 09:54 PM
Qawaafi ka aisa istemaal.....zauq sahib ki yaad Aa gayii......shukria mohatram.
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